Dock-Leaves

William Barnes (1801–1886) · 1844–1862

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 32 lines · from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect

The dock-leaves that do spread so wideUp yonder zunny bank's green zide,Do bring to mind what we did doAt play wi' dock-leaves years agoo:How we,--when nettles had a-stungOur little hands, when we wer young,--Did rub em wi' a dock, an' zing"Out nettl', in dock. In dock, out sting."An' when your feaece, in zummer's het,Did sheen wi' tricklen draps o' zweat,How you, a-zot bezide the bank,Didst toss your little head, an' pank,An' teaeke a dock-leaf in your han',An' whisk en lik' a leaedy's fan;While I did hunt, 'ithin your zight,Vor streaky cockle-shells to fight.

In all our play-geaemes we did bruiseThe dock-leaves wi' our nimble shoes;Bwoth where we merry chaps did flingYou maidens in the orcha'd swing,An' by the zaw-pit's dousty bank,Where we did tait upon a plank.--(D'ye mind how woonce, you cou'den zitThe bwoard, an' vell off into pit?)An' when we hunted you aboutThe grassy barken, in an' outAmong the ricks, your vlee-en frocksAn' nimble veet did strik' the docks.An' zoo they docks, a-spread so wideUp yonder zunny bank's green zide,Do bring to mind what we did do,Among the dock-leaves years agoo.

Words in this poem

yonder adv.
At a distance, but within view. [OE. yonder, ýonder; cf. OD. ginder, Goth. jaindr there. Yond, adv.]
sheen v. i.
To shine; to glisten.
didst
, the 2d pers. sing. imp. of Do.
vell n.
The salted stomach of a calf, used in making cheese; a rennet bag. [Cf. L. vellus the skin of a sheep with the wool on it, a fleece, a hide or pelt, or E. fell a hide.]
barken a.
Made of bark. Whittier.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Dock-Leaves is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect, Project Gutenberg ebook #21785; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: William Barnes, Dock-Leaves, in Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect (1844–1862), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #21785, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/barnes-dorset/dock-leaves.html, id L02040.

Form and metre

Dock-Leaves is 32 lines in 2 stanzas of 16 lines each. It is in rhyming couplets, 81% of the lines: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 98% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.0 syllables. 34% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in octosyllabic couplets, other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AA--BBCCDDEEFFGG wideA · zideA · do · agoo · stungB · youngB · zingC · stingC · hetD · zweatD · bankE · pankE · hanF · fanF · zightG · fightG
  2. 2 AABBCC--DDEEFF-- bruiseA · shoesA · flingB · swingB · bankC · plankC · zit · pit · aboutD · outD · frocksE · docksE · wideF · zideF · do · agoo
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The dock-leaves that do spread so wide8········
Up yonder zunny bank's green zide,8·/˘·····
Do bring to mind what we did do8········
At play wi' dock-leaves years agoo:8········
How we,--when nettles had a-stung8···/˘···
Our little hands, when we wer young,--8//˘·····
Did rub em wi' a dock, an' zing8········
"Out nettl', in dock. In dock, out sting."8········
An' when your feaece, in zummer's het,8········
Did sheen wi' tricklen draps o' zweat,8········
How you, a-zot bezide the bank,8········
Didst toss your little head, an' pank,8···/˘···
An' teaeke a dock-leaf in your han',8········
An' whisk en lik' a leaedy's fan;8········
While I did hunt, 'ithin your zight,8········
Vor streaky cockle-shells to fight.8·/˘/˘···
In all our play-geaemes we did bruise8··/·····
The dock-leaves wi' our nimble shoes;8····//˘·
Bwoth where we merry chaps did fling8···/˘···
You maidens in the orcha'd swing,8·/˘·····
An' by the zaw-pit's dousty bank,8········
Where we did tait upon a plank.8········
--(D'ye mind how woonce, you cou'den zit8········
The bwoard, an' vell off into pit?)8········
An' when we hunted you about8···/˘···
The grassy barken, in an' out8·/˘/˘···
Among the ricks, your vlee-en frocks8········
An' nimble veet did strik' the docks.8·/˘·····
An' zoo they docks, a-spread so wide8········
Up yonder zunny bank's green zide,8·/˘·····
Do bring to mind what we did do,8········
Among the dock-leaves years agoo.8········

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