The Window on the Hill

Madison Julius Cawein (1865–1914) · 1911

iambic tetrameter · ABBAB · 20 lines · from Poems

Among the fields the camomileSeems blown mist in the lightning's glare:Cool, rainy odors drench the air;Night speaks above; the angry smileOf storm within her stare.

The way that I shall take to-nightIs through the wood whose branches fillThe road with double darkness, till,Between the boughs, a window's lightShines out upon the hill.

The fence; and then the path that goesAround a trailer-tangled rock,Through puckered pink and hollyhock,Unto a latch-gate's unkempt rose,And door whereat I knock.

Bright on the oldtime flower placeThe lamp streams through the foggy pane;The door is opened to the rain:And in the door--her happy faceAnd outstretched arms again.

Words in this poem

glare v. i.
To shine with a bright, dazzling light. [OE. glaren, gloren; cf. AS. glær amber, LG. glaren to glow or burn like coals, D. gloren to glimmer; prob. akin to E. glass.]
angry a.
Troublesome; vexatious; rigorous. [See Anger.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
hollyhock n.
A species of Althæa (A. rosea), bearing flowers of various colors; -- called also rose mallow. [OE. holihoc; holi holy + hoc mallow, AS. hoc; cf. W. hocys mallows, hocys bendigaid hollyhock, lit., blessed mallow. Prob. so named because brought from the Hol]
unkempt a.
Not combed; disheveled; as, an urchin with unkempt hair. [Pref. un- not + kempt, p. p. of kemb.]
whereat adv.
At which; upon which; whereupon; -- used relatively.
pane n.
The narrow edge of a hammer head. See Peen. [F. panne.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Window on the Hill is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #7796; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Madison Julius Cawein, The Window on the Hill, in Poems (1911), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #7796, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/cawein-poems/the-window-on-the-hill.html, id L10905.

Form and metre

The Window on the Hill is 20 lines in 4 stanzas of 5 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABBAB, complete in 3 of its 4 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%). 100% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.7 syllables. 40% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -AA-A camomile · glareA · airA · smile · stareA
  2. 2 ABBAB nightA · fillB · tillB · lightA · hillB
  3. 3 ABBAB goesA · rockB · hollyhockB · roseA · knockB
  4. 4 ABBAB placeA · paneB · rainB · faceA · againB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Among the fields the camomile9·········
Seems blown mist in the lightning's glare:8·····/˘·
Cool, rainy odors drench the air;8·/˘/˘···
Night speaks above; the angry smile8·····/˘·
Of storm within her stare.6······
The way that I shall take to-night8········
Is through the wood whose branches fill8·····/˘·
The road with double darkness, till,8···/˘/˘·
Between the boughs, a window's light8·····/˘·
Shines out upon the hill.6······
The fence; and then the path that goes8········
Around a trailer-tangled rock,8···/˘/˘·
Through puckered pink and hollyhock,8·/˘··/˘·
Unto a latch-gate's unkempt rose,8·····˘/·
And door whereat I knock.6··˘/··
Bright on the oldtime flower place8·····/˘·
The lamp streams through the foggy pane;8·····/˘·
The door is opened to the rain:8···/˘···
And in the door--her happy face8·····/˘·
And outstretched arms again.7·˘/˘·˘/

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