At the Making of Man

Bliss Carman (1861–1929) · 1921

iambic tetrameter · 198 lines · from Later Poems

First all the host of RaphaelIn liveries of gold,Lifted the chorus on whose rhythmThe spinning spheres are rolled,--The Seraphs of the morning calmWhose hearts are never cold.

He shall be born a spirit,Part of the soul that yearns,The core of vital gladnessThat suffers and discerns,The stir that breaks the budding sheathWhen the green spring returns,--

The gist of power and patienceHid in the plasmic clay,The calm behind the senses,The passionate essayTo make his wise and lovely dreamImmortal on a day.

The soft, Aprilian ardorsThat warm the waiting loamShall whisper in his pulsesTo bid him overcome,And he shall learn the wonder-cryBeneath the azure dome.

And though all-dying natureShould teach him to deplore,The ruddy fires of autumnShall lure him but the moreTo pass from joy to stronger joy,As through an open door.

He shall have hope and honor,Proud trust and courage stark,To hold him to his purposeThrough the unlighted dark,And love that sees the moon's full orbIn the first silver arc.

And he shall live by kindnessAnd the heart's certitude,Which moves without misgivingIn ways not understood,Sure only of the vast event,--The large and simple good.

Then Gabriel's host in silver gearAnd vesture twilight blue,The spirits of immortal mind,The warders of the true,Took up the theme that gives the worldSignificance anew.

He shall be born to reason,And have the primal needTo understand and followWherever truth may lead,--To grow in wisdom like a treeUnfolding from a seed.

A watcher by the sheepfolds,With wonder in his eyes,He shall behold the seasons,And mark the planets rise,Till all the marching firmamentShall rouse his vast surmise.

Beyond the sweep of vision,Or utmost reach of sound,This cunning fire-maker,This tiller of the ground,Shall learn the secrets of the sunsAnd fathom the profound.

For he must prove all beingSane, beauteous, benign,And at the heart of natureDiscover the divine,--Himself the type and symbolOf the eternal trine.

He shall perceive the kindlingOf knowledge, far and dim,As of the fire that brightensBelow the dark sea-rim,When ray by ray the splendid sunFloats to the world's wide brim.

And out of primal instinct,The lore of lair and den,He shall emerge to questionHow, wherefore, whence, and when,Till the last frontier of the truthShall lie within his ken.

Then Michael's scarlet-suited hostTook up the word and sang;As though a trumpet had been loosedIn heaven, the arches rang;For these were they who feel the thrillOf beauty like a pang.

He shall be framed and balancedFor loveliness and power,Lithe as the supple creatures,And colored as a flower,Sustained by the all-feeding earth,Nurtured by wind and shower,

To stand within the vortexWhere surging forces play,A poised and pliant figureImmutable as they,Till time and space and energySurrenders to his sway.

He shall be free to journeyOver the teeming earth,An insatiable seeker,A wanderer from his birth,Clothed in the fragile veil of sense,With fortitude for girth.

His hands shall have dominionOf all created things,To fashion in the likenessOf his imaginings,To make his will and thought surviveUnto a thousand springs.

The world shall be his province,The princedom of his skill;The tides shall wear his harness,The winds obey his will;Till neither flood, nor fire, nor frost,Shall work to do him ill.

A creature fit to carryThe pure creative fire,Whatever truth inform him,Whatever good inspire,He shall make lovely in all thingsTo the end of his desire.

In the pure solitude of duskOne star is set to shineAbove the sundown's dying rose,A lamp before a shrine.It is the star of Michael litIn the minster of the sun,That every toiling hand may giveThanks for the day's work done.

For when the almighty word went forthTo bid creation be,--The glimmering star-tracks on the blue,The tide-belts on the sea,--Perfect as planned, from Michael's handThe lasting hills arose,Their bases on the poppied plain,Their peaks in bannered snows.

Cedar and thorn and oak were born;Green fiddleheads uncurledIn the spring woods; gold adder-tonguesCame forth to glad the world;--The magic of the punctual seeds,Each with its pregnant powers,As the lord Michael fashioned themTo keep their days and hours.

Frail fins to ride the monstrous tide,Soft wings to poise and gleam,He formed the pageant tribe by tribeAs vivid as a dream.And still must his beneficenceRenew, create, sustain,Sorcery of the wind and sun,Alchemy of the rain.

