Nancy

Elinor Wylie (1885–1928) · 1921

iambic pentameter · 14 lines · from Nets to Catch the Wind

You are a rose, but set with sharpest spine;You are a pretty bird that pecks at me;You are a little squirrel on a tree,Pelting me with the prickly fruit of the pine;A diamond, torn from a crystal mine,Not like that milky treasure of the seaA smooth, translucent pearl, but skilfullyCarven to cut, and faceted to shine.

If you are flame, it dances and burns blue;If you are light, it pierces like a starIntenser than a needlepoint of ice.The dexterous touch that shaped the soul of you,Mingled, to mix, and make you what you are,Magic between the sugar and the spice.

Words in this poem

carven a.
Wrought by carving; ornamented by carvings; carved.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Nancy is in the public domain. This text is taken from Nets to Catch the Wind, Project Gutenberg ebook #6682; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Elinor Wylie, Nancy, in Nets to Catch the Wind (1921), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #6682, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/wylie-nets/nancy.html, id L12774.

Form and metre

Nancy is 14 lines in 2 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 85%). 83% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables. 21% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBAAB-A spineA · meB · treeB · pineA · mineA · seaB · skilfully · shineA
  2. 2 ABCABC blueA · starB · iceC · youA · areB · spiceC
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
You are a rose, but set with sharpest spine;10·······/˘·
You are a pretty bird that pecks at me;10···/˘·····
You are a little squirrel on a tree,10···/˘/˘···
Pelting me with the prickly fruit of the pine;11/˘···/˘····
A diamond, torn from a crystal mine,9·/˘···/˘·
Not like that milky treasure of the sea10···/˘/˘···
A smooth, translucent pearl, but skilfully10··˘/˘·····
Carven to cut, and faceted to shine.9/˘···/˘··
If you are flame, it dances and burns blue;10·····/˘···
If you are light, it pierces like a star10·····/˘···
Intenser than a needlepoint of ice.10·····/˘···
The dexterous touch that shaped the soul of you,11·/˘˘·······
Mingled, to mix, and make you what you are,10/˘········
Magic between the sugar and the spice.10/˘···/˘···

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