Bleaeke's House in Blackmwore

William Barnes (1801–1886) · 1844–1862

iambic tetrameter · 77 lines · from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect

John Bleaeke he had a bit o' groundCome to en by his mother's zide;An' after that, two hunderd poundHis uncle left en when he died;"Well now," cried John, "my mind's a-bentTo build a house, an' pay noo rent."An' Meaery gi'ed en her consent."Do, do,"--the maidens cried"True, true,"--his wife replied."Done, done,--a house o' brick or stwone,"Cried merry Bleaeke o' Blackmwore.

Then John he call'd vor men o' skill,An' builders answer'd to his call;An' met to reckon, each his bill;Vor vloor an' window, ruf an' wall.An' woone did mark it on the groun',An' woone did think, an' scratch his crown,An' reckon work, an' write it down:"Zoo, zoo,"--woone treaedesman cried,"True, true,"--woone mwore replied."Aye, aye,--good work, an' have good pay,"Cried merry Bleaeke o' Blackmwore.

The work begun, an' trowels rung,An' up the bricken wall did rise,An' up the slanten refters sprung,Wi' busy blows, an' lusty cries!An' woone brought planks to meaeke a vloor,An' woone did come wi' durns or door,An' woone did zaw, an' woone did bore,"Brick, brick,--there down below,Quick, quick,--why b'ye so slow?""Lime, lime,--why we do weaeste the time,Vor merry Bleaeke o' Blackmwore."

The house wer up vrom groun' to tun,An' thatch'd ageaen the rainy sky,Wi' windows to the noonday zun,Where rushy Stour do wander by.In coo'se he had a pworch to screenThe inside door, when win's wer keen,An' out avore the pworch, a green."Here! here!"--the childern cried:"Dear! dear!"--the wife replied;"There, there,--the house is perty feaeir,"Cried merry Bleaeke o' Blackmwore.

Then John he ax'd his friends to warmHis house, an' they, a goodish batch,Did come alwone, or eaerm in eaerm,All roads, a-meaeken vor his hatch:An' there below the clavy beamThe kettle-spout did zing an' steam;An' there wer ceaekes, an' tea wi' cream."Lo! lo!"--the women cried;"Ho! ho!"--the men replied;"Health, health,--attend ye wi' your wealth,Good merry Bleaeke o' Blackmwore."

Then John, a-prais'd, flung up his crown,All back a-laughen in a roar.They prais'd his wife, an' she look'd downA-simperen towards the vloor.Then up they sprung a-dancen reels,An' up went tooes, an' up went heels,A-winden roun' in knots an' wheels."Brisk, brisk,"--the maidens cried;"Frisk, frisk,"--the men replied;"Quick, quick,--there wi' your fiddle-stick,"Cried merry Bleaeke o' Blackmwore.

An' when the morrow's zun did sheen,John Bleaeke beheld, wi' jay an' pride,His bricken house, an' pworch, an' green,Above the Stour's rushy zide.The zwallows left the lwonesome groves,To build below the thatchen oves,An' robins come vor crumbs o' lwoaves:"Tweet, tweet,"--the birds all cried;"Sweet, sweet,"--John's wife replied;"Dad, dad,"--the childern cried so glad,To merry Bleaeke o' Blackmwore.

Words in this poem

rung n.
A floor timber in a ship. [OE. ronge, AS. hrung, a staff, rod, pole; akin to G. runge a short, thick piece of iron or wood, OD. ronghe a prop, support, Icel. röng a rib in a ship, Goth. H]
noonday n.
Midday; twelve o'clock in the day; noon.
rushy a.
Abounding with rushes.
stour n.
A battle or tumult; encounter; combat; disturbance; passion. [OF. estour, estor, tumult, combat, of Teutonic origin. See Storm.]
goodish a.
Rather good than the contrary; not actually bad; tolerable.
batch n.
The quantity of bread baked at one time. [OE. bache, bacche, fr. AS. bacan to bake; cf. G. gebäck and D. baksel. See Bake, v. t.]
wealth n.
Weal; welfare; prosperity; good. [OE. welthe, from wele; cf. D. weelde luxury. See Weal prosperity.]
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
sheen v. i.
To shine; to glisten.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

