Phantoms
This was her home; one mossy gable thrustAbove the cedars and the locust trees:This was her home, whose beauty now is dust,A lonely memory for melodiesThe wild birds sing, the wild birds and the bees.
Here every evening is a prayer: no boastOr ruin of sunset makes the wan world wroth;Here, through the twilight, like a pale flower's ghost,A drowsy flutter, flies the tiger-moth;And dusk spreads darkness like a dewy cloth.
In vagabond velvet, on the placid day,A stain of crimson, lolls the butterfly;The south wind sows with ripple and with rayThe pleasant waters; and the gentle skyLooks on the homestead like a quiet eye.
Their melancholy quaver, lone and low,When day is done, the gray tree-toads repeat:The whippoorwills, far in the afterglow,Complain to silence: and the lightnings beat,In one still cloud, glimmers of golden heat.
He comes not yet: not till the dusk is dead,And all the western glow is far withdrawn;Not till,--a sleepy mouth love's kiss makes red,--The baby bud opes in a rosy yawn,Breathing sweet guesses at the dreamed-of dawn.
When in the shadows, like a rain of gold,The fireflies stream steadily; and brightAlong the moss the glowworm, as of old,A crawling sparkle--like a crooked lightIn smoldering vellum--scrawls a square of night,--
Then will he come; and she will lean to him,--She,--the sweet phantom,--memory of that place,--Between the starlight and his eyes; so dimWith suave control and soul-compelling grace,He cannot help but speak her, face to face.
Words in this poem
- gable n.
- A cable. Chapman.
- wroth a.
- Full of wrath; angry; incensed; much exasperated; wrathful. [OE. wroth, wrap, AS. wraedh wroth, crooked, bad; akin to wriedhan to writhe, and to OS. wreedhangry, D. wreed cruel, OHG. reid twisted, Icel. reiedhr angry, Dan]
- ghost n.
- The spirit; the soul of man. [OE. gast, gost, soul, spirit, AS. gast breath, spirit, soul; akin to OS. g spirit, soul, D. geest, G. geist, and prob. to E. gaze, ghastly.]
- placid a.
- Pleased; contented; unruffied; undisturbed; serene; peaceful; tranquil; quiet; gentle. [L. placidus, originally, pleasing, mild, from placere to please: cf. F. placide. See Please.]
- lone n.
- A lane. See Loanin.
- glowworm n.
- A coleopterous insect of the genus Lampyris; esp., the wingless females and larvæ of the two European species (L. noctiluca, and L.
- starlight n.
- The light given by the stars.
- suave a.
- Sweet; pleasant; delightful; gracious or agreeable in manner; bland. [L. suavis sweet, pleasant: cf. F. suave. See Sweet, and cf. Suasion.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Phantoms is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #7796; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Madison Julius Cawein, Phantoms, in Poems (1911), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #7796, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/cawein-poems/phantoms.html, id L10910.
Form and metre
Phantoms is 35 lines in 7 stanzas of 5 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABABB. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%). 95% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.9 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 23% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABABB thrustA · treesB · dustA · melodiesB · beesB
- 2 ABABB boastA · wrothB · ghostA · mothB · clothB
- 3 ABABB dayA · butterflyB · rayA · skyB · eyeB
- 4 ABABB lowA · repeatB · afterglowA · beatB · heatB
- 5 ABABB deadA · withdrawnB · redA · yawnB · dawnB
- 6 ABABB goldA · brightB · oldA · lightB · nightB
- 7 ABABB himA · placeB · dimA · graceB · faceB
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| This was her home; one mossy gable thrust | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| Above the cedars and the locust trees: | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| This was her home, whose beauty now is dust, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| A lonely memory for melodies | 9 | ·/˘/˘·/˘˘ |
| The wild birds sing, the wild birds and the bees. | 10 | ·········· |
| Here every evening is a prayer: no boast | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| Or ruin of sunset makes the wan world wroth; | 10 | ·/·/······ |
| Here, through the twilight, like a pale flower's ghost, | 10 | ···/····/· |
| A drowsy flutter, flies the tiger-moth; | 9 | ·/˘/˘··/· |
| And dusk spreads darkness like a dewy cloth. | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| In vagabond velvet, on the placid day, | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘· |
| A stain of crimson, lolls the butterfly; | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| The south wind sows with ripple and with ray | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| The pleasant waters; and the gentle sky | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘· |
| Looks on the homestead like a quiet eye. | 9 | ···/···/· |
| Their melancholy quaver, lone and low, | 10 | ·/˘·˘/˘··· |
| When day is done, the gray tree-toads repeat: | 10 | ········˘/ |
| The whippoorwills, far in the afterglow, | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| Complain to silence: and the lightnings beat, | 10 | ˘/·/˘··/˘· |
| In one still cloud, glimmers of golden heat. | 10 | ····/˘·/˘· |
| He comes not yet: not till the dusk is dead, | 10 | ·········· |
| And all the western glow is far withdrawn; | 10 | ···/˘···˘/ |
| Not till,--a sleepy mouth love's kiss makes red,-- | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| The baby bud opes in a rosy yawn, | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| Breathing sweet guesses at the dreamed-of dawn. | 10 | /˘·/˘····· |
| When in the shadows, like a rain of gold, | 10 | ···/······ |
| The fireflies stream steadily; and bright | 9 | ·/˘··/˘·· |
| Along the moss the glowworm, as of old, | 10 | ˘/···/˘··· |
| A crawling sparkle--like a crooked light | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘· |
| In smoldering vellum--scrawls a square of night,-- | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| Then will he come; and she will lean to him,-- | 10 | ·········· |
| She,--the sweet phantom,--memory of that place,-- | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| Between the starlight and his eyes; so dim | 10 | ···/······ |
| With suave control and soul-compelling grace, | 10 | ··˘/··˘/˘· |
| He cannot help but speak her, face to face. | 10 | ·/˘······· |
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