Hokku 83
Cuckoo! for melancholy meOh! make still deeper loneliness.
Words in this poem
- loneliness n.
- The condition of being lonely; solitude; seclusion.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Hokku 83 is in the public domain. This text is taken from Basho and the Japanese Poetical Epigram (Transactions of the Asiatic Society of Japan, vol. XXX, part 2), Internet Archive, the Basil Hall Chamberlain translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Matsuo Bashō, Hokku 83, in Bashō's Hokku (1902), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/basho-hokku/83.html, id L28836.
Form and metre
Hokku 83 is 2 lines in a single stanza. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic tetrameter.
See other poems in iambic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Cuckoo! for melancholy me | 8 | /··/˘·˘· |
| Oh! make still deeper loneliness. | 8 | ···/˘/˘˘ |
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