On a Sleeping Friend

Hilaire Belloc (1870–1953) · 1923

trochaic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 10 lines · from Sonnets and Verse

Lady, when your lovely headDroops to sink among the Dead,And the quiet places keepYou that so divinely sleep;Then the dead shall blessèd beWith a new solemnity,For such Beauty, so descending,Pledges them that Death is ending.Sleep your fill--but when you wakeDawn shall over Lethe break.

Words in this poem

shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
lethe n.
A river of Hades whose waters when drunk caused forgetfulness of the past.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

On a Sleeping Friend is in the public domain. This text is taken from Sonnets and Verse, Project Gutenberg ebook #60663; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

On a Sleeping Friend is 10 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 80% of the lines. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 93%).

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABB--CCDD headA · deadA · keepB · sleepB · be · solemnity · descendingC · endingC · wakeD · breakD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Lady, when your lovely head7/˘··/˘·
Droops to sink among the Dead,7·······
And the quiet places keep7··/˘/˘·
You that so divinely sleep;7···˘/˘·
Then the dead shall blessèd be6······
With a new solemnity,7···˘/˘˘
For such Beauty, so descending,8··/˘·˘/˘
Pledges them that Death is ending.8/˘····/˘
Sleep your fill--but when you wake7·······
Dawn shall over Lethe break.7····/˘·

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