I Murder Hate

Robert Burns (1759–1796) · 1786–1796

iambic tetrameter · 16 lines · from Poems and Songs

I murder hate by flood or field,Tho’ glory’s name may screen us;In wars at home I’ll spend my blood—Life-giving wars of Venus.The deities that I adoreAre social Peace and Plenty;I’m better pleas’d to make one more,Than be the death of twenty.

I would not die like Socrates,For all the fuss of Plato;Nor would I with Leonidas,Nor yet would I with Cato:The zealots of the Church and StateShall ne’er my mortal foes be;But let me have bold Zimri’s fate,Within the arms of Cozbi!

Words in this poem

adore v. t.
To worship with profound reverence; to pay divine honors to; to honor as deity or as divine. [OE. aouren, anouren, adoren, OF. aorer, adorer, F. adorer, fr. L. adorare; ad + orare to speak, pray, os, oris, mouth. In OE. confused with honor, the French pr]
fuss n.
A tumult; a bustle; unnecessary or annoying ado about trifles. [Cf. Fusome.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

I Murder Hate is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems and Songs of Robert Burns, Project Gutenberg ebook #1279; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Robert Burns, I Murder Hate, in Poems and Songs (1786–1796), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #1279, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/burns-poems/i-murder-hate.html, id L03212.

Form and metre

I Murder Hate is 16 lines in 2 stanzas of 8 lines each. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 93%). 99% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.4 syllables. 5 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 12% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-ABCBC field · usA · blood · venusA · adoreB · plentyC · moreB · twentyC
  2. 2 -A-AB-B- socrates · platoA · leonidas · catoA · stateB · be · fateB · cozbi
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
I murder hate by flood or field,8·/˘·····
Tho’ glory’s name may screen us;7·/˘····
In wars at home I’ll spend my blood—8········
Life-giving wars of Venus.7·/˘··/˘
The deities that I adore8·/˘˘··˘/
Are social Peace and Plenty;7·/˘··/˘
I’m better pleas’d to make one more,8·/˘·····
Than be the death of twenty.7·····/˘
I would not die like Socrates,8·····/˘·
For all the fuss of Plato;7·····/˘
Nor would I with Leonidas,7·······
Nor yet would I with Cato:7·····/˘
The zealots of the Church and State8·/˘·····
Shall ne’er my mortal foes be;7···/˘··
But let me have bold Zimri’s fate,8········
Within the arms of Cozbi!7·······

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