Fall

William Barnes (1801–1886) · 1844–1862

trochaic tetrameter · 24 lines · from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect

Now the yollow zun, a-runnenDaily round a smaller bow,Still wi' cloudless sky's a-zunnenAll the sheenen land below.Vewer blossoms now do blow,But the fruit's a-showenReds an' blues, an' purple hues,By the leaves a-glowen.

Now the childern be a-pryenRoun' the berried bremble-bow,Zome a-laughen, woone a-cryenVor the slent her frock do show.Bwoys be out a-pullen lowSlooe-boughs, or a-runnenWhere, on zides of hazzle-wrides,Nuts do hang a-zunnen.

Where do reach roun' wheat-ricks yollowOves o' thatch, in long-drawn ring,There, by stubbly hump an' hollow,Russet-dappled dogs do spring.Soon my apple-trees wull flingBloomen balls below em,That shall hide, on ev'ry zideGround where we do drow em.

Words in this poem

cloudless a.
Without a cloud; clear; bright.
berried a.
Furnished with berries; consisting of a berry; baccate; as, a berried shrub.
stubbly a.
Covered with stubble; stubbled.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Fall is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect, Project Gutenberg ebook #21785; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Fall is 24 lines in 3 stanzas of 8 lines each. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%). 100% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.0 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 42% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in trochaic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABBC-C runnenA · bowB · zunnenA · belowB · blowB · showenC · hues · glowenC
  2. 2 ABABBC-C pryenA · bowB · cryenA · showB · lowB · runnenC · wrides · zunnenC
  3. 3 ABABBC-C yollowA · ringB · hollowA · springB · flingB · emC · zide · emC
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Now the yollow zun, a-runnen8········
Daily round a smaller bow,7/˘··/˘·
Still wi' cloudless sky's a-zunnen8··/˘····
All the sheenen land below.7·······
Vewer blossoms now do blow,7··/˘···
But the fruit's a-showen6······
Reds an' blues, an' purple hues,7····/˘·
By the leaves a-glowen.6······
Now the childern be a-pryen7·······
Roun' the berried bremble-bow,7··/˘···
Zome a-laughen, woone a-cryen7·······
Vor the slent her frock do show.7·······
Bwoys be out a-pullen low7····/˘·
Slooe-boughs, or a-runnen6······
Where, on zides of hazzle-wrides,7·······
Nuts do hang a-zunnen.6······
Where do reach roun' wheat-ricks yollow8········
Oves o' thatch, in long-drawn ring,7·······
There, by stubbly hump an' hollow,8··/˘··/˘
Russet-dappled dogs do spring.7/˘·˘···
Soon my apple-trees wull fling8··/˘····
Bloomen balls below em,6······
That shall hide, on ev'ry zide7·······
Ground where we do drow em.6······

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