Bleaeke's House in Blackmwore is 77 lines in 7 stanzas of 11 lines each. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 100% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.6 syllables. 10% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCCCBB-- groundA · zideB · poundA · diedB · bentC · rentC · consentC · criedB · repliedB · stwone · blackmwore
  2. 2 ABAB-CCDD-- skillA · callB · billA · wallB · groun · crownC · downC · criedD · repliedD · pay · blackmwore
  3. 3 ABABCCCDD-C rungA · riseB · sprungA · criesB · vloorC · doorC · boreC · belowD · slowD · time · blackmworeC
  4. 4 ABABCCCDD-- tunA · skyB · zunA · byB · screenC · keenC · greenC · criedD · repliedD · feaeir · blackmwore
  5. 5 ABABCCCDD-- warmA · batchB · eaermA · hatchB · beamC · steamC · creamC · criedD · repliedD · wealth · blackmwore
  6. 6 ABA-CCCDD-B crownA · roarB · downA · vloor · reelsC · heelsC · wheelsC · criedD · repliedD · stick · blackmworeB
  7. 7 ABABCCCBB-- sheenA · prideB · greenA · zideB · grovesC · ovesC · lwoavesC · criedB · repliedB · glad · blackmwore
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
John Bleaeke he had a bit o' ground8········
Come to en by his mother's zide;8·····/˘·
An' after that, two hunderd pound8········
His uncle left en when he died;8·/˘·····
"Well now," cried John, "my mind's a-bent8········
To build a house, an' pay noo rent."8········
An' Meaery gi'ed en her consent.8······˘/
"Do, do,"--the maidens cried6···/˘·
"True, true,"--his wife replied.6····˘/
"Done, done,--a house o' brick or stwone,"8········
Cried merry Bleaeke o' Blackmwore.7·/˘····
Then John he call'd vor men o' skill,8········
An' builders answer'd to his call;8·/˘/˘···
An' met to reckon, each his bill;8···/˘···
Vor vloor an' window, ruf an' wall.8···/˘···
An' woone did mark it on the groun',8········
An' woone did think, an' scratch his crown,8········
An' reckon work, an' write it down:8·/˘·····
"Zoo, zoo,"--woone treaedesman cried,7·······
"True, true,"--woone mwore replied.6····˘/
"Aye, aye,--good work, an' have good pay,"8········
Cried merry Bleaeke o' Blackmwore.7·/˘····
The work begun, an' trowels rung,8··˘/·/˘·
An' up the bricken wall did rise,8········
An' up the slanten refters sprung,10··········
Wi' busy blows, an' lusty cries!8·/˘··/˘·
An' woone brought planks to meaeke a vloor,8········
An' woone did come wi' durns or door,8········
An' woone did zaw, an' woone did bore,8········
"Brick, brick,--there down below,6······
Quick, quick,--why b'ye so slow?"6······
"Lime, lime,--why we do weaeste the time,8········
Vor merry Bleaeke o' Blackmwore."7·/˘····
The house wer up vrom groun' to tun,8········
An' thatch'd ageaen the rainy sky,8·····/˘·
Wi' windows to the noonday zun,8·/˘··/˘·
Where rushy Stour do wander by.8·/˘··/˘·
In coo'se he had a pworch to screen8········
The inside door, when win's wer keen,8·˘/·····
An' out avore the pworch, a green.8········
"Here! here!"--the childern cried:6······
"Dear! dear!"--the wife replied;6····˘/
"There, there,--the house is perty feaeir,"8········
Cried merry Bleaeke o' Blackmwore.7·/˘····
Then John he ax'd his friends to warm8········
His house, an' they, a goodish batch,8·····/˘·
Did come alwone, or eaerm in eaerm,8········
All roads, a-meaeken vor his hatch:8········
An' there below the clavy beam8·····/˘·
The kettle-spout did zing an' steam;8·/˘·····
An' there wer ceaekes, an' tea wi' cream.8········
"Lo! lo!"--the women cried;6···/˘·
"Ho! ho!"--the men replied;6····˘/
"Health, health,--attend ye wi' your wealth,8··˘/····
Good merry Bleaeke o' Blackmwore."7·/˘····
Then John, a-prais'd, flung up his crown,8········
All back a-laughen in a roar.8········
They prais'd his wife, an' she look'd down8········
A-simperen towards the vloor.8········
Then up they sprung a-dancen reels,8········
An' up went tooes, an' up went heels,8········
A-winden roun' in knots an' wheels.8········
"Brisk, brisk,"--the maidens cried;6···/˘·
"Frisk, frisk,"--the men replied;6····˘/
"Quick, quick,--there wi' your fiddle-stick,"8·····/˘·
Cried merry Bleaeke o' Blackmwore.7·/˘····
An' when the morrow's zun did sheen,8···/˘···
John Bleaeke beheld, wi' jay an' pride,8··˘/····
His bricken house, an' pworch, an' green,8········
Above the Stour's rushy zide.7····/˘·
The zwallows left the lwonesome groves,9·········
To build below the thatchen oves,8········
An' robins come vor crumbs o' lwoaves:8·/˘·····
"Tweet, tweet,"--the birds all cried;6······
"Sweet, sweet,"--John's wife replied;6····˘/
"Dad, dad,"--the childern cried so glad,8········
To merry Bleaeke o' Blackmwore.7·/˘····

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