Affectionately Inscribed to M. E. H
How joyously the young sea-mewLay dreaming on the waters blueWhereon our little bark had thrownA little shade, the only one,But shadows ever man pursue.
Familiar with the waves and freeAs if their own white foam were he,His heart upon the heart of oceanLay learning all its mystic motion,And throbbing to the throbbing sea.
And such a brightness in his eyeAs if the ocean and the skyWithin him had lit up and nurstA soul God gave him not at first,To comprehend their majesty.
We were not cruel, yet did sunderHis white wing from the blue waves under,And bound it, while his fearless eyesShone up to ours in calm surprise,As deeming us some ocean wonder.
We bore our ocean bird untoA grassy place where he might viewThe flowers that curtsey to the bees,The waving of the tall green trees,The falling of the silver dew.
But flowers of earth were pale to himWho had seen the rainbow fishes swim;And when earth's dew around him layHe thought of ocean's winged spray,And his eye waxed sad and dim.
The green trees round him only madeA prison with their darksome shade;And drooped his wing, and mourned heFor his own boundless glittering sea--Albeit he knew not they could fade.
Then One her gladsome face did bring,Her gentle voice's murmuring,In ocean's stead his heart to moveAnd teach him what was human love:He thought it a strange, mournful thing.
He lay down in his grief to die,(First looking to the sea-like skyThat hath no waves) because, alas!Our human touch did on him pass,And, with our touch, our agony.
Words in this poem
- whereon adv.
- On which; -- used relatively; as, the earth whereon we live.
- darksome a.
- Dark; gloomy; obscure; shaded; cheerless.
- albeit conj.
- Even though; although; notwithstanding. [OE. al be although it be, where al is our all. Cf. Although.]
- gladsome a.
- Pleased; joyful; cheerful.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Affectionately Inscribed to M. E. H is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poetical Works of Elizabeth Barrett Browning, Volume 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #33363; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Elizabeth Barrett Browning, Affectionately Inscribed to M. E. H, in Lady Geraldine's Courtship, and Other Poems (1844), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #33363, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/barrett-browning-poems-2/affectionately-inscribed-to-m-e-h.html, id L24837.
Form and metre
Affectionately Inscribed to M. E. H is 45 lines in 9 stanzas of 5 lines each. The rhyme scheme is AABBA, complete in 5 of its 9 stanzas; the stanza is the Limerick. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%).
See other limericks, other poems in iambic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 AA--A mewA · blueA · thrown · one · pursueA
- 2 AABBA freeA · heA · oceanB · motionB · seaA
- 3 AABB- eyeA · skyA · nurstB · firstB · majesty
- 4 AABBA sunderA · underA · eyesB · surpriseB · wonderA
- 5 -ABBA unto · viewA · beesB · treesB · dewA
- 6 AABBA himA · swimA · layB · sprayB · dimA
- 7 AABBA madeA · shadeA · heB · seaB · fadeA
- 8 AABBA bringA · murmuringA · moveB · loveB · thingA
- 9 AABB- dieA · skyA · alasB · passB · agony
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| How joyously the young sea-mew | 7 | ······· |
| Lay dreaming on the waters blue | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| Whereon our little bark had thrown | 8 | ˘///˘··· |
| A little shade, the only one, | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| But shadows ever man pursue. | 8 | ·/·/˘·˘/ |
| Familiar with the waves and free | 8 | ˘/˘····· |
| As if their own white foam were he, | 8 | ········ |
| His heart upon the heart of ocean | 9 | ·······/˘ |
| Lay learning all its mystic motion, | 9 | ·/˘··/˘/˘ |
| And throbbing to the throbbing sea. | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| And such a brightness in his eye | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| As if the ocean and the sky | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| Within him had lit up and nurst | 8 | ········ |
| A soul God gave him not at first, | 8 | ········ |
| To comprehend their majesty. | 8 | ··˘/·/˘˘ |
| We were not cruel, yet did sunder | 9 | ···/˘··/˘ |
| His white wing from the blue waves under, | 9 | ········· |
| And bound it, while his fearless eyes | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Shone up to ours in calm surprise, | 8 | ···/··˘/ |
| As deeming us some ocean wonder. | 9 | ·/˘··/˘/˘ |
| We bore our ocean bird unto | 8 | ··//˘··· |
| A grassy place where he might view | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| The flowers that curtsey to the bees, | 8 | ·/······ |
| The waving of the tall green trees, | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| The falling of the silver dew. | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| But flowers of earth were pale to him | 8 | ·/······ |
| Who had seen the rainbow fishes swim; | 9 | ····/·/˘· |
| And when earth's dew around him lay | 8 | ········ |
| He thought of ocean's winged spray, | 8 | ···/˘·˘· |
| And his eye waxed sad and dim. | 8 | ····˘··· |
| The green trees round him only made | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| A prison with their darksome shade; | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| And drooped his wing, and mourned he | 8 | ··˘····· |
| For his own boundless glittering sea-- | 8 | ···/˘/˘· |
| Albeit he knew not they could fade. | 9 | ˘/˘······ |
| Then One her gladsome face did bring, | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| Her gentle voice's murmuring, | 8 | ·/˘/˘/˘˘ |
| In ocean's stead his heart to move | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| And teach him what was human love: | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| He thought it a strange, mournful thing. | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| He lay down in his grief to die, | 8 | ········ |
| (First looking to the sea-like sky | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| That hath no waves) because, alas! | 8 | ······˘/ |
| Our human touch did on him pass, | 8 | //˘····· |
| And, with our touch, our agony. | 9 | ··/·/˘/˘˘ |
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