Mrs. Louise Brun

Bjørnstjerne Bjørnson (1832–1910), translated by Arthur Hubbell Palmer · 1915

iambic pentameter · 175 lines · from Poems and Songs

CHORUS(Behind the scenes)Farewell, farewell,From friends, from all, from fatherland!Your soul's calm power is from us riven,Your words, your song, to spirit's praiseIn art's glad temple given.

CHORUS OF MENWe thank you that with youthful fireYou came the doubting to inspire,Who anxious stood with strength untried!

CHORUS OF WOMENWe thank you that in morning-dawnYour woman's tact and aid were drawnOur boisterous youthful art to guide!

ALLThanks for the spring of your life's year,Thanks for the tones so sweet and clear,Thanks for the tints of pearly hue,That colored all you touched anew.For all your noble life on earth,Thanks, thanks!And that you gave our calling worth,Thanks, thanks!

EPILOGUE'T is but a short time since we saw pass byA picture drawn from life, austere and dark,A soul in servitude to strong desires;And all its life in prison-labor spent.Although religion prays and sings its hymns,And poetry and art their sunshine spread,That soul in slavery toils, till white the hair.

She, in whose memory we gather here,Was early made to feel by hard conditions,That clouded life and rudely barred her soul,--How men and women live as toiling slaves!And she rebelled against this servitude;Great powers have birth to longings for the light;Freedom she craved, that others she might free!With restless spirit outward went her questTo people, books; but thoughtful she became,As one whose search was vain; reserved and shy,As one whose courage fails;--until one dayHe, who from fairy-tale and hero-legendThat wondrous bow received of magic might,Stood up and to the vale and mountain played:"Come forth, come from our nation's heart-deep forth,Creative might, that in our nation's morningDidst lift its image up to dread, to greatness,In myths of Asas fair and giants grim!As mountain-walls lean o'er their own reflection,In that thought-ocean we our life could see,With spring, with winter, and with spring again.Thou gav'st our image oft in song and story,In times of darkness and in times of light;Our image meets us wheresoe'er we go,--But yet our nation sees it not, nor looksUp from its toiling thoughts and dull routine!--Oh, wake it, lift it, make it see itself!Then shall it put to use the powers it owns!"

And living echoes answered! Lo, there swarmedElves of the Stage about him, as he played!They made the lamps to burn, and reared the grotto,They brought and brushed the costumes Holberg knew,And in them played their pranks 'neath powdered wigs,--Roamed on the mountains of a summer nightAnd stole the saeter-maiden while she slept,And filled with mortal fear the aged wooer!They danced the goblin-dance in dusk of winter,Played hide-and-seek with their own shadows;They snared the hypocrite in his own sighs,In his own web the pettifogger bound;They scattered wide the hoard a miser gathered,They tripped and threw the petty parish-popeThey saved the tears of innocence seducedAnd on the altar laid as lustrous pearls;They melted hatred in the ice-hard breast,It fell as rain upon the enemy's fields;They bound the slanderer, Mazeppa-like,Upon the back of his wild calumnies;--The crafty man of stealthy selfishnessThey set afloat within an open boat;--But one who freely gave himself, his all,They bore to heaven upon their joyous laughter.They drew the magic ring round those who loved,And to the altar led the blushing pair.They brought heroic forms from barrows oldTo tower in might among the teeming present.--There was not one could longer rest in peace;Himself, his folly, all our country's need,Wholeness victorious, halfness doomed to fail,The power of honest faith, the wreck of doubt,--All this our nation saw in its own image,When strongly lighted on the Stage 't was set.--

And she was part of this! The first full toneThrilled her breast too and woke a thousand mem'riesOf something that she ne'er before had known!On that first evening, when the curtain rose,With timid step one clad in white came forthAnd begged for Norway's art, for our young dramaA home in Norway,--but with so great fear,The gentle voice was trembling, dim the eyes;Yet from the voice, the eyes, the form, the bearingWas heard a promise in sweet modesty;For she who spoke those first words on this Stage,That maiden dark with eyes so deep and true,Lo, it was she!