Teeming with God, the kindly sodYearns through the summer daysWith the mute eloquence of flowers,Its only means of praise.At dusk and dawn the tranquil hillsThrob to the song of birds,And all the dim blue silence thrillsTo transport not of words.

For earth must breed to spirit's need,Clay to the finer clay,That soul through sense find recompenseAnd rapture on her way.And man, from dust and dreaming wrought,To all things must impartThe trend and likeness of his thought,The passion of his heart.

The love and lore he shall acquireTo word and deed must dare;Resemblances of God his sireHis voice and mien must bear.His children's children shall portrayThe skill which he bestowsOn living; and what life must meanHis craftsman's instinct knows.

Line upon line and tone by tone,The visioned form he givesTo sound and color, wood and stone,Takes loveliness and lives.He sees his project's soaring hopeGrow substance, and expandTo measure a diviner scopeBeneath his patient hand.

To pencil, brush, and burnisherHis wizardry he lends,And to the care of lathe and loomHis secret he commends.In hues and forms and cadencesNew beauty he instills,A brother by the right of craftTo Michael of the hills.

Words in this poem 36
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
gist n.
A resting place. [OF. giste abode, lodgings, F. gîte, fr. gésir to lie, L. jac, prop., to be thrown, hence, to lie, fr. jacre to throw. In the second sense fr. OF. gist, F. gît, ]
plasmic a.
Of, pertaining to, or connected with, plasma; plasmatic.
deplore v. t.
To feel or to express deep and poignant grief for; to bewail; to lament; to mourn; to sorrow over. [L. deplorare; de- + plorare to cry out, wail, lament; prob. akin to pluere to rain, and to E. flow: cf. F. déplorer. Cf. Flow.]
stark adv.
Wholly; entirely; absolutely; quite; as, stark mind.
certitude n.
Freedom from doubt; assurance; certainty. J. H. Newman. [LL. certitudo, fr. L. certus: cf. F. certitude. See Certain.]
misgiving n.
Evil premonition; doubt; distrust.
primal a.
First; primary; original; chief. [LL. primalis, fr. L. primus the first. See Prime, a.]
wherever adv.
At or in whatever place; wheresoever.
watcher n.
One who watches; one who sits up or continues; a diligent observer; specifically, one who attends upon the sick during the night.
firmament n.
Fixed foundation; established basis. [L. firmamentum, fr. firmare to make firm: cf. F. firmament. See Firm, v. & a.]
sane a.
Being in a healthy condition; not deranged; acting rationally; -- said of the mind. [L. sanus; cf. Gr. Sound, a.]
beauteous a.
Full of beauty; beautiful; very handsome. [Mostly poetic] -- Beau"te*ous*ly, adv. --
discover v. i.
To discover or show one's self.
trine a.
Threefold; triple; as, trine dimensions, or length, breadth, and thickness. [See Trinal.]
lair n.
A place in which to lie or rest; especially, the bed or couch of a wild beast. [OE. leir, AS. leger; akin to D. leger, G. lager couch, lair, OHG. laga, Goth. ligrs, and to E. lie. See Lie to be prostrate, and cf. Layer, Leaguer.]
wherefore adv.
For which reason; so; -- used relatively. [Where + for.]
loveliness n.
The state or quality of being lovely. [From Lovely.]
lithe v. i.
To listen or listen to; to hearken to. P. Plowman. [Icel Listen.]
immutable a.
Not mutable; not capable or susceptible of change; unchangeable; unalterable. [L. immutabilis; pref. im- not + mutabilis mutable. See Mutable.]
teeming a.
Prolific; productive.
fortitude n.
Power to resist attack; strength; firmness. [L. fortitudo, fr. fortis strong. See Fort.]
princedom n.
The jurisdiction, sovereignty, rank, or estate of a prince.
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
poppied a.
Mingled or interspersed with poppies. [See 1st Poppy.]
bannered a.
Decorated with a banner or banners
punctual a.
Consisting in a point; limited to a point; unextended. [F. ponctuel (cf. Sp.puntual, It. puntuale), from L. punctum point. See Point.]
pageant n.
A theatrical exhibition; a spectacle. [OE. pagent, pagen, originally, a movable scaffold or stage, hence, what was exhibited on it, fr. LL. pagina, akin to pangere to fasten; cf. L. pagina page, leaf]
beneficence n.
The practice of doing good; active goodness, kindness, or charity; bounty springing from purity and goodness. [L. beneficentia, fr. beneficus: cf. F. bénéficence. See Benefice.]
throb v. i.
To beat, or pulsate, with more than usual force or rapidity; to beat in consequence of agitation; to palpitate; -- said of the heart, pulse, etc. [OE. ; of uncertain origin; cf. Russ. trepete a trembling, and E. trepidation.]
trend v. i.
To have a particular direction; to run; to stretch; to tend; as, the shore of the sea trends to the southwest. [OE. trenden to roll or turn about; akin to OFries. trind, trund, round, Dan. & Sw. trind, AS. trendel a circle, ring, and E. trendle, trundle.]
sire n.
A lord, master, or other person in authority. See Sir. [F. sire, originally, an older person. See Sir.]
visioned a.
Having the power of seeing visions; inspired; also, seen in visions. Shelley.
burnisher n.
One who burnishes.
wizardry n.
The character or practices o
craft n.
Strength; might; secret power. [AS. cr strength, skill, art, cunning; akin to OS., G., Sw., & Dan. kraft strength, D. kracht, Icel. kraptr; perh. originally, a drawing together, stretching, fr]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

