Brookwell

William Barnes (1801–1886) · 1844–1862

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 80 lines · from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect

Well, I do zay 'tis wo'th woone's whileTo beaet the doust a good six mileTo zee the pleaece the squier plann'dAt Brookwell, now a-meaede by hand;Wi' oben lawn, an' grove, an' pon',An' gravel-walks as cleaen as bron;An' grass a'most so soft to treadAs velvet-pile o' silken thread;An' mounds wi' maesh, an' rocks wi' flow'rs,An' ivy-sheaeded zummer bow'rs,An' dribblen water down belowThe stwonen arches lofty bow.An' there do sound the watervallBelow a cavern's maeshy wall,Where peaele-green light do struggle downA leafy crevice at the crown.An' there do gush the foamy bowO' water, white as driven snow:An' there, a zitten all alwone,A little maid o' marble stwoneDo leaen her little cheaek azideUpon her lily han', an' bideBezide the vallen stream to zeeHer pitcher vill'd avore her knee.An' then the brook, a-rollen darkBelow a leaenen yew-tree's bark,Wi' playsome ripples that do runA-flashen to the western zun,Do shoot, at last, wi' foamy shocks,Athirt a ledge o' craggy rocks,A-casten in his heaesty flight,Upon the stwones a robe o' white;An' then ageaen do goo an' vallBelow a bridge's arched wall,Where vo'k agwain athirt do passVow'r little bwoys a-cast in brass;An' woone do hold an angler's wand,Wi' steady hand, above the pond;An' woone, a-pweinten to the streamHis little vinger-tip, do seemA-showen to his playmeaetes' eyes,Where he do zee the vishes rise;An' woone ageaen, wi' smilen lips,Do put a vish his han' do clips'Ithin a basket, loosely tiedAbout his shoulder at his zide:An' after that the fourth do standA-holden back his pretty handBehind his little ear, to drowA stwone upon the stream below.An' then the housen, that be allSich pretty hwomes, vrom big to small,A-looken south, do cluster roundA zunny ledge o' risen ground,Avore a wood, a-nestled warm,In lewth ageaen the northern storm,Where smoke, a-wreathen blue, do spreadAbove the tuns o' dusky red,An' window-peaenes do glitter brightWi' burnen streams o' zummer light,Below the vine, a-train'd to hemTheir zides 'ithin his leafy stem,An' rangle on, wi' flutt'ren leaves,Below the houses' thatchen eaves.An' drough a lawn a-spread avoreThe windows, an' the pworched door,A path do wind 'ithin a hatch,A-vasten'd wi' a clicken latch,An' there up over ruf an' tun,Do stan' the smooth-wall'd church o' stwone,Wi' carved windows, thin an' tall,A-reachen up the lofty wall;An' battlements, a-stannen roundThe tower, ninety veet vrom ground,Vrom where a teaep'ren speer do springSo high's the mornen lark do zing.Zoo I do zay 'tis wo'th woone's whileTo beaet the doust a good six mile,To zee the pleaece the squier plann'dAt Brookwell, now a-meaede by hand.

