Constancy

Ambrose Bierce (1842–1914) · 1903

anapaestic trimeter · ABAB · 28 lines · from Shapes of Clay

Dull were the days and sober,The mountains were brown and bare,For the season was sad OctoberAnd a dirge was in the air.

The mated starlings flew overTo the isles of the southern sea.She wept for her warrior lover--Wept and exclaimed: "Ah, me!

"Long years have I mourned my darlingIn his battle-bed at rest;And it's O, to be a starling,With a mate to share my nest!"

The angels pitied her sorrow,Restoring her warrior's life;And he came to her arms on the morrowTo claim her and take her to wife.

An aged lover--a portly,Bald lover, a trifle too stiff,With manners that would have been courtly,And would have been graceful, if--

If the angels had only restored himWithout the additional yearsThat had passed since the enemy bored himTo death with their long, sharp spears.

As it was, he bored her, and she rambledAway with her father's young groom,And the old lover smiled as he ambledContentedly back to the tomb.

Words in this poem

dirge n.
A piece of music of a mournful character, to accompany funeral rites; a funeral hymn. [Contraction of Lat. dirige, direct thou (imperative of dirigere), the first word of a funeral hymn (Lat. transl. of Psalm v. 8) beginning, "Dirige, Domine, in c]
portly a.
Having a dignified port or mien; of a noble appearance; imposing. [From Port demeanor.]
courtly a.
Relating or belonging to a court. [From Court.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Constancy is in the public domain. This text is taken from Shapes of Clay (1903), Project Gutenberg ebook #12658; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Ambrose Bierce, Constancy, in Shapes of Clay (1903), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #12658, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/bierce-shapes-of-clay/constancy.html, id L28104.

Form and metre

Constancy is 28 lines in 7 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABAB. The metre is anapaestic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 84%).

See other poems in anapaestic trimeter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB soberA · bareB · octoberA · airB
  2. 2 ABAB overA · seaB · loverA · meB
  3. 3 ABAB darlingA · restB · starlingA · nestB
  4. 4 ABAB sorrowA · lifeB · morrowA · wifeB
  5. 5 ABAB portlyA · stiffB · courtlyA · ifB
  6. 6 ABAB himA · yearsB · himA · spearsB
  7. 7 ABAB rambledA · groomB · ambledA · tombB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Dull were the days and sober,7·····/˘
The mountains were brown and bare,7·/˘····
For the season was sad October9··/˘··˘/˘
And a dirge was in the air.7·······
The mated starlings flew over8·/˘/˘···
To the isles of the southern sea.8·····/˘·
She wept for her warrior lover--9····/˘˘/˘
Wept and exclaimed: "Ah, me!6··˘/··
"Long years have I mourned my darling9·····˘·/˘
In his battle-bed at rest;7··/˘···
And it's O, to be a starling,8······/˘
With a mate to share my nest!"7·······
The angels pitied her sorrow,8·/˘/··/˘
Restoring her warrior's life;8˘/˘·/˘˘·
And he came to her arms on the morrow10········/˘
To claim her and take her to wife.8········
An aged lover--a portly,7··/˘·/˘
Bald lover, a trifle too stiff,8·/˘·/˘··
With manners that would have been courtly,9·/˘····/˘
And would have been graceful, if--7····/˘·
If the angels had only restored him10··/˘·/˘˘/·
Without the additional years8···˘/˘˘·
That had passed since the enemy bored him10·····/˘˘··
To death with their long, sharp spears.7·······
As it was, he bored her, and she rambled10········/˘
Away with her father's young groom,8˘/··/˘··
And the old lover smiled as he ambled10···/˘···/˘
Contentedly back to the tomb.8˘/˘˘····

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