Phantoms

Madison Julius Cawein (1865–1914) · 1911

iambic pentameter · ABABB · 35 lines · from Poems

This was her home; one mossy gable thrustAbove the cedars and the locust trees:This was her home, whose beauty now is dust,A lonely memory for melodiesThe wild birds sing, the wild birds and the bees.

Here every evening is a prayer: no boastOr ruin of sunset makes the wan world wroth;Here, through the twilight, like a pale flower's ghost,A drowsy flutter, flies the tiger-moth;And dusk spreads darkness like a dewy cloth.

In vagabond velvet, on the placid day,A stain of crimson, lolls the butterfly;The south wind sows with ripple and with rayThe pleasant waters; and the gentle skyLooks on the homestead like a quiet eye.

Their melancholy quaver, lone and low,When day is done, the gray tree-toads repeat:The whippoorwills, far in the afterglow,Complain to silence: and the lightnings beat,In one still cloud, glimmers of golden heat.

He comes not yet: not till the dusk is dead,And all the western glow is far withdrawn;Not till,--a sleepy mouth love's kiss makes red,--The baby bud opes in a rosy yawn,Breathing sweet guesses at the dreamed-of dawn.

When in the shadows, like a rain of gold,The fireflies stream steadily; and brightAlong the moss the glowworm, as of old,A crawling sparkle--like a crooked lightIn smoldering vellum--scrawls a square of night,--

Then will he come; and she will lean to him,--She,--the sweet phantom,--memory of that place,--Between the starlight and his eyes; so dimWith suave control and soul-compelling grace,He cannot help but speak her, face to face.

Words in this poem

gable n.
A cable. Chapman.
wroth a.
Full of wrath; angry; incensed; much exasperated; wrathful. [OE. wroth, wrap, AS. wraedh wroth, crooked, bad; akin to wriedhan to writhe, and to OS. wreedhangry, D. wreed cruel, OHG. reid twisted, Icel. reiedhr angry, Dan]
ghost n.
The spirit; the soul of man. [OE. gast, gost, soul, spirit, AS. gast breath, spirit, soul; akin to OS. g spirit, soul, D. geest, G. geist, and prob. to E. gaze, ghastly.]
placid a.
Pleased; contented; unruffied; undisturbed; serene; peaceful; tranquil; quiet; gentle. [L. placidus, originally, pleasing, mild, from placere to please: cf. F. placide. See Please.]
lone n.
A lane. See Loanin.
glowworm n.
A coleopterous insect of the genus Lampyris; esp., the wingless females and larvæ of the two European species (L. noctiluca, and L.
starlight n.
The light given by the stars.
suave a.
Sweet; pleasant; delightful; gracious or agreeable in manner; bland. [L. suavis sweet, pleasant: cf. F. suave. See Sweet, and cf. Suasion.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Phantoms is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #7796; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Madison Julius Cawein, Phantoms, in Poems (1911), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #7796, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/cawein-poems/phantoms.html, id L10910.

Form and metre

Phantoms is 35 lines in 7 stanzas of 5 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABABB. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%). 95% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.9 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 23% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABB thrustA · treesB · dustA · melodiesB · beesB
  2. 2 ABABB boastA · wrothB · ghostA · mothB · clothB
  3. 3 ABABB dayA · butterflyB · rayA · skyB · eyeB
  4. 4 ABABB lowA · repeatB · afterglowA · beatB · heatB
  5. 5 ABABB deadA · withdrawnB · redA · yawnB · dawnB
  6. 6 ABABB goldA · brightB · oldA · lightB · nightB
  7. 7 ABABB himA · placeB · dimA · graceB · faceB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
This was her home; one mossy gable thrust10·····/˘/˘·
Above the cedars and the locust trees:10···/˘··/˘·
This was her home, whose beauty now is dust,10·····/˘···
A lonely memory for melodies9·/˘/˘·/˘˘
The wild birds sing, the wild birds and the bees.10··········
Here every evening is a prayer: no boast10·/˘/˘·····
Or ruin of sunset makes the wan world wroth;10·/·/······
Here, through the twilight, like a pale flower's ghost,10···/····/·
A drowsy flutter, flies the tiger-moth;9·/˘/˘··/·
And dusk spreads darkness like a dewy cloth.10···/˘··/˘·
In vagabond velvet, on the placid day,10·/˘/˘··/˘·
A stain of crimson, lolls the butterfly;10···/˘··/˘·
The south wind sows with ripple and with ray10·····/˘···
The pleasant waters; and the gentle sky10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Looks on the homestead like a quiet eye.9···/···/·
Their melancholy quaver, lone and low,10·/˘·˘/˘···
When day is done, the gray tree-toads repeat:10········˘/
The whippoorwills, far in the afterglow,10·/˘····/˘·
Complain to silence: and the lightnings beat,10˘/·/˘··/˘·
In one still cloud, glimmers of golden heat.10····/˘·/˘·
He comes not yet: not till the dusk is dead,10··········
And all the western glow is far withdrawn;10···/˘···˘/
Not till,--a sleepy mouth love's kiss makes red,--10···/˘·····
The baby bud opes in a rosy yawn,10·/˘····/˘·
Breathing sweet guesses at the dreamed-of dawn.10/˘·/˘·····
When in the shadows, like a rain of gold,10···/······
The fireflies stream steadily; and bright9·/˘··/˘··
Along the moss the glowworm, as of old,10˘/···/˘···
A crawling sparkle--like a crooked light10·/˘/˘··/˘·
In smoldering vellum--scrawls a square of night,--10·/˘/˘·····
Then will he come; and she will lean to him,--10··········
She,--the sweet phantom,--memory of that place,--10···/˘/˘···
Between the starlight and his eyes; so dim10···/······
With suave control and soul-compelling grace,10··˘/··˘/˘·
He cannot help but speak her, face to face.10·/˘·······

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