Rise o Days from Your Fathomless Deeps
Rise O days from your fathomless deeps, till you loftier, fiercer sweep,Long for my soul hungering gymnastic I devour’d what the earth gave me,Long I roam’d amid the woods of the north, long I watch’d Niagara pouring,I travel’d the prairies over and slept on their breast, I cross’dthe Nevadas, I cross’d the plateaus,I ascended the towering rocks along the Pacific, I sail’d out to sea,I sail’d through the storm, I was refresh’d by the storm,I watch’d with joy the threatening maws of the waves,
I mark’d the white combs where they career’d so high, curling over,I heard the wind piping, I saw the black clouds,Saw from below what arose and mounted, (O superb! O wild as myheart, and powerful!)Heard the continuous thunder as it bellow’d after the lightning,Noted the slender and jagged threads of lightning as sudden andfast amid the din they chased each other across the sky;These, and such as these, I, elate, saw--saw with wonder, yet pensiveand masterful,All the menacing might of the globe uprisen around me,Yet there with my soul I fed, I fed content, supercilious.
’Twas well, O soul--’twas a good preparation you gave me,Now we advance our latent and ampler hunger to fill,Now we go forth to receive what the earth and the sea never gave us,Not through the mighty woods we go, but through the mightier cities,Something for us is pouring now more than Niagara pouring,Torrents of men, (sources and rills of the Northwest are you indeedinexhaustible?)What, to pavements and homesteads here, what were those storms ofthe mountains and sea?What, to passions I witness around me to-day? was the sea risen?Was the wind piping the pipe of death under the black clouds?Lo! from deeps more unfathomable, something more deadly and savage,Manhattan rising, advancing with menacing front--Cincinnati, Chicago,unchain’d;What was that swell I saw on the ocean? behold what comes here,How it climbs with daring feet and hands--how it dashes!How the true thunder bellows after the lightning--how bright theflashes of lightning!How Democracy with desperate vengeful port strides on, shownthrough the dark by those flashes of lightning!(Yet a mournful wall and low sob I fancied I heard through the dark,In a lull of the deafening confusion.)
Thunder on! stride on, Democracy! strike with vengeful stroke!And do you rise higher than ever yet O days, O cities!Crash heavier, heavier yet O storms! you have done me good,My soul prepared in the mountains absorbs your immortal strong nutriment,Long had I walk’d my cities, my country roads through farms, onlyhalf satisfied,One doubt nauseous undulating like a snake, crawl’d on the ground before me,Continually preceding my steps, turning upon me oft, ironically hissing low;The cities I loved so well I abandon’d and left, I sped to thecertainties suitable to me,Hungering, hungering, hungering, for primal energies and Nature’sdauntlessness,I refresh’d myself with it only, I could relish it only,I waited the bursting forth of the pent fire--on the water and airwaited long;But now I no longer wait, I am fully satisfied, I am glutted,I have witness’d the true lightning, I have witness’d my cities electric,I have lived to behold man burst forth and warlike America rise,Hence I will seek no more the food of the northern solitary wilds,No more the mountains roam or sail the stormy sea.
Words in this poem 16
- fathomless a.
- Incapable of being fathomed; immeasurable; that can not be sounded.
- amid prep.
- In the midst or middle of; surrounded or encompassed by; among. [OE. amidde, amiddes, on midden, AS. on middan, in the middle, fr. midde the middle. The s is an adverbial ending, originally marking the genitive; the t is a la]
- towering a.
- Very high; elevated; rising aloft; as, a towering height.
- career n.
- A race course: the ground run over. [F. carrière race course, high road, street, fr. L. carrus wagon. See Car.]
- piping a.
- Playing on a musical pipe. [From Pipe, v.]
- superb a.
- Grand; magnificent; august; stately; as, a superb edifice; a superb colonnade. [F. superbe, L. superbus, fr. super over. See Super-.]
- elate a.
- Lifted up; raised; elevated. [L. elatus elevated, fig., elated, proud (the figure, perh., being borrowed from a prancing horse); e out + latus (used as p. p. of ferre to bear), for tlatus, a]
- masterful a.
- Inclined to play the master; domineering; imperious; arbitrary.
- desperate a.
- Without hope; given to despair; hopeless. [L. desperatus, p. p. of desperare. See Despair, and cf. Desperado.]
