The Melody

Bjørnstjerne Bjørnson (1832–1910), translated by Arthur Hubbell Palmer · 1915

iambic dimeter · rhyming couplets · 28 lines · from Poems and Songs

The youth in the woods spent the whole day long,The whole day long;For there he had heard such a wonderful song,Wonderful song.

Willow-wood gave him a flute so fair,A flute so fair,--To try, if within were the melody rare,Melody rare.

Melody whispered and said: "I am here!"Said: "I am here!"But while he was listening, it fled from his ear,Fled from his ear.

Oft when he slept, it to him crept,It to him crept;And over his forehead in love it swept,In love it swept.

When he would seize it, his sleep took flight,His sleep took flight;The melody hung in the pallid night,In the pallid night.

"Lord, O my God, take me therein,Take me therein!The melody rare all my soul doth win,My soul doth win."

Answered the Lord: "'T is your friend alone,Your friend alone;Though never an hour you it shall own,You it shall own."

Words in this poem

shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Melody is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems and Songs, Project Gutenberg ebook #6619, the Arthur Hubbell Palmer translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Bjørnstjerne Bjørnson, The Melody, in Poems and Songs (1915), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #6619, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/bjornson-poems-and-songs/the-melody.html, id L29240.

Form and metre

The Melody is 28 lines in 7 stanzas of 4 lines each. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is iambic dimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 79%).

See other poems in rhyming couplets, other poems in iambic dimeter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AAAA longA · longA · songA · songA
  2. 2 AAAA fairA · fairA · rareA · rareA
  3. 3 AAAA hereA · hereA · earA · earA
  4. 4 AAAA creptA · creptA · sweptA · sweptA
  5. 5 AAAA flightA · flightA · nightA · nightA
  6. 6 AAAA thereinA · thereinA · winA · winA
  7. 7 AAAA aloneA · aloneA · ownA · ownA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic dimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The youth in the woods spent the whole day long,10··········
The whole day long;4····
For there he had heard such a wonderful song,10·······/˘·
Wonderful song.4/˘˘·
Willow-wood gave him a flute so fair,9/········
A flute so fair,--4····
To try, if within were the melody rare,10·······/˘·
Melody rare.4/˘˘·
Melody whispered and said: "I am here!"9/˘/˘·····
Said: "I am here!"4····
But while he was listening, it fled from his ear,11····/˘·····
Fled from his ear.4····
Oft when he slept, it to him crept,8········
It to him crept;4····
And over his forehead in love it swept,9···/˘····
In love it swept.4····
When he would seize it, his sleep took flight,9·········
His sleep took flight;4····
The melody hung in the pallid night,9·/˘···/˘·
In the pallid night.5··/˘·
"Lord, O my God, take me therein,8········
Take me therein!4····
The melody rare all my soul doth win,9·/˘······
My soul doth win."4····
Answered the Lord: "'T is your friend alone,10/˘······˘/
Your friend alone;4··˘/
Though never an hour you it shall own,8·/·/····
You it shall own."4····

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