Nightmare

William Watson (1858–1935) · 1892–1905

iambic pentameter · heroic couplets · 14 lines · from The Poems of William Watson

In a false dream I saw the Foe prevail.The war was ended; the last smoke had rolledAway: and we, erewhile the strong and bold,Stood broken, humbled, withered, weak and pale,And moan'd, "Our greatness is become a taleTo tell our children's babes when we are old.They shall put by their playthings to be toldHow England once, before the years of bale,Throned above trembling, puissant, grandiose, calm,Held Asia's richest jewel in her palm;And with unnumbered isles barbaric, sheThe broad hem of her glistering robe impearl'd;Then, when she wound her arms about the world,And had for vassal the obsequious sea."

Words in this poem

erewhile adv.
Some time ago; a little while before; heretofore.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
puissant a.
Powerful; strong; mighty; forcible; as, a puissant prince or empire. [F., originally, a p. pr. formed fr. L. posse to be able: cf. L. potens powerful. See Potent.]
grandiose a.
Impressive or elevating in effect; vimposing; splendid; striking; -- in a good sense. [F. grandiose, It. grandioso. See Grand.]
unnumbered a.
Not numbered; not counted or estimated; innumerable.
barbaric a.
Of, or from, barbarian nations; foreign; -- often with reference to barbarous nations of east. [L. barbaricus foreign, barbaric, Gr. .]
obsequious a.
Promptly obedient, or submissive, to the will of another; compliant; yielding to the desires of another; devoted. [L.obsequiosus, fr. obsequium compliance, fr. obsequi, fr. obsequi: cf. F. obséquieux, See Obsequent, and cf. Obsequy.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Nightmare is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poems of William Watson, Project Gutenberg ebook #13179; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: William Watson, Nightmare, in The Poems of William Watson (1892–1905), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #13179, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/watson-poems/nightmare.html, id L11298.

Form and metre

Nightmare is 14 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 57% of the lines: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 93% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.4 syllables. 29% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBAABBACCDEED prevailA · rolledB · boldB · paleA · taleA · oldB · toldB · baleA · calmC · palmC · sheD · impearl'dE · worldE · seaD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
In a false dream I saw the Foe prevail.10········˘/
The war was ended; the last smoke had rolled10···/˘·····
Away: and we, erewhile the strong and bold,12˘/··········
Stood broken, humbled, withered, weak and pale,10·/˘/˘/˘···
And moan'd, "Our greatness is become a tale10··//˘·˘/··
To tell our children's babes when we are old.10··//˘·····
They shall put by their playthings to be told10·····/····
How England once, before the years of bale,10·/˘·······
Throned above trembling, puissant, grandiose, calm,12···/˘/˘˘·˘/·
Held Asia's richest jewel in her palm;10·/˘/˘/˘···
And with unnumbered isles barbaric, she10··˘/˘·˘/˘·
The broad hem of her glistering robe impearl'd;11···········
Then, when she wound her arms about the world,10··········
And had for vassal the obsequious sea."10···/˘·˘/˘·

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