- vengeful a.
- Vindictive; retributive; revengeful.
- lull v. t.
- To cause to rest by soothing influences; to compose; to calm; to soothe; to quiet. [Akin to OD. lullen to sing to sleep, G. lullen, Dan. lulle, Sw. lulla; all of imitative origin. Cf. Loll, Lollard.]
- deafening n.
- The act or process of rendering impervious to sound, as a floor or wall; also, the material with which the spaces are filled in this process; pugging.
- stride v. t.
- To walk with long steps, especially in a measured or pompous manner. [AS. stridan to stride, to strive; akin to LG. striden, OFries. strida to strive, D. strijden to strive, to contend, G. streiten, OHG. stritan; of uncertain orig]
- crawl v. i.
- To move slowly by drawing the body along the ground, as a worm; to move slowly on hands and kness; to creep. [Dan. kravle, or Icel. krafla, to paw, scrabble with the hands; akin to Sw. kr to crawl; cf. LG. krabbeln, D. krabbelen to scratch.]
- primal a.
- First; primary; original; chief. [LL. primalis, fr. L. primus the first. See Prime, a.]
- pent p. p.
- Penned or shut up; confined; -- often with up. [From Pen, v. t.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
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Form and metre
Rise o Days from Your Fathomless Deeps is 61 lines in 4 stanzas. 73% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 13.8 syllables. 22 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 20% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 -A---A-- sweep · meA · pouring · cross'd · plateaus · seaA · storm · waves
- 2 --A---A--A- over · clouds · myA · powerful · lightning · and · skyA · pensive · masterful · meA · supercilious
- 3 A-------A-------ABCB-C meA · fill · us · cities · pouring · indeed · inexhaustible · of · seaA · risen · clouds · savage · chicago · unchain'd · here · dashes · theA · lightningB · shownC · lightningB · dark · confusionC
- 4 ----A-B-BB--A------B stroke · cities · good · nutriment · onlyA · satisfied · meB · low · theB · meB · nature's · dauntlessness · onlyA · air · long · glutted · electric · rise · wilds · seaB
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Rise O days from your fathomless deeps, till you loftier, fiercer sweep, | 17 | ·····/˘˘···/˘˘/˘· |
| Long for my soul hungering gymnastic I devour’d what the earth gave me, | 19 | ····/˘˘˘/˘·˘/˘····· |
| Long I roam’d amid the woods of the north, long I watch’d Niagara pouring, | 18 | ···˘/········˘/˘/˘ |
| I travel’d the prairies over and slept on their breast, I cross’d | 15 | ·/˘·/˘········· |
| the Nevadas, I cross’d the plateaus, | 9 | ·˘/˘···˘/ |
| I ascended the towering rocks along the Pacific, I sail’d out to sea, | 20 | ·˘/˘·/˘˘·˘/·˘/˘····· |
| I sail’d through the storm, I was refresh’d by the storm, | 12 | ·······˘/··· |
| I watch’d with joy the threatening maws of the waves, | 12 | ·····/˘˘···· |
| I mark’d the white combs where they career’d so high, curling over, | 15 | ···········/˘·· |
| I heard the wind piping, I saw the black clouds, | 11 | ····/˘····· |
| Saw from below what arose and mounted, (O superb! O wild as my | 17 | ·····˘/·/˘·˘/···· |
| heart, and powerful!) | 5 | ··/˘˘ |
| Heard the continuous thunder as it bellow’d after the lightning, | 17 | ··˘/˘˘/˘··/˘···/˘ |
| Noted the slender and jagged threads of lightning as sudden and | 15 | /˘·/˘····/˘·/˘· |
| fast amid the din they chased each other across the sky; | 14 | ·˘/·····/˘˘/·· |
| These, and such as these, I, elate, saw--saw with wonder, yet pensive | 16 | ······˘/···/˘·/˘ |
| and masterful, | 4 | ·/˘˘ |