And soon her art shone clearAnd softly radiant through the evening hours.--With fairy lightness fell its magic gleamsOn hidden longings, sorrows half-concealed,--But gently, tenderly. If joy she touched,'T was always softly. But we all could feelA stream of power so full, that if she hadIn an unguarded hour let it flow freeWith all its deep and swelling tide sincere,It would have borne herself from earth away.

In truth, the calmness of her course through lifeWas never weakness, but was strength controlled;Was never fear, but veneration deepFor those whose souls are great: a model sheFor noble women as for forceful men,--This wreath we weave for her pure memory.

But what she thus had early taught herself,She taught to others. When upon the stageShe stood, depicting woman's painful conflictWith rudeness, violence, and wild desire,Then,--though she wielded but a woman's weapons,Her silent dignity, her subtle smile,Her light derision, all-subduing laughter,--A spirit-dawn gleamed from their flashing play,To usher in a day of victory.She barriers raised around the woman weak(Down-trodden in a half-built social order),She stood forth here so many an evening-hourAnd talked to thousands of a woman's worth.though her call was not fully to freeAll that a woman's heart may hope and dream,She shielded it secure in all its beauty.

This conflict made her reticent, severe;--But sometimes in a song her spirit couldSend forth glad tidings, messages of freedom,Her large free soul revealing. Then we heardSuch longing after full, unbroken peace,Our thoughts were captive held by sad foreboding.--

'T is now come true!--The crape of mourning droopsAbout her name, the tolling bell is still.Her final summons gather us once moreBefore her stage, and here our thanks we utterFor what she gave us. So as she had given,Has no one given. She gave of her sorrow,With bleeding heart beneath her winsome smile.She shared with us the tears her conflict brought,The radiant glory of her victory.

Thanks, prayer-borne thanks, you noble soul,From all your brothers, from your sisters all!From Norway's youthful art enduring thanks!From women to their pure interpreterFarewell and thanks!--From all those whom you liftedOn pinions of the spirit high to beautyOnce more a wreath is brought,--it is the last.

(Laying it before the bust)Now God in His bright heaven makes you glad,And we will make you glad with good remembrance.

CHORUS(Behind the scenes, softly)Farewell, farewell!Now in your graveNo want is known;But what you gave,We ever own.Your spirit's seedShall blossom here,Bear fruit in deed,And sad hearts cheer.

Words in this poem 23
fatherland n.
One's native land; the native land of one's fathers or ancestors. [Imitated fr. D. vaderland. See Father, and Land.]
thank n.
A expression of gratitude; an acknowledgment expressive of a sense of favor or kindness received; obligation, claim, or desert, or gratitude; -- now generally used in the plural. [AS. Þanc, Þonc, thanks, favor, thought; akin to OS. thank favor, pleasure, thanks, D. & G. dank thanks, Icel. Þ\'94kk, Dan. tak, Sw. tack, Goth. Þagks thanks; -]
tact n.
The sense of touch; feeling. [L. tactus a touching, touch, fr. tangere, tactum, to touch: cf. F. tact. See Tangent.]
boisterous a.
Rough or rude; unbending; unyielding; strong; powerful. [OE. boistous; of uncertain origin; cf. W. bwyst wild, savage, wildness, ferocity, bwystus ferocious.]
sunshine n.
The light of the sun, or the place where it shines; the direct rays of the sun, the place where they fall, or the warmth and light which they give.
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
wondrous adv.
In a wonderful or surprising manner or degree; wonderfully. [OE. wonders, adv. (later also adj.). See Wonder, n., and cf. -wards.]
vale n.
A tract of low ground, or of land between hills; a valley. [OE. val, F. val, L. vallis; perhaps akin to Gr. Avalanche, Vail to lower, Valley.]
didst
, the 2d pers. sing. imp. of Do.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
stole n.
A long, loose garment reaching to the feet. [AS. stole, L. stola, Gr. stall. See Stall.]
wooer n.
One who wooes; one who courts or solicits in love; a suitor. [AS. wogere. See Woo, v. t.]
slanderer n.
One who slanders; a defamer; a calumniator. Jer. Taylor.
afloat adv.
Borne on the water; floating; on board ship. [Pref. a- + float.]
teeming a.
Prolific; productive.
wholeness n.
The quality or state of being whole, entire, or sound; entireness; totality; completeness.
halfness n.
The quality of being half; incompleteness.
clad v.
To clothe. Holland.
spoke n.
The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]
tenderly adv.
In a tender manner; with tenderness; mildly; gently; softly; in a manner not to injure or give pain; with pity or affection; kindly.
forceful a.
Full of or processing force; exerting force; mighty.
reticent a.
Inclined to keep silent; reserved; uncommunicative. [L. reticens, p. pr. of reticere to keep silence; re- + tacere to be silent. See Tacit.]
winsome a.
Cheerful; merry; gay; light-hearted. [AS. wynsum, fr. wynn joy; akin to OS. wunnia, OHG. wunna, wunni, G. wonne, Goth. wunan to rejoice (in unwunands sad), AS. wunian to dwell. Win, v. t., Wont, a.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

