Stanzas Written in My Pocket Copy of Thomson's "Castle of Indolence"
Within our happy Castle there dwelt OneWhom without blame I may not overlook;For never sun on living creature shoneWho more devout enjoyment with us took:Here on his hours he hung as on a book,On his own time here would he float away,As doth a fly upon a summer brook;But go to-morrow, or belike to-day,Seek for him,--he is fled; and whither none can say.
Thus often would he leave our peaceful home,And find elsewhere his business or delight;Out of our Valley's limits did he roam:Full many a time, upon a stormy night,His voice came to us from the neighbouring height:Oft could we see him driving full in viewAt midday when the sun was shining bright;What ill was on him, what he had to do,A mighty wonder bred among our quiet crew.
Ah! piteous sight it was to see this ManWhen he came back to us, a withered flower,--Or like a sinful creature, pale and wan.Down would he sit; and without strength or powerLook at the common grass from hour to hour:And oftentimes, how long I fear to say,Where apple-trees in blossom made a bower,Retired in that sunshiny shade he lay;And, like a naked Indian, slept himself away.
Great wonder to our gentle tribe it wasWhenever from our Valley he withdrew;For happier soul no living creature hasThan he had, being here the long day through.Some thought he was a lover, and did woo:Some thought far worse of him, and judged him wrong;But verse was what he had been wedded to;And his own mind did like a tempest strongCome to him thus, and drove the weary Wight along.
With him there often walked in friendly guise,Or lay upon the moss by brook or tree,A noticeable Man with large grey eyes,And a pale face that seemed undoubtedlyAs if a blooming face it ought to be;Heavy his low-hung lip did oft appear,Deprest by weight of musing Phantasy;Profound his forehead was, though not severe;Yet some did think that he had little business here:
Sweet heaven forefend! his was a lawful right;Noisy he was, and gamesome as a boy;His limbs would toss about him with delightLike branches when strong winds the trees annoy.Nor lacked his calmer hours device or toyTo banish listlessness and irksome care;He would have taught you how you might employYourself; and many did to him repair,--And certes not in vain; he had inventions rare.
Expedients, too, of simplest sort he tried:Long blades of grass, plucked round him as he lay,Made, to his ear attentively applied,A pipe on which the wind would deftly play;Glasses he had, that little things display,The beetle panoplied in gems and gold,A mailed angel on a battle-day;The mysteries that cups of flowers enfold,And all the gorgeous sights which fairies do behold.
He would entice that other Man to hearHis music, and to view his imagery:And, sooth, these two were each to the other dear:No livelier love in such a place could be:There did they dwell-from earthly labour free,As happy spirits as were ever seen;If but a bird, to keep them company,Or butterfly sate down, they were, I ween,As pleased as if the same had been a Maiden-queen.
Words in this poem 24
- belike adv.
- It is likely or probably; perhaps. -- Be*like"ly, adv. [Pref. be- (for by) + like.]
- whither adv.
- To what place; -- used interrogatively; as, whither goest thou [OE. whider. AS. hwider; akin to E. where, who; cf. Goth. hvadre whither. See Who, and cf. Hither, Thither.]
- neighbouring a.
- Living or being near; adjacent; as, the neighboring nations or countries.
- oftentimes adv.
- Frequently; often; many times. [Often + time. Cf. -wards.]
- sunshiny a.
- Bright with the rays of the sun; clear, warm, or pleasant; as, a sunshiny day.
- wedded a.
- Joined in wedlock; married.
- drove n.
- A collection of cattle driven, or cattle collected for driving; a number of animals, as oxen, sheep, or swine, driven in a body. [AS. draf, fr. drifan to drive. See Drive.]
- wight n.
- A whit; a bit; a jot. [OE. wight, wiht, a wight, a whit, AS. wiht, wuht, a creature, a thing; skin to D. wicht a child, OS. & OHG. wiht a creature, thing, G. wicht a creature, Icel. v]
- ought p. p.
- Was or were under obligation to pay; owed. [Orig. the preterit of the verb to owe. OE. oughte, aughte, ahte, AS. ahte. sq. root110. See Owe.]
- forefend v. t.
- To hinder; to fend off; to avert; to prevent the approach of; to forbid or prohibit. See Forfend. [OE. forfenden; pref. for- + fenden to fend. See Fend, v. t.]
