The Tryst

Bjørnstjerne Bjørnson (1832–1910), translated by Arthur Hubbell Palmer · 1915

dactylic dimeter · AABCCB · 30 lines · from Poems and Songs

Silent I'm biding,While softly glidingSink the still hours to eternity's sleep.My fancies roamingList in the gloaming:--Will she the trysting now keep?

Winter is dreaming,Bright stars are beaming,Smiling their light through its cloud-veil they pour,Summer foretellingSweet love compelling;--Dare she not meet me here more?

'Neath the ice lying,Longing and sighing,Ocean would wander and warmer lands woo.Anchored ships swinging,Sail-thoughts outflinging;--Come we together, we two!

Whirling and fallingsPictures enthralling,Fairy-light made in the forest the snow;Wood-folk are straying,Shadows are playing;--Was it your footstep? Oh, no!

Courage is failing,Hoar frost assailingBoughs of your longing surrounds with its spell.But I dare enter,Break to the center,Where in dream-fetters you dwell.

Words in this poem

biding n.
Residence; habitation. Rowe.
gloaming n.
Twilight; dusk; the fall of the evening. [Scot. & North of Eng., and in poetry.] Hogg. [See Gloom.]
trysting n.
An appointment; a tryst. Trysting day, an arranged day of meeting or assembling, as of soldiers, friends, and the like.
anchored a.
Held by an anchor; at anchor; held safely; as, an anchored bark; also, shaped like an anchor; forked; as, an anchored tongue.
folk n.
In Anglo-Saxon times, the people of a group of townships or villages; a community; a tribe. [AS. folc; akin to D. volk, OS. & OHG. folk, G. volk, Icel. f, Sw. & Dan. folk, Lith. pulkas crowd, and perh. to E. follow.]
hoar v. t.
To become moldy or musty. [AS. harian to grow gray.]
dwell v. i.
To delay; to linger. [OE. dwellen, dwelien, to err, linger, AS. dwellan to deceive, hinder, delay, dwelian to err; akin to Icel. dvelja to delay, tarry, Sw. dväljas to dwell, Dan. dv]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Tryst is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems and Songs, Project Gutenberg ebook #6619, the Arthur Hubbell Palmer translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

The Tryst is 30 lines in 5 stanzas of 6 lines each. The rhyme scheme is AABCCB, complete in 4 of its 5 stanzas. The metre is dactylic dimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%).

See other poems in dactylic dimeter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABCCB bidingA · glidingA · sleepB · roamingC · gloamingC · keepB
  2. 2 AABCCB dreamingA · beamingA · pourB · foretellingC · compellingC · moreB
  3. 3 AABCCB lyingA · sighingA · wooB · swingingC · outflingingC · twoB
  4. 4 --ABBA fallings · enthralling · snowA · strayingB · playingB · noA
  5. 5 AABCCB failingA · assailingA · spellB · enterC · centerC · dwellB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against dactylic dimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Silent I'm biding,5/˘·/˘
While softly gliding5·/˘/˘
Sink the still hours to eternity's sleep.9···/·˘/˘·
My fancies roaming5·/˘/˘
List in the gloaming:--5···/˘
Will she the trysting now keep?7···/˘··
Winter is dreaming,5/˘·/˘
Bright stars are beaming,5···/˘
Smiling their light through its cloud-veil they pour,10/˘········
Summer foretelling5/˘˘/˘
Sweet love compelling;--5··˘/˘
Dare she not meet me here more?7·······
'Neath the ice lying,5···/˘
Longing and sighing,5/˘·/˘
Ocean would wander and warmer lands woo.9/·/˘·/˘··
Anchored ships swinging,5/˘·/˘
Sail-thoughts outflinging;--5·····
Come we together, we two!7··˘/˘··
Whirling and fallings5/˘·/˘
Pictures enthralling,5/˘˘/˘
Fairy-light made in the forest the snow;10/˘····/˘··
Wood-folk are straying,5···/˘
Shadows are playing;--5/··/˘
Was it your footstep? Oh, no!7···/···
Courage is failing,5/˘·/˘
Hoar frost assailing5··˘/˘
Boughs of your longing surrounds with its spell.10···/˘˘/···
But I dare enter,5···/˘
Break to the center,5···/˘
Where in dream-fetters you dwell.7···/˘··

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