Mrs. Louise Brun is 175 lines in 16 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%).

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ----A-A chorus · scenes · farewell · fatherland · rivenA · praise · givenA
  2. 2 -AA- men · fireA · inspireA · untried
  3. 3 AAA- womenA · dawnA · drawnA · guide
  4. 4 -AABBCDCD all · yearA · clearA · hueB · anewB · earthC · thanksD · worthC · thanksD
  5. 6 -----AB--B--A-----CBC-A----- here · conditions · soul · slaves · servitude · lightA · freeB · quest · became · shyB · day · legend · mightA · played · forth · morning · greatness · grim · reflectionC · seeB · againC · story · lightA · go · looks · routine · itself · owns
  6. 8 A-A---------- toneA · mem'ries · knownA · rose · forth · drama · fear · eyes · bearing · modesty · stage · true · she
  7. 9 A-------A- clearA · hours · gleams · concealed · touched · feel · had · free · sincereA · away
  8. 16 ---ABABCDCD chorus · softly · farewell · graveA · knownB · gaveA · ownB · seedC · hereD · deedC · cheerD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
CHORUS2/˘
(Behind the scenes)4····
Farewell, farewell,4·/·/
From friends, from all, from fatherland!8·····/˘·
Your soul's calm power is from us riven,10···/˘···/˘
Your words, your song, to spirit's praise8·····/˘·
In art's glad temple given.7···/˘/˘
CHORUS OF MEN4/˘··
We thank you that with youthful fire9·····/˘/˘
You came the doubting to inspire,8···/˘·˘/
Who anxious stood with strength untried!8·/˘···˘/
CHORUS OF WOMEN5/˘·/˘
We thank you that in morning-dawn8·····/˘·
Your woman's tact and aid were drawn8·/˘·····
Our boisterous youthful art to guide!10/˘/˘˘/˘···
ALL1·
Thanks for the spring of your life's year,8········
Thanks for the tones so sweet and clear,8········
Thanks for the tints of pearly hue,8·····/˘·
That colored all you touched anew.10·/˘˘···˘˘/
For all your noble life on earth,8···/˘···
Thanks, thanks!2··
And that you gave our calling worth,9····/˘/˘·
Thanks, thanks!2··
EPILOGUE3/˘·
'T is but a short time since we saw pass by11···········
A picture drawn from life, austere and dark,10·/˘···˘/··
A soul in servitude to strong desires;11···/˘···˘/˘
And all its life in prison-labor spent.10·····/˘/˘·
Although religion prays and sings its hymns,10··˘/˘·····
And poetry and art their sunshine spread,10·/˘˘···/··
That soul in slavery toils, till white the hair.10···/˘·····
She, in whose memory we gather here,10···/˘˘·/˘·
Was early made to feel by hard conditions,11·/˘·····˘/˘
That clouded life and rudely barred her soul,--10·/˘··/˘···
How men and women live as toiling slaves!10···/˘··/˘·
And she rebelled against this servitude;10··˘/···/˘·
Great powers have birth to longings for the light;10·/···/˘···
Freedom she craved, that others she might free!10/˘···/˘···
With restless spirit outward went her quest10·/˘/˘/˘···
To people, books; but thoughtful she became,10·/˘··/˘·˘/
As one whose search was vain; reserved and shy,10······˘/··
As one whose courage fails;--until one day10···/˘·····
He, who from fairy-tale and hero-legend11···/˘··/˘/˘
That wondrous bow received of magic might,10·/˘·˘/·/˘·
Stood up and to the vale and mountain played:10·······/˘·
"Come forth, come from our nation's heart-deep forth,10····//˘···
Creative might, that in our nation's morning11˘/˘···//˘/˘
Didst lift its image up to dread, to greatness,11···/˘····/˘