- gamesome a.
- Gay; sportive; playful; frolicsome; merry.
- calmer n.
- One who, or that which, makes calm.
- irksome a.
- Wearisome; tedious; disagreeable or troublesome by reason of long continuance or repetition; as, irksome hours; irksome tasks.
- certes adv.
- Certainly; in truth; verily. [F. certes, for à certes, fr. L. certus. See Certain.]
- deftly adv.
- Aptly; fitly; dexterously; neatly. [Cf. Defly.]
- panoplied a.
- Dressed in panoply.
- mailed a.
- Protected by an external coat, or covering, of scales or plates.
- enfold v. t.
- To infold. See Infold.
- gorgeous a.
- Imposing through splendid or various colors; showy; fine; magnificent. [OF. gorgias beautiful, glorious, vain, luxurious; cf. OF. gorgias ruff, neck handkerchief, and F. gorge throat, and se pengorger to assume airs. Cf. Gorge, n.]
- imagery n.
- The work of one who makes images or visible representation of objects; imitation work; images in general, or in mass. [OE. imagerie, F. imagerie.]
- sooth a.
- True; faithful; trustworthy. [OE. soth, AS. s, for san; akin to OS. s, OHG. sand, Icel. sannr, Sw. sann, Dan. sand, Skr. sat, sant, real, genuine, present, being; properly p. pr. from a root]
- dwell v. i.
- To delay; to linger. [OE. dwellen, dwelien, to err, linger, AS. dwellan to deceive, hinder, delay, dwelian to err; akin to Icel. dvelja to delay, tarry, Sw. dväljas to dwell, Dan. dv]
- sate v. t.
- To satisfy the desire or appetite of; to satiate; to glut; to surfeit. [Probably shortened fr. satiate: cf. L. satus full. See Satiate.]
- ween v. i.
- To think; to imagine; to fancy. [OE. wenen, AS. w, fr. w hope, expectation, opinion; akin to D. waan, OFries. w, OS. & OHG. wan, G. wahn delusion, Icel. van hope, expectation, Goth. w, and D. w]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
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Form and metre
Stanzas Written in My Pocket Copy of Thomson's "Castle of Indolence" is 72 lines in 8 stanzas of 9 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABABBCBCC, complete in 4 of its 8 stanzas; the stanza is the Spenserian stanza. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 93% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.1 syllables. 4 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 18% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in the Spenserian stanza, other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 -A-AABABB one · overlookA · shone · tookA · bookA · awayB · brookA · dayB · sayB
- 2 ABABBCBCC homeA · delightB · roamA · nightB · heightB · viewC · brightB · doC · crewC
- 3 -A-AABABB man · flowerA · wan · powerA · hourA · sayB · bowerA · layB · awayB
- 4 ABABBCBCC wasA · withdrewB · hasA · throughB · wooB · wrongC · toB · strongC · alongC
- 5 ABA-BC-CC guiseA · treeB · eyesA · undoubtedly · beB · appearC · phantasy · severeC · hereC
- 6 ABABBCBCC rightA · boyB · delightA · annoyB · toyB · careC · employB · repairC · rareC
- 7 ABABBCBCC triedA · layB · appliedA · playB · displayB · goldC · dayB · enfoldC · beholdC
- 8 A-ABBC-CC hearA · imagery · dearA · beB · freeB · seenC · company · weenC · queenC
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Within our happy Castle there dwelt One | 10 | ··//˘/˘··· |
| Whom without blame I may not overlook; | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| For never sun on living creature shone | 9 | ·/··/˘/˘· |
| Who more devout enjoyment with us took: | 10 | ··˘/˘/˘··· |
| Here on his hours he hung as on a book, | 10 | ···/······ |
| On his own time here would he float away, | 10 | ········˘/ |
| As doth a fly upon a summer brook; | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| But go to-morrow, or belike to-day, | 10 | ···/˘·˘/·· |
| Seek for him,--he is fled; and whither none can say. | 12 | ·······/˘··· |
| Thus often would he leave our peaceful home, | 10 | ·/˘···//˘· |
| And find elsewhere his business or delight; | 10 | ··/··/˘·˘/ |
| Out of our Valley's limits did he roam: | 10 | ··//˘/˘··· |
| Full many a time, upon a stormy night, | 10 | ·/·····/˘· |
| His voice came to us from the neighbouring height: | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Oft could we see him driving full in view | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| At midday when the sun was shining bright; | 10 | ·/·····/˘· |