At the Making of Man is 198 lines in 30 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%). 95% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.0 syllables. 54 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 39% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -ABABA raphael · goldA · rhythmB · rolledA · calmB · coldA
  2. 2 -A-A-A spirit · yearnsA · gladness · discernsA · sheath · returnsA
  3. 3 -A-A-A patience · clayA · senses · essayA · dream · dayA
  4. 4 -A-A-A ardors · loamA · pulses · overcomeA · cry · domeA
  5. 5 -A-A-A nature · deploreA · autumn · moreA · joy · doorA
  6. 6 -A-A-A honor · starkA · purpose · darkA · orb · arcA
  7. 7 ---A-A kindness · certitude · misgiving · understoodA · event · goodA
  8. 8 -A-A-A gear · blueA · mind · trueA · world · anewA
  9. 9 -A-A-A reason · needA · follow · leadA · tree · seedA
  10. 10 -A-A-A sheepfolds · eyesA · seasons · riseA · firmament · surmiseA
  11. 11 -A-A-A vision · soundA · maker · groundA · suns · profoundA
  12. 12 -A-A-A being · benignA · nature · divineA · symbol · trineA
  13. 13 -A-A-A kindling · dimA · brightens · rimA · sun · brimA
  14. 14 -AAA-A instinct · denA · questionA · whenA · truth · kenA
  15. 15 -A-A-A host · sangA · loosed · rangA · thrill · pangA
  16. 16 -A-A-A balanced · powerA · creatures · flowerA · earth · showerA
  17. 17 -A-A-A vortex · playA · figure · theyA · energy · swayA
  18. 18 -A-A-A journey · earthA · seeker · birthA · sense · girthA
  19. 19 -A-A-A dominion · thingsA · likeness · imaginingsA · survive · springsA
  20. 20 -A-A-A province · skillA · harness · willA · frost · illA
  21. 21 -A-A-A carry · fireA · him · inspireA · things · desireA
  22. 22 -A-A-B-B dusk · shineA · rose · shrineA · lit · sunB · give · doneB
  23. 23 -A-A-B-B forth · beA · blue · seaA · hand · aroseB · plain · snowsB
  24. 24 -A-A-B-B born · uncurledA · tongues · worldA · seeds · powersB · them · hoursB
  25. 25 -A-A-B-B tide · gleamA · tribe · dreamA · beneficence · sustainB · sun · rainB
  26. 26 -AAABCBC sod · daysA · flowersA · praiseA · hillsB · birdsC · thrillsB · wordsC
  27. 27 -A-ABCBC need · clayA · recompense · wayA · wroughtB · impartC · thoughtB · heartC
  28. 28 ABAB-C-C acquireA · dareB · sireA · bearB · portray · bestowsC · mean · knowsC
  29. 29 ABABCDCD toneA · givesB · stoneA · livesB · hopeC · expandD · scopeC · handD
  30. 30 -A-A-B-B burnisher · lendsA · loom · commendsA · cadences · instillsB · craft · hillsB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
First all the host of Raphael8······˘/
In liveries of gold,6·/˘˘··
Lifted the chorus on whose rhythm9/˘·/˘··/˘
The spinning spheres are rolled,--7·/˘···˘
The Seraphs of the morning calm8·····/˘·
Whose hearts are never cold.6···/˘·
He shall be born a spirit,7·····/˘
Part of the soul that yearns,6······
The core of vital gladness7···/˘/˘
That suffers and discerns,6·/˘·˘/
The stir that breaks the budding sheath8·····/˘·
When the green spring returns,--6····˘/
The gist of power and patience8···/˘·/˘
Hid in the plasmic clay,6···/˘·
The calm behind the senses,7·····/˘
The passionate essay6·/˘˘˘/
To make his wise and lovely dream8·····/˘·
Immortal on a day.6˘/˘···
The soft, Aprilian ardors7·····/˘
That warm the waiting loam6···/˘·
Shall whisper in his pulses7·/˘··/˘
To bid him overcome,6···/˘·
