Kindness

William Barnes (1801–1886) · 1844–1862

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 40 lines · from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect

Good Meaester Collins heaerd woone dayA man a-talken, that did zayIt woulden answer to be kind,He thought, to vo'k o' grov'len mind,Vor they would only teaeke it wrong,That you be weak an' they be strong."No," cried the goodman, "never mind,Let vo'k be thankless,--you be kind;Don't do your good for e'thly endsAt man's own call vor man's amends.Though souls befriended should remainAs thankless as the sea vor rain,On them the good's a-lost 'tis true,But never can be lost to you.Look on the cool-feaeced moon at nightWi' light-vull ring, at utmost height,A-casten down, in gleamen strokes,His beams upon the dim-bough'd woaks,To show the cliff a-risen steep,To show the stream a-vallen deep,To show where winden roads do leaed,An' prickly thorns do ward the meaed.While sheaedes o' boughs do flutter darkUpon the woak-trees' moon-bright bark.There in the lewth, below the hill,The nightengeaele, wi' ringen bill,Do zing among the soft-air'd groves,While up below the house's ovesThe maid, a-looken vrom her roomDrough window, in her youthvul bloom,Do listen, wi' white ears amongHer glossy heaeirlocks, to the zong.If, then, the while the moon do lightThe lwonesome zinger o' the night,His cwold-beam'd light do seem to showThe prowlen owls the mouse below.What then? Because an evil will,Ov his sweet good, mid meaeke zome ill,Shall all his feaece be kept behindThe dark-brow'd hills to leaeve us blind?"

Words in this poem

goodman n.
A familiar appellation of civility, equivalent to [Good + man]
thankless a.
Not acknowledging favors; not expressing thankfulness; unthankful; ungrateful.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Kindness is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect, Project Gutenberg ebook #21785; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: William Barnes, Kindness, in Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect (1844–1862), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #21785, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/barnes-dorset/kindness.html, id L02348.

Form and metre

Kindness is 40 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 90% of the lines: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%). 100% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.1 syllables. 30% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in octosyllabic couplets, other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 --AABBAACCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKK--LLMMNNOOPPQQ day · zay · kindA · mindA · wrongB · strongB · mindA · kindA · endsC · amendsC · remainD · rainD · trueE · youE · nightF · heightF · strokesG · woaksG · steepH · deepH · leaedI · meaedI · darkJ · barkJ · hillK · billK · groves · oves · roomL · bloomL · amongM · zongM · lightN · nightN · showO · belowO · willP · illP · behindQ · blindQ
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Good Meaester Collins heaerd woone day8···/˘···
A man a-talken, that did zay8········
It woulden answer to be kind,8···/˘···
He thought, to vo'k o' grov'len mind,8········
Vor they would only teaeke it wrong,8···/˘···
That you be weak an' they be strong.8········
"No," cried the goodman, "never mind,8···/˘/˘·
Let vo'k be thankless,--you be kind;8···/˘···
Don't do your good for e'thly ends8········
At man's own call vor man's amends.8······˘/
Though souls befriended should remain8··˘/˘·˘/
As thankless as the sea vor rain,8·/˘·····
On them the good's a-lost 'tis true,8········
But never can be lost to you.8·/˘·····
Look on the cool-feaeced moon at night8········
Wi' light-vull ring, at utmost height,8·····/··
A-casten down, in gleamen strokes,8·/˘·····
His beams upon the dim-bough'd woaks,8········
To show the cliff a-risen steep,8·····/˘·
To show the stream a-vallen deep,8········
To show where winden roads do leaed,8········
An' prickly thorns do ward the meaed.8·/˘·····
While sheaedes o' boughs do flutter dark8·····/˘·
Upon the woak-trees' moon-bright bark.8········
There in the lewth, below the hill,8········
The nightengeaele, wi' ringen bill,9······/˘·
Do zing among the soft-air'd groves,8········
While up below the house's oves8·····/˘·
The maid, a-looken vrom her room8········
Drough window, in her youthvul bloom,8·/˘·····
Do listen, wi' white ears among8·/˘·····
Her glossy heaeirlocks, to the zong.8·/˘·····
If, then, the while the moon do light8········
The lwonesome zinger o' the night,9····/˘···
His cwold-beam'd light do seem to show8········
The prowlen owls the mouse below.8········
What then? Because an evil will,8·····/˘·
Ov his sweet good, mid meaeke zome ill,8········
Shall all his feaece be kept behind8········
The dark-brow'd hills to leaeve us blind?"8········

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