The Garden of Dreams

Bliss Carman (1861–1929) · 1921

iambic tetrameter · 12 lines · from Later Poems

My heart is a garden of dreamsWhere you walk when day is done,Fair as the royal flowers,Calm as the lingering sun.

Never a drouth comes there,Nor any frost that mars,Only the wind of loveUnder the early stars,--

The living breath that movesWhispering to and fro,Like the voice of God in the duskOf the garden long ago.

About this text

The Garden of Dreams is in the public domain. This text is taken from Later Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #33417; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Bliss Carman, The Garden of Dreams, in Later Poems (1921), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #33417, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/carman-later-poems/the-garden-of-dreams.html, id L10983.

Form and metre

The Garden of Dreams is 12 lines in 3 stanzas of 4 lines each. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 87%). 94% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 6.7 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 33% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A dreams · doneA · flowers · sunA
  2. 2 -A-A there · marsA · love · starsA
  3. 3 -A-A moves · froA · dusk · agoA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
My heart is a garden of dreams8····/˘··
Where you walk when day is done,7·······
Fair as the royal flowers,7···/˘/˘
Calm as the lingering sun.7···/˘˘·
Never a drouth comes there,6/˘····
Nor any frost that mars,6·/˘···
Only the wind of love6/˘····
Under the early stars,--6···/˘·
The living breath that moves6·/˘···
Whispering to and fro,6/˘˘···
Like the voice of God in the dusk8········
Of the garden long ago.7··/˘·˘/

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