Rhomboidal Dirge
Ah me!Am I the swainThat late from sorrow freeDid all the cares on earth disdain?And still untouched, as at some safer games,Played with the burning coals of love, and beauty's flames?Was't I could dive, and sound each passion's secret depth at will?And from those huge o'erwhelmings rise, by help of reason still?And am I now, O heavens! for trying this in vain,So sunk that I shall never rise again?Then let despair set sorrow's string,For strains that doleful be;And I will sing,Ah me!
But why,O fatal time,Dost thou constrain that IShould perish in my youth's sweet prime?I, but awhile ago, (you cruel powers!)In spite of fortune, cropped contentment's sweetest flowers,And yet unscorned, serve a gentle nymph, the fairest she,That ever was beloved of man, or eyes did ever see!Yea, one whose tender heart would rue for my distress;Yet I, poor I! must perish ne'ertheless.And (which much more augments my care)Unmoaned I must die,And no man e'erKnow why.
Thy leave,My dying song,Yet take, ere grief bereaveThe breath which I enjoy too long,Tell thou that fair one this: my soul prefersHer love above my life; and that I died her's:And let him be, for evermore, to her remembrance dear,Who loved the very thought of her whilst he remained here.And now farewell! thou place of my unhappy birth,Where once I breathed the sweetest air on earth;Since me my wonted joys forsake,And all my trust deceive;Of all I takeMy leave.
Farewell!Sweet groves, to you!You hills, that highest dwell;And all you humble vales, adieu!You wanton brooks, and solitary rocks,My dear companions all! and you, my tender flocks!Farewell my pipe, and all those pleasing songs, whose moving strainsDelighted once the fairest nymphs that dance upon the plains!You discontents, whose deep and over-deadly smartHave, without pity, broke the truest heart.Sighs, tears, and every sad annoy,That erst did with me dwell,And all other joys,Farewell!
Adieu!Fair shepherdesses!Let garlands of sad yewAdorn your dainty golden tresses.I, that loved you, and often with my quill,Made music that delighted fountain, grove, and hill;I, whom you loved so, and with a sweet and chaste embrace.Yea, with a thousand rather favours, would vouchsafe to grace,I now must leave you all alone, of love to plain;And never pipe, nor never sing again!I must, for evermore, be gone;And therefore bid I you,And every one,Adieu!
I die!For, oh! I feelDeath's horrors drawing nigh,And all this frame of nature reel.My hopeless heart, despairing of relief,Sinks underneath the heavy weight of saddest grief;Which hath so ruthless torn, so racked, so tortured every vein,All comfort comes too late to have it ever cured again.My swimming head begins to dance death's giddy round;A shuddering chillness doth each sense confound;Benumbed is my cold sweating browA dimness shuts my eye.And now, oh! now,I die!
Words in this poem
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- awhile adv.
- For a while; for some time; for a short time. [Adj. a + while time, interval.]
- evermore adv.
- During eternity; always; forever; for an indefinite period; at all times; -- often used substantively with for.
- wonted a.
- Accustomed; customary; usual.
- dwell v. i.
- To delay; to linger. [OE. dwellen, dwelien, to err, linger, AS. dwellan to deceive, hinder, delay, dwelian to err; akin to Icel. dvelja to delay, tarry, Sw. dväljas to dwell, Dan. dv]
- delighted a.
- Endowed with delight.
- broke v. i.
- To transact business for another. Brome. [See Broker, and cf. Brook.]
- dainty n.
- Value; estimation; the gratification or pleasure taken in anything. [OE. deinie, dainte, deintie, deyntee, OF. deintié delicacy, orig., dignity, honor, fr. L. dignitas, fr. dignus worthy. See Deign, and cf. Dignity.]
- vouchsafe v. t.
- To condescend to grant; to concede; to bestow. [Vouch + safe, that is, to vouch or answer for safety.]
- despairing a.
- Feeling or expressing despair; hopeless.