| All the menacing might of the globe uprisen around me, | 15 | ··/˘˘·········· |
| Yet there with my soul I fed, I fed content, supercilious. | 16 | ·········/˘·˘/˘˘ |
| ’Twas well, O soul--’twas a good preparation you gave me, | 14 | ········˘/˘··· |
| Now we advance our latent and ampler hunger to fill, | 15 | ··˘//˘/˘···/˘·· |
| Now we go forth to receive what the earth and the sea never gave us, | 17 | ·····˘/······/˘·· |
| Not through the mighty woods we go, but through the mightier cities, | 16 | ···/˘······/˘˘/˘ |
| Something for us is pouring now more than Niagara pouring, | 15 | /˘···/˘···˘/˘/˘ |
| Torrents of men, (sources and rills of the Northwest are you indeed | 16 | /˘··/˘·····/··˘/ |
| inexhaustible?) | 5 | ˘˘/˘˘ |
| What, to pavements and homesteads here, what were those storms of | 13 | ··/˘·/······· |
| the mountains and sea? | 5 | ·/˘·· |
| What, to passions I witness around me to-day? was the sea risen? | 17 | ··/˘·/˘········/˘ |
| Was the wind piping the pipe of death under the black clouds? | 14 | ···/˘········· |
| Lo! from deeps more unfathomable, something more deadly and savage, | 17 | ····˘/˘˘˘/˘·/˘·/˘ |
| Manhattan rising, advancing with menacing front--Cincinnati, Chicago, | 20 | ˘/˘/˘˘/˘·/˘˘··˘/˘˘/· |
| unchain’d; | 2 | ·· |
| What was that swell I saw on the ocean? behold what comes here, | 15 | ········/˘˘/··· |
| How it climbs with daring feet and hands--how it dashes! | 13 | ····/˘·····/˘ |
| How the true thunder bellows after the lightning--how bright the | 15 | ···/˘/˘···/˘··· |
| flashes of lightning! | 5 | /˘·/˘ |
| How Democracy with desperate vengeful port strides on, shown | 14 | ·˘/˘˘·/˘/˘···· |
| through the dark by those flashes of lightning! | 10 | ·····/˘·/˘ |
| (Yet a mournful wall and low sob I fancied I heard through the dark, | 16 | ··/˘·····/˘····· |
| In a lull of the deafening confusion.) | 11 | ·····/˘˘˘/˘ |
| Thunder on! stride on, Democracy! strike with vengeful stroke! | 14 | /˘···˘/˘˘··/˘· |
| And do you rise higher than ever yet O days, O cities! | 15 | ····/˘·/˘····/˘ |
| Crash heavier, heavier yet O storms! you have done me good, | 15 | ·/˘˘/˘˘········ |
| My soul prepared in the mountains absorbs your immortal strong nutriment, | 18 | ··˘/··/˘˘/·˘/˘·/˘˘ |
| Long had I walk’d my cities, my country roads through farms, only | 15 | ·····/˘·/˘···/˘ |
| half satisfied, | 4 | ·/˘· |
| One doubt nauseous undulating like a snake, crawl’d on the ground before me, | 18 | ··/˘/˘·˘·········· |
| Continually preceding my steps, turning upon me oft, ironically hissing low; | 23 | ˘/˘˘˘˘/˘··/˘····˘/˘˘/˘· |
| The cities I loved so well I abandon’d and left, I sped to the | 17 | ·/˘·····˘/˘······ |
| certainties suitable to me, | 8 | /˘˘/˘˘·· |
| Hungering, hungering, hungering, for primal energies and Nature’s | 18 | /˘˘/˘˘/˘˘·/˘/˘˘·/˘ |
| dauntlessness, | 3 | ··· |
| I refresh’d myself with it only, I could relish it only, | 16 | ·˘/·/··/˘··/˘·/˘ |
| I waited the bursting forth of the pent fire--on the water and air | 18 | ·/˘·/˘····/˘··/˘·· |
| waited long; | 3 | /˘· |
| But now I no longer wait, I am fully satisfied, I am glutted, | 18 | ····/˘···/˘/˘···/˘ |
| I have witness’d the true lightning, I have witness’d my cities electric, | 18 | ··/˘··/˘··/˘·/˘˘/˘ |
| I have lived to behold man burst forth and warlike America rise, | 17 | ····˘/····/·˘/˘˘· |
| Hence I will seek no more the food of the northern solitary wilds, | 17 | ··········/˘/˘·˘· |
| No more the mountains roam or sail the stormy sea. | 12 | ···/˘····/˘· |
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