Carmen IV: On His Pinnace

Catullus (84 BC–54 BC), translated by Richard Burton · 1894

iambic pentameter · unrhymed · 27 lines · from The Carmina

Yonder Pinnace ye (my guests!) beholdSaith she was erstwhile fleetest-fleet of crafts,Nor could by swiftness of aught plank that swims,Be she outstripped, whether paddle plied,Or fared she scudding under canvas-sail.Eke she defieth threat'ning Adrian shore,Dare not denay her, insular Cyclades,And noble Rhodos and ferocious Thrace,Propontis too and blustering Pontic bight.Where she (my Pinnace now) in times before,Was leafy woodling on Cytorean ChineFor ever loquent lisping with her leaves.Pontic Amastris! Box-tree-clad Cytorus!Cognisant were ye, and you weet full well(So saith my Pinnace) how from earliest ageUpon your highmost-spiring peak she stood,How in your waters first her sculls were dipt,And thence thro' many and many an important straitShe bore her owner whether left or right,Where breezes bade her fare, or Jupiter deignedAt once propitious strike the sail full square;Nor to the sea-shore gods was aught of vowBy her deemed needful, when from Ocean's bourneExtreme she voyaged for this limpid lake.Yet were such things whilome: now she retiredIn quiet age devotes herself to thee(O twin-born Castor) twain with Castor's twin.

Words in this poem

yonder adv.
At a distance, but within view. [OE. yonder, ýonder; cf. OD. ginder, Goth. jaindr there. Yond, adv.]
saith
3d pers. sing. pres. of Say.
erstwhile adv.
Till then or now; heretofore; formerly.
aught n.
Property; possession. [AS. , fr. agan to own, p. p. ahte.]
adrian a.
Pertaining to the Adriatic Sea; as, Adrian billows. [L. Hadrianus.]
denay n.
Denial; refusal.
insular a.
Of or pertaining to an island; of the nature, or possessing the characteristics, of an island; as, an insular climate, fauna, etc. [L. insularis, fr. insula island: cf. F. insulaire. See Isle.]
pontic a.
Of or pertaining to the Pontus, Euxine, or Black Sea.
weet v. i.
To know; to wit. Tyndale. [See Wit to know.]
bade
A form of the pat tense of Bid.
needful a.
Full of need; in need or want; needy; distressing.
bourne n.
A stream or rivulet; a burn. [OE. burne, borne, AS. burna; akin to OS. brunno spring, G. born, brunnen, OHG. prunno, Goth. brunna, Icel. brunnr, and perh. to Gr. burn, v., because the source]
twain a.
Two;- nearly obsolete in common discourse, but used in poetry and burlesque. [OE. twein, tweien, tweyne, AS. twegen, masc. See Two.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Carmen IV: On His Pinnace is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Carmina, Project Gutenberg ebook #20732, the Richard Burton translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Carmen IV: On His Pinnace is 27 lines in a single verse paragraph. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 97% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.1 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 37% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -----A--BA--------B-------- behold · crafts · swims · plied · sail · shoreA · cyclades · thrace · bightB · beforeA · chine · leaves · cytorus · well · age · stood · dipt · strait · rightB · deigned · square · vow · bourne · lake · retired · thee · twin
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Yonder Pinnace ye (my guests!) behold9/˘/˘···˘/
Saith she was erstwhile fleetest-fleet of crafts,10···/·/˘···
Nor could by swiftness of aught plank that swims,10···/˘·····
Be she outstripped, whether paddle plied,10··˘/˘··/˘·
Or fared she scudding under canvas-sail.10···/˘··/˘·
Eke she defieth threat'ning Adrian shore,10······/˘˘·
Dare not denay her, insular Cyclades,11··˘/·/˘˘˘/˘
And noble Rhodos and ferocious Thrace,10·/˘···˘/˘·
Propontis too and blustering Pontic bight.10·····/˘/˘·
Where she (my Pinnace now) in times before,10···/˘·····
Was leafy woodling on Cytorean Chine10·/˘/˘·····
For ever loquent lisping with her leaves.10·/˘··/˘···
Pontic Amastris! Box-tree-clad Cytorus!11/˘·········
Cognisant were ye, and you weet full well10··········
(So saith my Pinnace) how from earliest age10···/˘··/˘·
Upon your highmost-spiring peak she stood,10···/˘/˘···
How in your waters first her sculls were dipt,10···/˘·····
And thence thro' many and many an important strait11···/·/·˘/˘·
She bore her owner whether left or right,10···/˘·····
Where breezes bade her fare, or Jupiter deigned10·/˘····/˘·
At once propitious strike the sail full square;10··˘/˘·····
Nor to the sea-shore gods was aught of vow10··········
By her deemed needful, when from Ocean's bourne10···/˘··/˘·
Extreme she voyaged for this limpid lake.10˘/·/˘··/˘·
Yet were such things whilome: now she retired10········˘/
In quiet age devotes herself to thee10·/˘·˘/˘/··
(O twin-born Castor) twain with Castor's twin.10···/˘··/˘·

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