And he shall learn the wonder-cry8·····/˘·
Beneath the azure dome.6···/˘·
And though all-dying nature7···/˘/˘
Should teach him to deplore,6····˘/
The ruddy fires of autumn8·/˘/˘·/˘
Shall lure him but the more6······
To pass from joy to stronger joy,8·····/˘·
As through an open door.6···/˘·
He shall have hope and honor,7·····/˘
Proud trust and courage stark,6···/˘·
To hold him to his purpose7·····/˘
Through the unlighted dark,6······
And love that sees the moon's full orb8········
In the first silver arc.6···/˘·
And he shall live by kindness7·····/˘
And the heart's certitude,6···/˘·
Which moves without misgiving7····˘/˘
In ways not understood,6····˘/
Sure only of the vast event,--8·/˘···˘/
The large and simple good.6···/˘·
Then Gabriel's host in silver gear8·/˘··/˘·
And vesture twilight blue,6·/˘/··
The spirits of immortal mind,8·/˘·˘/˘·
The warders of the true,6·/˘···
Took up the theme that gives the world8········
Significance anew.6˘/˘˘˘/
He shall be born to reason,7·····/˘
And have the primal need6···/˘·
To understand and follow7··˘/·/˘
Wherever truth may lead,--6˘/˘···
To grow in wisdom like a tree8···/˘···
Unfolding from a seed.6˘/˘···
A watcher by the sheepfolds,7·/˘····
With wonder in his eyes,6·/˘···
He shall behold the seasons,7··˘/·/˘
And mark the planets rise,6···/˘·
Till all the marching firmament8···/˘/˘˘
Shall rouse his vast surmise.6····˘/
Beyond the sweep of vision,7·····/˘
Or utmost reach of sound,6·/····
This cunning fire-maker,7·/˘/˘/˘
This tiller of the ground,6·/˘···
Shall learn the secrets of the suns8···/˘···
And fathom the profound.6·/˘·˘/
For he must prove all being7·····/˘
Sane, beauteous, benign,6·/˘˘˘/
And at the heart of nature7·····/˘
Discover the divine,--6˘/˘·˘/
Himself the type and symbol7˘/···/˘
Of the eternal trine.6··˘/˘·
He shall perceive the kindling7··˘/·/˘
Of knowledge, far and dim,6·/˘···
As of the fire that brightens8···/˘·/˘
Below the dark sea-rim,6······
When ray by ray the splendid sun8·····/˘·
Floats to the world's wide brim.6······
And out of primal instinct,7···/˘/˘
The lore of lair and den,6······
He shall emerge to question7··˘/·/˘
How, wherefore, whence, and when,6·/˘···
Till the last frontier of the truth8···˘/···
Shall lie within his ken.6······
Then Michael's scarlet-suited host8·/˘/˘/˘·
Took up the word and sang;6······
As though a trumpet had been loosed8···/˘···
In heaven, the arches rang;7·/˘·/˘·
For these were they who feel the thrill8········
Of beauty like a pang.6·/˘···
He shall be framed and balanced8····˘·/˘
For loveliness and power,7·/˘˘·/˘
Lithe as the supple creatures,7···/˘/˘
And colored as a flower,8·/˘˘··/˘
Sustained by the all-feeding earth,8˘/···/˘·
Nurtured by wind and shower,8/˘˘···/˘
To stand within the vortex7·····/˘
Where surging forces play,6·/˘/˘·
A poised and pliant figure8··˘·/˘/˘
Immutable as they,6˘/˘˘··
Till time and space and energy8·····/˘˘
Surrenders to his sway.6˘/˘···
He shall be free to journey7·····/˘
Over the teeming earth,6···/˘·
An insatiable seeker,7·˘/˘˘/˘
A wanderer from his birth,7·/˘˘···
Clothed in the fragile veil of sense,8···/˘···
With fortitude for girth.6·/˘···
His hands shall have dominion7····˘/˘
Of all created things,6··˘/˘·
To fashion in the likeness7·/˘··/˘
Of his imaginings,6··˘/˘˘
To make his will and thought survive8······˘/
