The Maiden on the Shore

Bjørnstjerne Bjørnson (1832–1910), translated by Arthur Hubbell Palmer · 1915

iambic pentameter · AABBBB · 18 lines · from Poems and Songs

She wandered so young on the shore around,Her thoughts were by naught on earth now bound.Soon came there a painter, his art he pliedAbove the tide,In shadow wide,--He painted the shore and herself beside.

More slowly she wandered near him around,Her thoughts by a single thing were bound.And this was his picture wherein he drewHerself so true,Herself so true,Reflected in ocean with heaven's blue.

All driven and drawn far and wide aroundHer thoughts now by everything were bound.Far over the ocean,--and yet most dearThe shore right here,The man so near,Did ever the sunshine so bright appear!

Words in this poem

sunshine n.
The light of the sun, or the place where it shines; the direct rays of the sun, the place where they fall, or the warmth and light which they give.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Maiden on the Shore is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems and Songs, Project Gutenberg ebook #6619, the Arthur Hubbell Palmer translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Bjørnstjerne Bjørnson, The Maiden on the Shore, in Poems and Songs (1915), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #6619, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/bjornson-poems-and-songs/the-maiden-on-the-shore.html, id L29258.

Form and metre

The Maiden on the Shore is 18 lines in 3 stanzas of 6 lines each. Every stanza rhymes AABBBB. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 80%).

See other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBBB aroundA · boundA · pliedB · tideB · wideB · besideB
  2. 2 AABBBB aroundA · boundA · drewB · trueB · trueB · blueB
  3. 3 AABBBB aroundA · boundA · dearB · hereB · nearB · appearB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
She wandered so young on the shore around,10·/˘·······
Her thoughts were by naught on earth now bound.9·········
Soon came there a painter, his art he plied10····/˘····
Above the tide,4····
In shadow wide,--4·/··
He painted the shore and herself beside.10·/˘···˘/˘/
More slowly she wandered near him around,10·/˘·/˘····
Her thoughts by a single thing were bound.9····/˘···
And this was his picture wherein he drew10····/˘····
Herself so true,4˘/··
Herself so true,4˘/··
Reflected in ocean with heaven's blue.10˘/˘·/˘·/˘·
All driven and drawn far and wide around10·/˘·······
Her thoughts now by everything were bound.9····/˘···
Far over the ocean,--and yet most dear10····/˘····
The shore right here,4····
The man so near,4····
Did ever the sunshine so bright appear!10·/˘·/···˘/

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