| What ill was on him, what he had to do, | 10 | ·········· |
| A mighty wonder bred among our quiet crew. | 11 | ·/˘/˘···//· |
| Ah! piteous sight it was to see this Man | 11 | ·/˘˘······· |
| When he came back to us, a withered flower,-- | 10 | ·······/˘/ |
| Or like a sinful creature, pale and wan. | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| Down would he sit; and without strength or power | 10 | ·········/ |
| Look at the common grass from hour to hour: | 10 | ···/˘··/·/ |
| And oftentimes, how long I fear to say, | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| Where apple-trees in blossom made a bower, | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··/ |
| Retired in that sunshiny shade he lay; | 10 | ˘/··/·˘··· |
| And, like a naked Indian, slept himself away. | 12 | ···/˘/˘·˘/˘/ |
| Great wonder to our gentle tribe it was | 10 | ·/˘·//˘··· |
| Whenever from our Valley he withdrew; | 10 | ˘/˘·//˘·˘/ |
| For happier soul no living creature has | 10 | ·/˘··/˘/˘· |
| Than he had, being here the long day through. | 9 | ···/····· |
| Some thought he was a lover, and did woo: | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Some thought far worse of him, and judged him wrong; | 10 | ·········· |
| But verse was what he had been wedded to; | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| And his own mind did like a tempest strong | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Come to him thus, and drove the weary Wight along. | 12 | ·······/˘·˘/ |
| With him there often walked in friendly guise, | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Or lay upon the moss by brook or tree, | 10 | ·········· |
| A noticeable Man with large grey eyes, | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| And a pale face that seemed undoubtedly | 9 | ······˘/˘ |
| As if a blooming face it ought to be; | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Heavy his low-hung lip did oft appear, | 10 | /˘······˘/ |
| Deprest by weight of musing Phantasy; | 10 | ·····/˘/˘˘ |
| Profound his forehead was, though not severe; | 10 | ˘/·/˘···˘/ |
| Yet some did think that he had little business here: | 12 | ·······/˘/˘· |
| Sweet heaven forefend! his was a lawful right; | 10 | ·/˘/···/˘· |
| Noisy he was, and gamesome as a boy; | 10 | /˘···/˘··· |
| His limbs would toss about him with delight | 10 | ········˘/ |
| Like branches when strong winds the trees annoy. | 10 | ·/˘·····˘/ |
| Nor lacked his calmer hours device or toy | 10 | ···/˘/˘/·· |
| To banish listlessness and irksome care; | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| He would have taught you how you might employ | 10 | ········˘/ |
| Yourself; and many did to him repair,-- | 9 | /˘·/···˘/ |
| And certes not in vain; he had inventions rare. | 12 | ·/˘·····˘/˘· |
| Expedients, too, of simplest sort he tried: | 10 | ˘/˘··/˘··· |
| Long blades of grass, plucked round him as he lay, | 10 | ·········· |
| Made, to his ear attentively applied, | 9 | ····˘/˘˘/ |
| A pipe on which the wind would deftly play; | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Glasses he had, that little things display, | 10 | /˘···/˘·˘/ |
| The beetle panoplied in gems and gold, | 10 | ·/˘/˘˘···· |
| A mailed angel on a battle-day; | 9 | ··/˘··/˘· |
| The mysteries that cups of flowers enfold, | 9 | ·/˘···/˘/ |
| And all the gorgeous sights which fairies do behold. | 12 | ···/˘··/˘·˘/ |
| He would entice that other Man to hear | 10 | ··˘/·/˘··· |
| His music, and to view his imagery: | 9 | ·/˘····/˘ |
| And, sooth, these two were each to the other dear: | 11 | ········/˘· |
| No livelier love in such a place could be: | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| There did they dwell-from earthly labour free, | 10 | ·····/˘/·· |
| As happy spirits as were ever seen; | 9 | ·/˘/˘··/· |
| If but a bird, to keep them company, | 9 | ·······/˘ |
| Or butterfly sate down, they were, I ween, | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| As pleased as if the same had been a Maiden-queen. | 12 | ·········/˘· |
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