- ruthless a.
- Having no ruth; cruel; pitiless.
- chillness n.
- Coolness; coldness; a chill.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Rhomboidal Dirge is in the public domain. This text is taken from Pastoral Poems by Nicholas Breton, Selected Poetry by George Wither, and Pastoral Poetry by William Browne (of Tavistock), Project Gutenberg ebook #22001; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Nicholas Breton, Rhomboidal Dirge, in Pastoral Poems and Selected Poetry (1597–1604), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #22001, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/breton-poems/rhomboidal-dirge.html, id L08843.
Form and metre
Rhomboidal Dirge is 84 lines in 6 stanzas of 14 lines each. The commonest rhyme scheme is ABABCCDDEEFAFA, in 2 of the 6 stanzas; the rest vary or could not be confirmed. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic tetrameter. 98% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.1 syllables. 3 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 14% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABABCCDDBBEAEA meA · swainB · freeA · disdainB · gamesC · flamesC · willD · stillD · vainB · againB · stringE · beA · singE · meA
- 2 ABABCCDDEE-A-A whyA · timeB · iA · primeB · powersC · flowersC · sheD · seeD · distressE · ne'erthelessE · care · dieA · e'er · whyA
- 3 ABABCCDDEEFAFA leaveA · songB · bereaveA · longB · prefersC · her'sC · dearD · hereD · birthE · earthE · forsakeF · deceiveA · takeF · leaveA
- 4 ABABCCDDEE-A-A farewellA · youB · dwellA · adieuB · rocksC · flocksC · strainsD · plainsD · smartE · heartE · annoy · dwellA · joys · farewellA
- 5 A-A-BBCCDD-A-A adieuA · shepherdesses · yewA · tresses · quillB · hillB · embraceC · graceC · plainD · againD · gone · youA · one · adieuA
- 6 ABABCCDDEEFAFA dieA · feelB · nighA · reelB · reliefC · griefC · veinD · againD · roundE · confoundE · browF · eyeA · nowF · dieA
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Ah me! | 2 | ·· |
| Am I the swain | 4 | ···· |
| That late from sorrow free | 6 | ···/˘· |
| Did all the cares on earth disdain? | 8 | ······˘/ |
| And still untouched, as at some safer games, | 10 | ··˘/···/˘· |
| Played with the burning coals of love, and beauty's flames? | 12 | ···/˘····/˘· |
| Was't I could dive, and sound each passion's secret depth at will? | 14 | ·······/˘/˘··· |
| And from those huge o'erwhelmings rise, by help of reason still? | 14 | ···········/˘· |
| And am I now, O heavens! for trying this in vain, | 13 | ·····/˘·/˘··· |
| So sunk that I shall never rise again? | 10 | ·····/˘·˘/ |
| Then let despair set sorrow's string, | 8 | ··˘/·/˘· |
| For strains that doleful be; | 6 | ···/˘· |
| And I will sing, | 4 | ···· |
| Ah me! | 2 | ·· |
| But why, | 2 | ·· |
| O fatal time, | 4 | ·/˘· |
| Dost thou constrain that I | 6 | ··˘/·· |
| Should perish in my youth's sweet prime? | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| I, but awhile ago, (you cruel powers!) | 11 | ··˘/˘/·/˘/˘ |
| In spite of fortune, cropped contentment's sweetest flowers, | 13 | ···/˘·˘/˘/˘/˘ |
| And yet unscorned, serve a gentle nymph, the fairest she, | 13 | ······/˘··/˘· |
| That ever was beloved of man, or eyes did ever see! | 14 | ·/˘·˘/·····/˘· |
| Yea, one whose tender heart would rue for my distress; | 12 | ···/˘·····˘/ |
| Yet I, poor I! must perish ne'ertheless. | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| And (which much more augments my care) | 8 | ····˘/·· |