In myths of Asas fair and giants grim!10·······/˘·
As mountain-walls lean o'er their own reflection,11·/˘·····˘/˘
In that thought-ocean we our life could see,10···/·/˘···
With spring, with winter, and with spring again.10···/˘···˘/
Thou gav'st our image oft in song and story,11··//˘····/˘
In times of darkness and in times of light;10···/˘·····
Our image meets us wheresoe'er we go,--10//˘·······
But yet our nation sees it not, nor looks10··//˘·····
Up from its toiling thoughts and dull routine!--10···/˘···˘/
Oh, wake it, lift it, make it see itself!10········˘/
Then shall it put to use the powers it owns!"10·······/··
And living echoes answered! Lo, there swarmed10·/˘/˘/˘···
Elves of the Stage about him, as he played!10··········
They made the lamps to burn, and reared the grotto,11·········/·
They brought and brushed the costumes Holberg knew,10·····/˘/˘·
And in them played their pranks 'neath powdered wigs,--10·······/˘·
Roamed on the mountains of a summer night10···/˘··/˘·
And stole the saeter-maiden while she slept,10·····/˘···
And filled with mortal fear the aged wooer!10···/˘···/˘
They danced the goblin-dance in dusk of winter,11···/˘····/˘
Played hide-and-seek with their own shadows;10·˘······/·
They snared the hypocrite in his own sighs,10···/˘·····
In his own web the pettifogger bound;9·····/˘˘·
They scattered wide the hoard a miser gathered,11·/˘····/˘/˘
They tripped and threw the petty parish-pope10·····/˘/˘·
They saved the tears of innocence seduced10·····/˘˘˘/
And on the altar laid as lustrous pearls;10···/˘··/˘·
They melted hatred in the ice-hard breast,10·/˘/˘·····
It fell as rain upon the enemy's fields;10·······/˘·
They bound the slanderer, Mazeppa-like,10···/˘˘····
Upon the back of his wild calumnies;--10·······/˘˘
The crafty man of stealthy selfishness10·/˘··/˘/˘˘
They set afloat within an open boat;--10··˘/···/˘·
But one who freely gave himself, his all,10···/˘·˘/··
They bore to heaven upon their joyous laughter.11···/···/˘/˘
They drew the magic ring round those who loved,10···/˘·····
And to the altar led the blushing pair.10···/˘··/˘·
They brought heroic forms from barrows old10··˘/˘··/˘·
To tower in might among the teeming present.11·/·····/˘/˘
--There was not one could longer rest in peace;10·····/˘···
Himself, his folly, all our country's need,10˘/·/˘·//˘·
Wholeness victorious, halfness doomed to fail,10/˘˘/˘/˘···
The power of honest faith, the wreck of doubt,--10·/·/˘·····
All this our nation saw in its own image,11··//˘····/˘
When strongly lighted on the Stage 't was set.--11·/˘/˘······
And she was part of this! The first full tone10··········
Thrilled her breast too and woke a thousand mem'ries10·······/˘·
Of something that she ne'er before had known!10·/˘·······
On that first evening, when the curtain rose,10···/˘··/˘·
With timid step one clad in white came forth10·/˘·······
And begged for Norway's art, for our young drama11···/···/·/˘
A home in Norway,--but with so great fear,10···/······
The gentle voice was trembling, dim the eyes;10·/˘··/˘···
Yet from the voice, the eyes, the form, the bearing11·········/˘
Was heard a promise in sweet modesty;10···/˘··/˘˘
For she who spoke those first words on this Stage,10··········
That maiden dark with eyes so deep and true,10·/˘·······
Lo, it was she!4····
And soon her art shone clear6······
And softly radiant through the evening hours.--11·/˘/˘··/˘/˘
