Insanity

Maxwell Bodenheim (1893–1954) · 1920

iambic tetrameter · 34 lines · from Advice: A Book of Poems

Like a vivid hyperbole,The sun plunged into April’s freshness,And struck its sparkling madnessAgainst the barnlike dejectionOf this dark red insane asylum.A softly clutching noiseStumbled from the open windows.Now and then obliquely reeling shrieksRose, as though from menTo whom death had assumedAn inexpressibly kindly face.A man stood at one window,His gaunt face trembling underneathA feverish jauntiness.A long white feather slanted backUpon his almost shapeless hat,Like an innocent evasion.Hotly incessant, his voiceMethodically flogged the April air:A voice that held the clashing bonesOf happiness and fear;A voice in which emotionSharply ridiculed itself;A monstrously vigorous voiceMockingly tearing at lifeWith an unanswerable question.

Hollowed out by his howl,I turned and saw an asylum guard.His petulantly flabby faceRolled into deathlike chips of eyes.He bore the aimless confidenceOf one contentedly playing with other men’s wings.He walked away; the man above still shrieked.I could not separate them.

Words in this poem

dejection n.
A casting down; depression. Hallywell. [L. dejectio a casting down: cf. F. déjection.]
asylum n.
A sanctuary or place of refuge and protection, where criminals and debtors found shelter, and from which they could not be forcibly taken without sacrilege.
inexpressibly adv.
In an inexpressible manner or degree; unspeakably; unutterably.
gaunt a.
Attenuated, as with fasting or suffering; lean; meager; pinched and grim. [Cf. Norw. gand a thin pointed stick, a tall and thin man, and W. gwan weak.]
jauntiness n.
The quality of being jaunty.
hotly adv.
In a hot or fiery manner; ardently; vehemently; violently; hastily; as, a hotly pursued. [From Hot, a.]
monstrously adv.
In a monstrous manner; unnaturally; extraordinarily; as, monstrously wicked.
mockingly adv.
By way of derision; in a contemptuous or mocking manner.
unanswerable a.
Not answerable; irrefutable; conclusive; decisive; as, he have an unanswerable argument.
petulantly adv.
In a petulant manner.
aimless a.
Without aim or purpose; as, an aimless life.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Insanity is in the public domain. This text is taken from Advice: A Book of Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #60252; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Maxwell Bodenheim, Insanity, in Advice: A Book of Poems (1920), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #60252, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/bodenheim-advice/insanity.html, id L23390.

Form and metre

Insanity is 34 lines in 2 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 83%).

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -----AA----------BC-C--B-- hyperbole · freshness · madness · dejection · asylum · noiseA · windowsA · shrieks · men · assumed · face · window · underneath · jauntiness · back · hat · evasion · voiceB · airC · bones · fearC · emotion · itself · voiceB · life · question
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Like a vivid hyperbole,8··/˘˘/˘·
The sun plunged into April’s freshness,9·····/˘/˘
And struck its sparkling madness7···/˘/˘
Against the barnlike dejection8·····˘/˘
Of this dark red insane asylum.9····˘/˘/˘
A softly clutching noise6·/˘/˘·
Stumbled from the open windows.8/˘··/˘/˘
Now and then obliquely reeling shrieks9···˘/˘/˘·
Rose, as though from men5·····
To whom death had assumed7····˘/˘
An inexpressibly kindly face.9······/˘·
A man stood at one window,7·····/˘
His gaunt face trembling underneath8···/˘·˘/
A feverish jauntiness.7·/˘˘/˘˘
A long white feather slanted back8···/˘/˘·
Upon his almost shapeless hat,8···/·/˘·
Like an innocent evasion.8··/˘˘˘/˘
Hotly incessant, his voice7/˘˘/˘··
Methodically flogged the April air:8˘/˘··/˘·
A voice that held the clashing bones8·····/˘·
Of happiness and fear;6·/˘˘··
A voice in which emotion7····˘/˘
Sharply ridiculed itself;8/˘/˘·˘˘/
A monstrously vigorous voice8·/˘˘/˘˘·
Mockingly tearing at life7/˘˘/˘··
With an unanswerable question.9····˘˘˘/˘
Hollowed out by his howl,7/˘˘····
I turned and saw an asylum guard.9·····˘/˘·
His petulantly flabby face8·/˘˘˘/˘·
Rolled into deathlike chips of eyes.8···/˘···
He bore the aimless confidence8···/˘/˘˘
Of one contentedly playing with other men’s wings.12··˘/˘/˘·/˘··
He walked away; the man above still shrieked.10··˘/······
I could not separate them.7···/˘··

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