Smell!

William Carlos Williams (1883–1963) · 1917

Free verse · 14 lines · from Al Que Quiere!

Oh strong ridged and deeply hollowednose of mine! what will you not be smelling?What tactless asses we are, you and I, boney nose,always indiscriminate, always unashamed,and now it is the souring flowers of the bedraggledpoplars: a festering pulp on the wet earthbeneath them. With what deep thirstwe quicken our desiresto that rank odor of a passing spring-time!Can you not be decent? Can you not reserve your ardorsfor something less unlovely? What girl will carefor us, do you think, if we continue in these ways?Must you taste everything? Must you know everything?Must you have a part in everything?

Words in this poem

tactless a.
Destitute of tact.
souring n.
Any sour apple.
unlovely a.
Not lovely; not amiable; possessing qualities that excite dislike; disagreeable; displeasing; unpleasant.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Smell! is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Book of Poems, Al Que Quiere!, Project Gutenberg ebook #51997; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: William Carlos Williams, Smell!, in Al Que Quiere! (1917), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #51997, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/williams-al-que-quiere/smell.html, id L01122.

Form and metre

Smell! is 14 lines in a single stanza. 86% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 11.0 syllables. 5 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 50% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -------A-A-ABB hollowed · smelling · nose · unashamed · bedraggled · earth · thirst · desiresA · time · ardorsA · care · waysA · everythingB · everythingB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Oh strong ridged and deeply hollowed8····/˘/˘
nose of mine! what will you not be smelling?10········/˘
What tactless asses we are, you and I, boney nose,13·/˘/˘·····/˘·
always indiscriminate, always unashamed,12/·˘˘/˘˘/··˘/
and now it is the souring flowers of the bedraggled15·····/˘˘/˘··˘/˘
poplars: a festering pulp on the wet earth11/˘·/˘˘·····
beneath them. With what deep thirst7·······
we quicken our desires8·/˘/˘˘/˘
to that rank odor of a passing spring-time!11···/˘··/˘··
Can you not be decent? Can you not reserve your ardors14····/˘···˘/·/˘
for something less unlovely? What girl will care11·/˘·˘/˘····
for us, do you think, if we continue in these ways?13·······˘/˘···
Must you taste everything? Must you know everything?12···/˘····/˘·
Must you have a part in everything?9······/˘·

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