Good Meaester Collins

William Barnes (1801–1886) · 1844–1862

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 60 lines · from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect

Aye, Meaester Collins wer a-blestWi' greaece, an' now's a-gone to rest;An' though his heart did beaet so meek'S a little child's, when he did speak,The godly wisdom ov his tongueWer dew o' greaece to wold an' young.

'Twer woonce, upon a zummer's tide,I zot at Brookwell by his zide,Avore the leaeke, upon the rocks,Above the water's idle shocks,As little playsome weaeves did zwimAgeaen the water's windy brim,Out where the lofty tower o' stwoneDid stan' to years o' wind an' zun;An' where the zwellen pillars boreA pworch above the heavy door,Wi' sister sheaedes a-reachen coolAthirt the stwones an' sparklen pool.

I spoke zome word that meaede en smile,O' girt vo'k's wealth an' poor vo'k's tweil,As if I pin'd, vor want ov greaece,To have a lord's or squier's pleaece."No, no," he zaid, "what God do zendIs best vor all o's in the end,An' all that we do need the mwostDo come to us wi' leaest o' cost;--Why, who could live upon the e'th'Ithout God's gift ov air vor breath?Or who could bide below the zunIf water didden rise an' run?An' who could work below the skiesIf zun an' moon did never rise?Zoo air an' water, an' the light,Be higher gifts, a-reckon'd right,Than all the goold the darksome clayCan ever yield to zunny day:But then the air is roun' our heads,Abroad by day, or on our beds;Where land do gi'e us room to bide,Or seas do spread vor ships to ride;An' He do zend his waters free,Vrom clouds to lands, vrom lands to sea:An' mornen light do blush an' glow,'Ithout our tweil--'ithout our ho.

"Zoo let us never pine, in sin,Vor gifts that ben't the best to win;The heaps o' goold that zome mid pile,Wi' sleepless nights an' peaceless tweil;Or manor that mid reach so wideAs Blackmwore is vrom zide to zide,Or kingly sway, wi' life or death,Vor helpless childern ov the e'th:Vor theaese ben't gifts, as He do know,That He in love should vu'st bestow;Or else we should have had our sheaereO'm all wi' little tweil or ceaere.

"Ov all His choicest gifts, His cryIs, 'Come, ye moneyless, and buy.'Zoo blest is he that can but liftHis prayer vor a happy gift."

Words in this poem

wold n.
A wood; a forest. [OE. wold, wald, AS. weald, wald, a wood, forest; akin to OFries. & OS. wald, D. woud, G. wald, Icel. völlr, a field, and probably to Gr. va a garden, inclosure.]
playsome a.
Playful; wanton; sportive. R. Browning.
spoke n.
The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]
girt v. t.
To gird; to encircle; to invest by means of a girdle; to measure the girth of; as, to girt a tree. [From Girt, n., cf. Girth, v.]
wealth n.
Weal; welfare; prosperity; good. [OE. welthe, from wele; cf. D. weelde luxury. See Weal prosperity.]
bide v. i.
To dwell; to inhabit; to abide; to stay. [OE. biden, AS. bidan; akin to OHG. bitan, Goth. beidan, Icel. bi; perh. orig., to wait with trust, and akin to bid. See Bid, v. t., and cf. Abide.]
darksome a.
Dark; gloomy; obscure; shaded; cheerless.
sleepless a.
Having no sleep; wakeful.
peaceless a.
Without peace; disturbed. Sandys.
moneyless a.
Destitute of money; penniless; impecunious.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

Good Meaester Collins is 60 lines in 5 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 93% of the lines: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%). 99% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.0 syllables. 28% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in octosyllabic couplets, other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCC blestA · restA · meekB · speakB · tongueC · youngC
  2. 2 AABBCC--DDEE tideA · zideA · rocksB · shocksB · zwimC · brimC · stwone · zun · boreD · doorD · coolE · poolE
  3. 3 AABBCCDDEE--FFGGHHIIJJKKLL smileA · tweilA · greaeceB · pleaeceB · zendC · endC · mwostD · costD · e'thE · breathE · zun · run · skiesF · riseF · lightG · rightG · clayH · dayH · headsI · bedsI · bideJ · rideJ · freeK · seaK · glowL · hoL
  4. 4 AABBCCDDEEFF sinA · winA · pileB · tweilB · wideC · zideC · deathD · e'thD · knowE · bestowE · sheaereF · ceaereF
  5. 5 AABB cryA · buyA · liftB · giftB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Aye, Meaester Collins wer a-blest8···/˘···
Wi' greaece, an' now's a-gone to rest;8········
An' though his heart did beaet so meek8········
'S a little child's, when he did speak,9··/˘·····
The godly wisdom ov his tongue8·/˘/˘···
Wer dew o' greaece to wold an' young.8········
'Twer woonce, upon a zummer's tide,8········
I zot at Brookwell by his zide,8········
Avore the leaeke, upon the rocks,8········
Above the water's idle shocks,8···/˘/˘·
As little playsome weaeves did zwim8·/˘/˘···
Ageaen the water's windy brim,8···/˘/˘·
Out where the lofty tower o' stwone8···/˘/··
Did stan' to years o' wind an' zun;8········
An' where the zwellen pillars bore8·····/˘·
A pworch above the heavy door,8·····/˘·
Wi' sister sheaedes a-reachen cool8·/˘·····
Athirt the stwones an' sparklen pool.8········
I spoke zome word that meaede en smile,8········
O' girt vo'k's wealth an' poor vo'k's tweil,8········
As if I pin'd, vor want ov greaece,8········
To have a lord's or squier's pleaece.8·····/˘·
"No, no," he zaid, "what God do zend8········
Is best vor all o's in the end,8········
An' all that we do need the mwost8········
Do come to us wi' leaest o' cost;--8········
Why, who could live upon the e'th8········
'Ithout God's gift ov air vor breath?8········
Or who could bide below the zun8········
If water didden rise an' run?8·/˘·····
An' who could work below the skies8········
If zun an' moon did never rise?8·····/˘·
Zoo air an' water, an' the light,8···/˘···
Be higher gifts, a-reckon'd right,8·/˘··/˘·
Than all the goold the darksome clay8·····/˘·
Can ever yield to zunny day:8·/˘·····
But then the air is roun' our heads,8······/·
Abroad by day, or on our beds;8˘/····/·
Where land do gi'e us room to bide,8········
Or seas do spread vor ships to ride;8········
An' He do zend his waters free,8·····/˘·
Vrom clouds to lands, vrom lands to sea:8········
An' mornen light do blush an' glow,8········
'Ithout our tweil--'ithout our ho.8··/···/·
"Zoo let us never pine, in sin,8···/˘···
Vor gifts that ben't the best to win;8········
The heaps o' goold that zome mid pile,8········
Wi' sleepless nights an' peaceless tweil;8·/˘··/˘·
Or manor that mid reach so wide8·/˘·····
As Blackmwore is vrom zide to zide,8········
Or kingly sway, wi' life or death,8·/˘·····
Vor helpless childern ov the e'th:8·/˘·····
Vor theaese ben't gifts, as He do know,8········
That He in love should vu'st bestow;8······˘/
Or else we should have had our sheaere8······/·
O'm all wi' little tweil or ceaere.8···/˘···
"Ov all His choicest gifts, His cry8···/˘···
Is, 'Come, ye moneyless, and buy.'8···/˘˘··
Zoo blest is he that can but lift8········
His prayer vor a happy gift."7····/˘·

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