Carmen XCVII: On Aemilius the Foul

Catullus (84 BC–54 BC), translated by Richard Burton · 1894

iambic pentameter · 12 lines · from The Carmina

Never (so love me the Gods!) deemed I 'twas preference matterOr AEmilius' mouth choose I to smell or his ----Nothing is this more clean, uncleaner nothing that other,Yet I ajudge ---- cleaner and nicer to be;For while this one lacks teeth, that one has cubit-long tushes,Set in their battered gums favouring a muddy old box,Not to say aught of gape like wide-cleft gap of a she-muleWhenas in summer-heat wont peradventure to stale.Yet has he many a motte and holds himself to be handsome--Why wi' the baker's ass is he not bound to the mill?Him if a damsel kiss we fain must think she be readyWith her fair lips ----

Words in this poem

cleaner n.
One who, or that which, cleans.
aught n.
Property; possession. [AS. , fr. agan to own, p. p. ahte.]
motte n.
A clump of trees in a prairie. [Local, U.S.] [Cf. F. motte a clod, clump, or hillock.]
damsel n.
A young person, either male or female, of noble or gentle extraction; as, Damsel Pepin; Damsel Richard, Prince of Wales. [OE. damosel, damesel, damisel, damsel, fr. OF. damoisele, damisele, gentlewoman, F. demoiselle young lady; cf. OF. damoisel young nobleman, F. damoiseau; fr. LL]
fain v. t.
To be glad ; to wish or desire.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Carmen XCVII: On Aemilius the Foul is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Carmina, Project Gutenberg ebook #20732, the Richard Burton translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Carmen XCVII: On Aemilius the Foul is 12 lines in a single stanza. 74% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 12.2 syllables. 5 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 25% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A--A------- matter · hisA · other · be · tushesA · box · mule · stale · handsome · mill · ready · lips
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Never (so love me the Gods!) deemed I 'twas preference matter13/········/˘/˘
Or AEmilius' mouth choose I to smell or his ----11···········
Nothing is this more clean, uncleaner nothing that other,14/˘·······/˘·/˘
Yet I ajudge ---- cleaner and nicer to be;10····/˘·/··
For while this one lacks teeth, that one has cubit-long tushes,14·········/˘·/˘
Set in their battered gums favouring a muddy old box,13···/˘·/˘·/˘··
Not to say aught of gape like wide-cleft gap of a she-mule14··············
Whenas in summer-heat wont peradventure to stale.13/˘·/˘········
Yet has he many a motte and holds himself to be handsome--14···/····˘/··/˘
Why wi' the baker's ass is he not bound to the mill?13···/˘········
Him if a damsel kiss we fain must think she be ready14···/˘·······/˘
With her fair lips ----4····

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