The Last Time I Came O’er the Moor

Robert Burns (1759–1796) · 1786–1796

iambic tetrameter · ABABCDCD · 24 lines · from Poems and Songs

The last time I came o’er the moor,And left Maria’s dwelling,What throes, what tortures passing cure,Were in my bosom swelling:Condemn’d to see my rival’s reign,While I in secret languish;To feel a fire in every vein,Yet dare not speak my anguish.

Love’s veriest wretch, despairing, IFain, fain, my crime would cover;Th’ unweeting groan, the bursting sigh,Betray the guilty lover.I know my doom must be despair,Thou wilt nor canst relieve me;But oh, Maria, hear my prayer,For Pity’s sake forgive me!

The music of thy tongue I heard,Nor wist while it enslav’d me;I saw thine eyes, yet nothing fear’d,Till fear no more had sav’d me:The unwary sailor thus, aghast,The wheeling torrent viewing,’Mid circling horrors yields at lastTo overwhelming ruin.

Words in this poem

languish v. i.
To cause to dr Shak.
despairing a.
Feeling or expressing despair; hopeless.
fain v. t.
To be glad ; to wish or desire.
unweeting a.
Unwitting. Chaucer. [See Un- not, and Weet, Wit.]
relieve v. t.
To lift up; to raise again, as one who has fallen; to cause to rise. Piers Plowman. [OE. releven, F. relever to raise again, discharge, relieve, fr. L. relevare to lift up, raise, make light, relieve; pref. re- re- + levare to raise, fr. levis l]
unwary a.
Not vigilant against danger; not wary or cautious; unguarded; precipitate; heedless; careless. [Cf. Unware.]
wheeling n.
The act of conveying anything, or traveling, on wheels, or in a wheeled vehicle.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Last Time I Came O’er the Moor is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems and Songs of Robert Burns, Project Gutenberg ebook #1279; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Robert Burns, The Last Time I Came O’er the Moor, in Poems and Songs (1786–1796), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #1279, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/burns-poems/the-last-time-i-came-o-er-the-moor.html, id L03319.

Form and metre

The Last Time I Came O’er the Moor is 24 lines in 3 stanzas of 8 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABABCDCD, complete in 2 of its 3 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 96%). 100% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.5 syllables. 8 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 8% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCDCD moorA · dwellingB · cureA · swellingB · reignC · languishD · veinC · anguishD
  2. 2 ABABCDCD iA · coverB · sighA · loverB · despairC · meD · prayerC · meD
  3. 3 -A-AB-B- heard · meA · fear'd · meA · aghastB · viewing · lastB · ruin
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The last time I came o’er the moor,8········
And left Maria’s dwelling,7··˘/˘/˘
What throes, what tortures passing cure,8···/˘/˘·
Were in my bosom swelling:7···/˘/˘
Condemn’d to see my rival’s reign,8˘/···/˘·
While I in secret languish;7···/˘/˘
To feel a fire in every vein,8···/·/˘·
Yet dare not speak my anguish.7·····/˘
Love’s veriest wretch, despairing, I8····˘/˘·
Fain, fain, my crime would cover;7·····/˘
Th’ unweeting groan, the bursting sigh,8˘/˘··/˘·
Betray the guilty lover.7˘/·/˘/˘
I know my doom must be despair,8······˘/
Thou wilt nor canst relieve me;7····˘/·
But oh, Maria, hear my prayer,8··˘/˘···
For Pity’s sake forgive me!7·/˘·˘/·
The music of thy tongue I heard,8·/˘·····
Nor wist while it enslav’d me;7····˘/·
I saw thine eyes, yet nothing fear’d,8·····/˘·
Till fear no more had sav’d me:7·······
The unwary sailor thus, aghast,9·˘/˘/˘·˘/
The wheeling torrent viewing,7·/˘/˘/˘
’Mid circling horrors yields at last8·/˘/˘···
To overwhelming ruin.7··˘/˘/˘

The reader shows the same poem with its rhymes coloured and a stress row above each line, the notes beside their stanzas, and any word's definition on a tap; the analysis page takes the whole book apart. How every part of this site was made.

More by Robert Burns