| Unmoaned I must die, | 5 | ····· |
| And no man e'er | 4 | ···· |
| Know why. | 2 | ·· |
| Thy leave, | 2 | ·· |
| My dying song, | 4 | ·/˘· |
| Yet take, ere grief bereave | 6 | ····˘/ |
| The breath which I enjoy too long, | 8 | ····˘/·· |
| Tell thou that fair one this: my soul prefers | 10 | ········˘/ |
| Her love above my life; and that I died her's: | 11 | ··········· |
| And let him be, for evermore, to her remembrance dear, | 14 | ·····/˘···˘/˘· |
| Who loved the very thought of her whilst he remained here. | 13 | ···/˘·····˘/· |
| And now farewell! thou place of my unhappy birth, | 12 | ···/····˘/˘· |
| Where once I breathed the sweetest air on earth; | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Since me my wonted joys forsake, | 8 | ···/˘·˘/ |
| And all my trust deceive; | 6 | ····˘/ |
| Of all I take | 4 | ···· |
| My leave. | 2 | ·· |
| Farewell! | 2 | ·/ |
| Sweet groves, to you! | 4 | ···· |
| You hills, that highest dwell; | 6 | ···/˘· |
| And all you humble vales, adieu! | 8 | ···/˘·˘/ |
| You wanton brooks, and solitary rocks, | 10 | ·/˘··/˘·˘· |
| My dear companions all! and you, my tender flocks! | 12 | ··˘/˘····/˘· |
| Farewell my pipe, and all those pleasing songs, whose moving strains | 14 | ·/·····/˘··/˘· |
| Delighted once the fairest nymphs that dance upon the plains! | 14 | ˘/˘··/˘······· |
| You discontents, whose deep and over-deadly smart | 12 | ··˘/·····/˘· |
| Have, without pity, broke the truest heart. | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Sighs, tears, and every sad annoy, | 9 | ···/˘˘·˘/ |
| That erst did with me dwell, | 6 | ······ |
| And all other joys, | 5 | ··/˘· |
| Farewell! | 2 | ·/ |
| Adieu! | 2 | ˘/ |
| Fair shepherdesses! | 5 | ····· |
| Let garlands of sad yew | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| Adorn your dainty golden tresses. | 9 | ˘/·/˘/˘/˘ |
| I, that loved you, and often with my quill, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Made music that delighted fountain, grove, and hill; | 12 | ·/˘·˘/˘/˘··· |
| I, whom you loved so, and with a sweet and chaste embrace. | 13 | ···········˘/ |
| Yea, with a thousand rather favours, would vouchsafe to grace, | 14 | ···/˘/˘/˘·˘/·· |
| I now must leave you all alone, of love to plain; | 12 | ······˘/···· |
| And never pipe, nor never sing again! | 10 | ·/˘··/˘·˘/ |
| I must, for evermore, be gone; | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| And therefore bid I you, | 6 | ······ |
| And every one, | 5 | ·/˘˘· |
| Adieu! | 2 | ˘/ |
| I die! | 2 | ·· |
| For, oh! I feel | 4 | ···· |
| Death's horrors drawing nigh, | 6 | ·/˘/˘· |
| And all this frame of nature reel. | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| My hopeless heart, despairing of relief, | 10 | ·/˘·˘/˘·˘/ |
| Sinks underneath the heavy weight of saddest grief; | 12 | ··˘/·/˘··/˘· |
| Which hath so ruthless torn, so racked, so tortured every vein, | 15 | ···/˘····/˘/˘˘· |
| All comfort comes too late to have it ever cured again. | 14 | ·/˘······/˘·˘/ |
| My swimming head begins to dance death's giddy round; | 12 | ·/˘·˘/···/˘· |
| A shuddering chillness doth each sense confound; | 11 | ·/˘˘/˘···˘/ |
| Benumbed is my cold sweating brow | 8 | ˘/···/˘· |
| A dimness shuts my eye. | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| And now, oh! now, | 4 | ···· |
| I die! | 2 | ·· |
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