The Happy Days When I Wer Young

William Barnes (1801–1886) · 1844–1862

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 40 lines · from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect

In happy days when I wer young,An' had noo ho, an' laugh'd an' zung,The maid wer merry by her cow,An' men wer merry wi' the plough;But never talk'd, at hwome or outO' doors, o' what's a-talk'd aboutBy many now,--that to despiseThe laws o' God an' man is wise.Wi' daily health, an' daily bread,An' thatch above their shelter'd head,They velt noo fear, an' had noo spite,To keep their eyes awake at night;But slept in peace wi' God on highAn' man below, an' fit to die.

O' grassy meaed an' woody nook,An' waters o' the winden brook,That sprung below the vu'st dark skyThat rain'd, to run till seas be dry;An' hills a-stannen on while allThe works o' man do rise an' vall;An' trees the toddlen child do vindAt vu'st, an' leaeve at last behind;I wish that you could now unvwoldThe peace an' jaey o' times o' wold;An' tell, when death do still my tongue,O' happy days when I wer young.Vrom where wer all this venom brought,To kill our hope an' taint our thought?Clear brook! thy water coulden bringSuch venom vrom thy rocky spring;Nor could it come in zummer blights,Or reaeven storms o' winter nights,Or in the cloud an' viry strokeO' thunder that do split the woak.

O valley dear! I wish that I'D a-liv'd in former times, to dieWi' all the happy souls that trodThy turf in peaece, an' died to God;Or gone wi' them that laugh'd an' zungIn happy days when I wer young!

Words in this poem

despise v. t.
To look down upon with disfavor or contempt; to contemn; to scorn; to disdain; to have a low opinion or contemptuous dislike of. [OF. despis-, in some forms of despire to despise, fr. L. despicere, despectum, to look down upon, despise; de- + spicere, specere, to look. See Spy, and cf. Des]
nook n.
A narrow place formed by an angle in bodies or between bodies; a corner; a recess; a secluded retreat. [OE. nok; cf. Gael. & Ir. niuc.]
wold n.
A wood; a forest. [OE. wold, wald, AS. weald, wald, a wood, forest; akin to OFries. & OS. wald, D. woud, G. wald, Icel. völlr, a field, and probably to Gr. va a garden, inclosure.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

The Happy Days When I Wer Young is 40 lines in 3 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 90% of the lines: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%). 100% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.0 syllables. 35% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFFGG youngA · zungA · cowB · ploughB · outC · aboutC · despiseD · wiseD · breadE · headE · spiteF · nightF · highG · dieG
  2. 2 AABB--CCDDEEFFGG--HH nookA · brookA · skyB · dryB · all · vall · vindC · behindC · unvwoldD · woldD · tongueE · youngE · broughtF · thoughtF · bringG · springG · blights · nights · strokeH · woakH
  3. 3 AABBCC iA · dieA · trodB · godB · zungC · youngC
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
In happy days when I wer young,8·/˘·····
An' had noo ho, an' laugh'd an' zung,8········
The maid wer merry by her cow,8···/˘···
An' men wer merry wi' the plough;8···/˘···
But never talk'd, at hwome or out8·/˘·····
O' doors, o' what's a-talk'd about8········
By many now,--that to despise8·/˘···˘/
The laws o' God an' man is wise.8········
Wi' daily health, an' daily bread,8·/˘··/˘·
An' thatch above their shelter'd head,8·····/˘·
They velt noo fear, an' had noo spite,8········
To keep their eyes awake at night;8····˘/··
But slept in peace wi' God on high8········
An' man below, an' fit to die.8········
O' grassy meaed an' woody nook,8·/˘··/˘·
An' waters o' the winden brook,8·/˘·····
That sprung below the vu'st dark sky8········
That rain'd, to run till seas be dry;8········
An' hills a-stannen on while all8········
The works o' man do rise an' vall;8········
An' trees the toddlen child do vind8········
At vu'st, an' leaeve at last behind;8········
I wish that you could now unvwold8········
The peace an' jaey o' times o' wold;8········
An' tell, when death do still my tongue,8········
O' happy days when I wer young.8·/˘·····
Vrom where wer all this venom brought,8·····/˘·
To kill our hope an' taint our thought?8··/···/·
Clear brook! thy water coulden bring8···/˘···
Such venom vrom thy rocky spring;8·/˘··/˘·
Nor could it come in zummer blights,8········
Or reaeven storms o' winter nights,8·····/˘·
Or in the cloud an' viry stroke8········
O' thunder that do split the woak.8·/˘·····
O valley dear! I wish that I8·/˘·····
'D a-liv'd in former times, to die9····/˘···
Wi' all the happy souls that trod8···/˘···
Thy turf in peaece, an' died to God;8········
Or gone wi' them that laugh'd an' zung8········
In happy days when I wer young!8·/˘·····

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