Riposte

William Carlos Williams (1883–1963) · 1917

Free verse · unrhymed · 11 lines · from Al Que Quiere!

Love is like water or the airmy townspeople;it cleanses, and dissipates evil gases.It is like poetry tooand for the same reasons.

Love is so preciousmy townspeoplethat if I were you I wouldhave it under lock and key--like the air or the Atlantic orlike poetry!

Words in this poem

townspeople n.
The inhabitants of a town or city, especially in distinction from country people; townsfolk.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Riposte is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Book of Poems, Al Que Quiere!, Project Gutenberg ebook #51997; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: William Carlos Williams, Riposte, in Al Que Quiere! (1917), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #51997, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/williams-al-que-quiere/riposte.html, id L01126.

Form and metre

Riposte is 11 lines in 2 verse paragraphs. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. 83% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 6.5 syllables. 6 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 55% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Love is like water or the air8···/˘···
my townspeople;4·/·˘
it cleanses, and dissipates evil gases.11·/˘·/˘·/˘/˘
It is like poetry too7···/˘˘·
and for the same reasons.6····/˘
Love is so precious5···/˘
my townspeople4·/·˘
that if I were you I would7·······
have it under lock and key--7·······
like the air or the Atlantic or9·····˘/˘·
like poetry!4·/˘˘

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