Hay-Carren

William Barnes (1801–1886) · 1844–1862

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 48 lines · from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect

'Tis merry ov a zummer's day,When vo'k be out a-haulen hay,Where boughs, a-spread upon the ground,Do meaeke the staddle big an' round;An' grass do stand in pook, or lieIn long-back'd weaeles or parsels, dry.There I do vind it stir my heartTo hear the frothen hosses snort,A-haulen on, wi' sleek heaeir'd hides,The red-wheel'd waggon's deep-blue zides.Aye; let me have woone cup o' drink,An' hear the linky harness clink,An' then my blood do run so warm,An' put sich strangth 'ithin my eaerm,That I do long to toss a pick,A-pitchen or a-meaeken rick.

The bwoy is at the hosse's head,An' up upon the waggon bedThe lwoaders, strong o' eaerm do stan',At head, an' back at tail, a man,Wi' skill to build the lwoad uprightAn' bind the vwolded corners tight;An' at each zide [=o]'m, sprack an' strong,A pitcher wi' his long-stem'd prong,Avore the best two women nowA-call'd to reaeky after plough.

When I do pitchy, 'tis my prideVor Jenny Hine to reaeke my zide,An' zee her fling her reaeke, an' reachSo vur, an' teaeke in sich a streech;An' I don't shatter hay, an' meaekeMwore work than needs vor Jenny's reaeke.I'd sooner zee the weaeles' high rowsLik' hedges up above my nose,Than have light work myzelf, an' vindPoor Jeaene a-beaet an' left behind;Vor she would sooner drop down dead.Than let the pitchers get a-head.

'Tis merry at the rick to zeeHow picks do wag, an' hay do vlee.While woone's unlwoaden, woone do teaekeThe pitches in; an' zome do meaekeThe lofty rick upright an' roun',An' tread en hard, an' reaeke en down,An' tip en, when the zun do zet,To shoot a sudden vall o' wet.An' zoo 'tis merry any dayWhere vo'k be out a-carren hay.

Words in this poem

staddle n.
Anything which serves for support; a staff; a prop; a crutch; a cane. [AS. stathol, srathul, a foundation, firm seat; akin to E. stand. *163. See Stand, v. i.]
clink v. t.
To cause to give out a slight, sharp, tinkling, sound, as by striking metallic or other sonorous bodies together. [OE. clinken; akin to G. klingen, D. klinken, SW. klinga, Dan. klinge; prob. of imitative origin. Cf. Clank, Clench, Click, v. i.]
sprack a.
Quick; lively' alert. [Cf. Icel. spækr sprightly, dial. Sw. spräk, spräg, spirited, mettlesome; or Gael. spraic vigor.]
prong n.
A sharp-pointed instrument. [Cf. D. prangen to pinch, press, LG. prange a stick, or W. procio to thrust, E. prowl, pang.]
pitchy a.
Partaking of the qualities of pitch; resembling pitch. [From 1st Pitch.]
jenny n.
A familiar or pet form of the proper name Jane.
hine n.
A servant; a farm laborer; a peasant; a hind. [See Hind a servant.]
needs adv.
Of necessity; necessarily; indispensably; -- often with must, and equivalent to of need. [Orig. gen. of need, used as an adverb. Cf. - wards.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Hay-Carren is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect, Project Gutenberg ebook #21785; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Hay-Carren is 48 lines in 4 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 92% of the lines: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%).

See other poems in octosyllabic couplets, other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCC--DDEEFFGG dayA · hayA · groundB · roundB · lieC · dryC · heart · snort · hidesD · zidesD · drinkE · clinkE · warmF · eaermF · pickG · rickG
  2. 2 AABBCCDDEE headA · bedA · stanB · manB · uprightC · tightC · strongD · prongD · nowE · ploughE
  3. 3 AABBCCDDEEFF prideA · zideA · reachB · streechB · meaekeC · reaekeC · rowsD · noseD · vindE · behindE · deadF · headF
  4. 4 AABB--CCDD zeeA · vleeA · teaekeB · meaekeB · roun · down · zetC · wetC · dayD · hayD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
'Tis merry ov a zummer's day,8·/˘·····
When vo'k be out a-haulen hay,8········
Where boughs, a-spread upon the ground,8········
Do meaeke the staddle big an' round;8···/˘···
An' grass do stand in pook, or lie8········
In long-back'd weaeles or parsels, dry.8········
There I do vind it stir my heart8········
To hear the frothen hosses snort,8·····/˘·
A-haulen on, wi' sleek heaeir'd hides,8········
The red-wheel'd waggon's deep-blue zides.8········
Aye; let me have woone cup o' drink,8········
An' hear the linky harness clink,8·····/˘·
An' then my blood do run so warm,8········
An' put sich strangth 'ithin my eaerm,10··········
That I do long to toss a pick,8········
A-pitchen or a-meaeken rick.8········
The bwoy is at the hosse's head,8········
An' up upon the waggon bed8········
The lwoaders, strong o' eaerm do stan',8········
At head, an' back at tail, a man,8········
Wi' skill to build the lwoad upright8······˘/
An' bind the vwolded corners tight;8·····/˘·
An' at each zide [=o]'m, sprack an' strong,9·········
A pitcher wi' his long-stem'd prong,8·/˘·····
Avore the best two women now8·····/˘·
A-call'd to reaeky after plough.8········
When I do pitchy, 'tis my pride8···/˘···
Vor Jenny Hine to reaeke my zide,8·/˘·····
An' zee her fling her reaeke, an' reach8········
So vur, an' teaeke in sich a streech;10··········
An' I don't shatter hay, an' meaeke8···/˘···
Mwore work than needs vor Jenny's reaeke.8·····/˘·
I'd sooner zee the weaeles' high rows8·/˘·····
Lik' hedges up above my nose,8·/˘·····
Than have light work myzelf, an' vind8········
Poor Jeaene a-beaet an' left behind;8········
Vor she would sooner drop down dead.8···/˘···
Than let the pitchers get a-head.8···/˘···
'Tis merry at the rick to zee8·/˘·····
How picks do wag, an' hay do vlee.8········
While woone's unlwoaden, woone do teaeke8········
The pitches in; an' zome do meaeke8·/˘·····
The lofty rick upright an' roun',8·/˘·˘/··
An' tread en hard, an' reaeke en down,8········
An' tip en, when the zun do zet,8········
To shoot a sudden vall o' wet.8···/˘···
An' zoo 'tis merry any day8···/˘/˘·
Where vo'k be out a-carren hay.8········

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