August

Elinor Wylie (1885–1928) · 1921

iambic pentameter · 14 lines · from Nets to Catch the Wind

Why should this Negro insolently strideDown the red noonday on such noiseless feet?Piled in his barrow, tawnier than wheat,Lie heaps of smoldering daisies, somber-eyed,Their copper petals shriveled up with pride,Hot with a superfluity of heat,Like a great brazier borne along the streetBy captive leopards, black and burning pied.

Are there no water-lilies, smooth as cream,With long stems dripping crystal? Are there noneLike those white lilies, luminous and cool,Plucked from some hemlock-darkened northern streamBy fair-haired swimmers, diving where the sunScarce warms the surface of the deepest pool?

Words in this poem

insolently adv.
In an insolent manner.
stride v. t.
To walk with long steps, especially in a measured or pompous manner. [AS. stridan to stride, to strive; akin to LG. striden, OFries. strida to strive, D. strijden to strive, to contend, G. streiten, OHG. stritan; of uncertain orig]
noonday n.
Midday; twelve o'clock in the day; noon.
piled a.
Having a pile or point; pointed. [From 2d Pile.]
brazier n.
An artificer who works in brass. Franklin. [OE. brasiere, F. braise live coals. See Brass.]
dripping n.
A falling in drops, or the sound so made.
scarce a.
Not plentiful or abundant; in small quantity in proportion to the demand; not easily to be procured; rare; uncommon. [OE. scars, OF. escars, eschars, LL. scarpsus, for L. excerptus, p. p. of excerpere to pick out, and hence to contract, to shorten; ex (see Ex-) + carpere. See C]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

August is in the public domain. This text is taken from Nets to Catch the Wind, Project Gutenberg ebook #6682; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Elinor Wylie, August, in Nets to Catch the Wind (1921), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #6682, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/wylie-nets/august.html, id L12757.

Form and metre

August is 14 lines in 2 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 87%). 99% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.8 syllables. 36% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBAABBA strideA · feetB · wheatB · eyedA · prideA · heatB · streetB · piedA
  2. 2 ABCABC creamA · noneB · coolC · streamA · sunB · poolC
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Why should this Negro insolently stride10···/˘/˘˘˘·
Down the red noonday on such noiseless feet?10···/˘··/˘·
Piled in his barrow, tawnier than wheat,9···/˘····
Lie heaps of smoldering daisies, somber-eyed,10···/˘/˘/˘·
Their copper petals shriveled up with pride,10·/˘/˘/˘···
Hot with a superfluity of heat,9·········
Like a great brazier borne along the street10···/˘·˘/··
By captive leopards, black and burning pied.10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Are there no water-lilies, smooth as cream,10···/˘/˘···
With long stems dripping crystal? Are there none10···/˘/˘···
Like those white lilies, luminous and cool,9···/˘/˘··
Plucked from some hemlock-darkened northern stream10···/·/˘/˘·
By fair-haired swimmers, diving where the sun10···/˘/˘···
Scarce warms the surface of the deepest pool?10···/˘··/˘·

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