Words in this poem

squier n.
A square. See 1st Squire.
bide v. i.
To dwell; to inhabit; to abide; to stay. [OE. biden, AS. bidan; akin to OHG. bitan, Goth. beidan, Icel. bi; perh. orig., to wait with trust, and akin to bid. See Bid, v. t., and cf. Abide.]
playsome a.
Playful; wanton; sportive. R. Browning.
rangle v. i.
To range about in an irregular manner.
latch v. t.
To smear; to anoint. [Cf. F. lécher to lick (of German origin). Cf. Lick.]
speer v. t.
To ask. See Spere.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Brookwell is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect, Project Gutenberg ebook #21785; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Brookwell is 80 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 85% of the lines: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 93%). 100% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.1 syllables. 41% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in octosyllabic couplets, other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABB--CCDD--EEFF--GGHHIIJJ--KKLL--MMNNOOPPQQRRSSTTUUVVWWXXYYZZaabbcc--ddeeffgghh whileA · mileA · plann'dB · handB · pon · bron · treadC · threadC · flow'rsD · bow'rsD · below · bow · watervallE · wallE · downF · crownF · bow · snow · alwoneG · stwoneG · azideH · bideH · zeeI · kneeI · darkJ · barkJ · run · zun · shocksK · rocksK · flightL · whiteL · vall · wall · passM · brassM · wandN · pondN · streamO · seemO · eyesP · riseP · lipsQ · clipsQ · tiedR · zideR · standS · handS · drowT · belowT · allU · smallU · roundV · groundV · warmW · stormW · spreadX · redX · brightY · lightY · hemZ · stemZ · leavesa · eavesa · avoreb · doorb · hatchc · latchc · tun · stwone · talld · walld · rounde · grounde · springf · zingf · whileg · mileg · plann'dh · handh
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Well, I do zay 'tis wo'th woone's while8········
To beaet the doust a good six mile8········
To zee the pleaece the squier plann'd8·····/˘·
At Brookwell, now a-meaede by hand;8········
Wi' oben lawn, an' grove, an' pon',8········
An' gravel-walks as cleaen as bron;8·/˘·····
An' grass a'most so soft to tread8········
As velvet-pile o' silken thread;8·/˘··/˘·
An' mounds wi' maesh, an' rocks wi' flow'rs,8········
An' ivy-sheaeded zummer bow'rs,8·/˘·····
An' dribblen water down below8···/˘···
The stwonen arches lofty bow.8···/˘/˘·
An' there do sound the watervall8········
Below a cavern's maeshy wall,8···/˘···
Where peaele-green light do struggle down9······/˘·
A leafy crevice at the crown.8·/˘/˘···
An' there do gush the foamy bow8·····/˘·
O' water, white as driven snow:8·/˘··/˘·
An' there, a zitten all alwone,8········
A little maid o' marble stwone8·/˘··/˘·
Do leaen her little cheaek azide8···/˘···
Upon her lily han', an' bide8···/˘···
Bezide the vallen stream to zee8········
Her pitcher vill'd avore her knee.8·/˘·····
An' then the brook, a-rollen dark8·····/˘·
Below a leaenen yew-tree's bark,9·········
Wi' playsome ripples that do run8·/˘/˘···
A-flashen to the western zun,8·····/˘·
Do shoot, at last, wi' foamy shocks,8·····/˘·
Athirt a ledge o' craggy rocks,8·····/˘·
A-casten in his heaesty flight,8·/˘·····
Upon the stwones a robe o' white;8········
An' then ageaen do goo an' vall8········
Below a bridge's arched wall,8···/˘·˘·
Where vo'k agwain athirt do pass8········
Vow'r little bwoys a-cast in brass;8·/˘·····
An' woone do hold an angler's wand,8·····/˘·
Wi' steady hand, above the pond;8·/˘·····
An' woone, a-pweinten to the stream8········
His little vinger-tip, do seem8·/˘·····
A-showen to his playmeaetes' eyes,8········
Where he do zee the vishes rise;8········
An' woone ageaen, wi' smilen lips,8········
Do put a vish his han' do clips8········
'Ithin a basket, loosely tied8···/˘/˘·
About his shoulder at his zide:8···/˘···
An' after that the fourth do stand8········
A-holden back his pretty hand8·/˘··/˘·
Behind his little ear, to drow8···/˘···
A stwone upon the stream below.8········
An' then the housen, that be all8···/˘···
Sich pretty hwomes, vrom big to small,10···/˘·····
A-looken south, do cluster round8·····/˘·
A zunny ledge o' risen ground,8·····/˘·
Avore a wood, a-nestled warm,8·····/˘·
In lewth ageaen the northern storm,8·····/˘·
Where smoke, a-wreathen blue, do spread8···/˘···
Above the tuns o' dusky red,8·····/˘·
An' window-peaenes do glitter bright8·/˘··/˘·
Wi' burnen streams o' zummer light,8········
Below the vine, a-train'd to hem8········
Their zides 'ithin his leafy stem,8·····/˘·
An' rangle on, wi' flutt'ren leaves,8·/˘·····
Below the houses' thatchen eaves.8···/˘···
An' drough a lawn a-spread avore8········
The windows, an' the pworched door,8·/˘···˘·
A path do wind 'ithin a hatch,8········
A-vasten'd wi' a clicken latch,8········
An' there up over ruf an' tun,8········
Do stan' the smooth-wall'd church o' stwone,8········
Wi' carved windows, thin an' tall,8··˘/˘···
A-reachen up the lofty wall;8·····/˘·
An' battlements, a-stannen round8·/˘˘····
The tower, ninety veet vrom ground,8·/˘/˘···
Vrom where a teaep'ren speer do spring8········
So high's the mornen lark do zing.8········
Zoo I do zay 'tis wo'th woone's while8········
To beaet the doust a good six mile,8········
To zee the pleaece the squier plann'd8·····/˘·
At Brookwell, now a-meaede by hand.8········

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