Complaint

William Carlos Williams (1883–1963) · 1921

iambic trimeter · 22 lines · from Sour Grapes

They call me and I goIt is a frozen roadpast midnight, a dustof snow caughtin the rigid wheeltracks.The door opens.I smile, enter andshake off the cold.Here is a great womanon her side in the bed.She is sick,perhaps vomiting,perhaps laboringto give birth toa tenth child. Joy! Joy!Night is a roomdarkened for lovers,through the jalousies the sunhas sent one gold needle!I pick the hair from her eyesand watch her miserywith compassion.

Words in this poem

laboring a.
That labors; performing labor; esp., performing coarse, heavy work, not requiring skill also, set apart for labor; as, laboring days.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Complaint is in the public domain. This text is taken from Sour Grapes: A Book of Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #35667; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: William Carlos Williams, Complaint, in Sour Grapes (1921), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #35667, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/williams-sour-grapes/complaint.html, id L01160.

Form and metre

Complaint is 22 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 75%). 93% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 5.0 syllables. 8 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 55% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic trimeter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ----------------AB-A-B go · road · dust · caught · wheeltracks · opens · and · cold · woman · bed · sick · vomiting · laboring · to · joy · room · loversA · sunB · needle · eyesA · misery · compassionB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
They call me and I go6······
It is a frozen road6···/˘·
past midnight, a dust5·/···
of snow caught3···
in the rigid wheeltracks.6··/˘··
The door opens.4··/˘
I smile, enter and5··/˘·
shake off the cold.4····
Here is a great woman6····/˘
on her side in the bed.6······
She is sick,3···
perhaps vomiting,5˘//˘˘
perhaps laboring5˘//˘˘
to give birth to4····
a tenth child. Joy! Joy!5·····
Night is a room4····
darkened for lovers,5/˘·/˘
through the jalousies the sun6······
has sent one gold needle!6····/˘
I pick the hair from her eyes7·······
and watch her misery6···/˘˘
with compassion.4·˘/˘

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