With fairy lightness fell its magic gleams10·/˘/˘··/˘·
On hidden longings, sorrows half-concealed,--10·/˘/˘/˘·˘/
But gently, tenderly. If joy she touched,10·/˘/˘˘····
'T was always softly. But we all could feel11··/·/˘·····
A stream of power so full, that if she had10···/······
In an unguarded hour let it flow free10··˘/˘/····
With all its deep and swelling tide sincere,10·····/˘·˘/
It would have borne herself from earth away.10····˘/··˘/
In truth, the calmness of her course through life10···/˘·····
Was never weakness, but was strength controlled;10·/˘/˘···˘/
Was never fear, but veneration deep10·/˘···˘/˘·
For those whose souls are great: a model she10·······/˘·
For noble women as for forceful men,--10·/˘/˘··/˘·
This wreath we weave for her pure memory.10·······/˘˘
But what she thus had early taught herself,10·····/˘·˘/
She taught to others. When upon the stage10···/˘·····
She stood, depicting woman's painful conflict11··˘/˘/˘/˘/˘
With rudeness, violence, and wild desire,11·/˘/˘˘··˘/˘
Then,--though she wielded but a woman's weapons,11···/˘··/˘/˘
Her silent dignity, her subtle smile,10·/˘/˘˘·/˘·
Her light derision, all-subduing laughter,--11··˘/˘·˘/˘/˘
A spirit-dawn gleamed from their flashing play,10·/˘····/˘·
To usher in a day of victory.10·/˘····/˘˘
She barriers raised around the woman weak10·/˘····/˘·
(Down-trodden in a half-built social order),11·/˘····/˘/˘
She stood forth here so many an evening-hour11·····/·/˘/˘
And talked to thousands of a woman's worth.10···/˘··/˘·
though her call was not fully to free9·····/˘··
All that a woman's heart may hope and dream,10···/˘·····
She shielded it secure in all its beauty.11·/˘·˘/···/˘
This conflict made her reticent, severe;--10·/˘··/˘˘˘/
But sometimes in a song her spirit could10·/·····/˘·
Send forth glad tidings, messages of freedom,11···/˘/˘˘·/˘
Her large free soul revealing. Then we heard10····˘/˘···
Such longing after full, unbroken peace,10·/˘···˘/˘·
Our thoughts were captive held by sad foreboding.--11/··/˘···˘/˘
'T is now come true!--The crape of mourning droops11········/˘·
About her name, the tolling bell is still.10·····/˘···
Her final summons gather us once more10·/˘/˘/˘···
Before her stage, and here our thanks we utter11······/··/˘
For what she gave us. So as she had given,11·········/˘
Has no one given. She gave of her sorrow,11···/˘····/˘
With bleeding heart beneath her winsome smile.10·/˘····/˘·
She shared with us the tears her conflict brought,10·······/˘·
The radiant glory of her victory.11·/˘˘/˘··/˘˘
Thanks, prayer-borne thanks, you noble soul,8·····/˘·
From all your brothers, from your sisters all!10···/˘··/˘·
From Norway's youthful art enduring thanks!10·/·/˘·˘/˘·
From women to their pure interpreter10·/˘···˘/˘˘
Farewell and thanks!--From all those whom you lifted11·/·······/˘
On pinions of the spirit high to beauty11·/˘··/˘··/˘
Once more a wreath is brought,--it is the last.10··········
(Laying it before the bust)7/˘·····
Now God in His bright heaven makes you glad,10·····/˘···
And we will make you glad with good remembrance.11········˘/˘
CHORUS2/˘
(Behind the scenes, softly)6····/˘
Farewell, farewell!4·/·/
Now in your grave4····
No want is known;4····
But what you gave,4····
We ever own.4·/˘·
Your spirit's seed4·/˘·
Shall blossom here,4·/˘·
Bear fruit in deed,4····
And sad hearts cheer.4····

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