Unto a thousand springs.6···/˘·
The world shall be his province,7·····/˘
The princedom of his skill;6·/˘···
The tides shall wear his harness,7·····/˘
The winds obey his will;6··˘/··
Till neither flood, nor fire, nor frost,8·/˘··/··
Shall work to do him ill.6······
A creature fit to carry7·/˘··/˘
The pure creative fire,7··˘/˘/˘
Whatever truth inform him,7·/˘·˘/·
Whatever good inspire,6·/˘·˘/
He shall make lovely in all things8···/˘···
To the end of his desire.8·····˘/˘
In the pure solitude of dusk8···/˘···
One star is set to shine6······
Above the sundown's dying rose,8···/·/˘·
A lamp before a shrine.6······
It is the star of Michael lit8·····/˘·
In the minster of the sun,7··/˘···
That every toiling hand may give8·/˘/˘···
Thanks for the day's work done.6······
For when the almighty word went forth9···˘/˘···
To bid creation be,--6··˘/˘·
The glimmering star-tracks on the blue,8·/˘·····
The tide-belts on the sea,--6······
Perfect as planned, from Michael's hand8˘/···/˘·
The lasting hills arose,6·/˘·˘/
Their bases on the poppied plain,8·/˘··/˘·
Their peaks in bannered snows.7···/˘˘·
Cedar and thorn and oak were born;8/˘······
Green fiddleheads uncurled7······˘
In the spring woods; gold adder-tongues8·····/˘·
Came forth to glad the world;--6······
The magic of the punctual seeds,8·/˘··/˘·
Each with its pregnant powers,7···/˘/˘
As the lord Michael fashioned them8···/˘/˘·
To keep their days and hours.7·····/˘
Frail fins to ride the monstrous tide,8·····/˘·
Soft wings to poise and gleam,6······
He formed the pageant tribe by tribe8···/˘···
As vivid as a dream.6·/˘···
And still must his beneficence8····˘/˘˘
Renew, create, sustain,6˘/˘/˘/
Sorcery of the wind and sun,8/˘˘·····
Alchemy of the rain.6/˘˘···
Teeming with God, the kindly sod8/˘···/˘·
Yearns through the summer days6···/˘·
With the mute eloquence of flowers,9···/˘˘·/˘
Its only means of praise.6·/˘···
At dusk and dawn the tranquil hills8·····/˘·
Throb to the song of birds,6······
And all the dim blue silence thrills8·····/˘·
To transport not of words.6·˘/···
For earth must breed to spirit's need,8·····/˘·
Clay to the finer clay,6···/˘·
That soul through sense find recompense8·····/˘·
And rapture on her way.6·/˘···
And man, from dust and dreaming wrought,8·····/˘·
To all things must impart6····˘/
The trend and likeness of his thought,8···/˘···
The passion of his heart.6·/˘···
The love and lore he shall acquire9······˘/˘
To word and deed must dare;6······
Resemblances of God his sire9˘/˘˘···/˘
His voice and mien must bear.6······
His children's children shall portray8·/˘/˘·˘/
The skill which he bestows6····˘/
On living; and what life must mean8·/˘·····
His craftsman's instinct knows.6·/˘/˘·
Line upon line and tone by tone,8········
The visioned form he gives7·/˘˘···
To sound and color, wood and stone,8···/˘···
Takes loveliness and lives.6·/˘˘··
He sees his project's soaring hope8···/˘/˘·
Grow substance, and expand6·/˘·˘/
To measure a diviner scope8·/˘·˘/˘·
Beneath his patient hand.6···/˘·
To pencil, brush, and burnisher8·/˘··/˘˘
His wizardry he lends,6·/˘˘··
And to the care of lathe and loom8········
His secret he commends.6·/˘·˘/
In hues and forms and cadences8·····/˘˘
New beauty he instills,6·/˘·˘/
A brother by the right of craft8·/˘·····
To Michael of the hills.6·/˘···

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