Carmen LXXVII: To Rufus, the Traitor Friend

Catullus (84 BC–54 BC), translated by Richard Burton · 1894

dactylic pentameter · 10 lines · from The Carmina

Rufus, trusted as friend by me, so fruitlessly, vainly,(Vainly? nay to my bane and at a ruinous price!)Hast thou cajoled me thus, and enfiring innermost vitals,Ravished the whole of our good own'd by wretchedest me?Ravished; (alas and alas!) of our life thou cruellest cruelVenom, (alas and alas!) plague of our friendship and pest.Yet must I now lament that lips so pure of the purestDamsel, thy slaver foul soiled with filthiest kiss.But ne'er hope to escape scot free; for thee shall all agesKnow, and what thing thou be, Fame, the old crone, shall declare.

Words in this poem

bane v. t.
To be the bane of; to ruin. Fuller.
hast
, 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.
vitals n.
Organs that are necessary for life; more especially, the heart, lungs, and brain.
pest n.
A fatal epidemic disease; a pestilence; specif., the plague. [L. pestis: cf. F. peste.]
damsel n.
A young person, either male or female, of noble or gentle extraction; as, Damsel Pepin; Damsel Richard, Prince of Wales. [OE. damosel, damesel, damisel, damsel, fr. OF. damoisele, damisele, gentlewoman, F. demoiselle young lady; cf. OF. damoisel young nobleman, F. damoiseau; fr. LL]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
crone n.
An old ewe. Tusser. [OD. kronie, karonie, an old sheep, OF. carogne, F. charogne, carrion (also F. carogne illnatured woman.). See Carrion, and Crony.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Carmen LXXVII: To Rufus, the Traitor Friend is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Carmina, Project Gutenberg ebook #20732, the Richard Burton translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Carmen LXXVII: To Rufus, the Traitor Friend is 10 lines in a single stanza. The metre is dactylic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 73%). 65% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 13.2 syllables. 4 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 30% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in dactylic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -----AA--- vainly · price · vitals · me · cruel · pestA · purestA · kiss · ages · declare
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against dactylic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Rufus, trusted as friend by me, so fruitlessly, vainly,13/˘/˘·····/˘/˘
(Vainly? nay to my bane and at a ruinous price!)12/˘·······/˘·
Hast thou cajoled me thus, and enfiring innermost vitals,15··˘/······/˘·/˘
Ravished the whole of our good own'd by wretchedest me?12·····/···/˘·
Ravished; (alas and alas!) of our life thou cruellest cruel14··˘/·˘/·/··/˘/
Venom, (alas and alas!) plague of our friendship and pest.14/˘˘/·˘/··//˘··
Yet must I now lament that lips so pure of the purest14····˘/······/˘
Damsel, thy slaver foul soiled with filthiest kiss.11/˘·/˘······
But ne'er hope to escape scot free; for thee shall all ages14····˘/······/˘
Know, and what thing thou be, Fame, the old crone, shall declare.13···········˘/

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