A Sunset

William Watson (1858–1935) · 1892–1905

iambic pentameter · 26 lines · from The Poems of William Watson

Westward a league the city lay, with oneCloud's imminent umbrage o'er it: when behold,The incendiary sunDropped from the womb o' the vapour, rolled'Mongst huddled towers and temples, 'twixt them setInfinite ardour of candescent gold,Encompassed minaretAnd terrace and marmoreal spireWith conflagration: roofs enfurnaced, yetUnmolten,--columns and cupolas flanked with fire,Yet standing unconsumedOf the fierce fervency,--and higherThan all, their fringes goldenly illumed,Dishevelled clouds, like massed empurpled smokeFrom smouldering forges fumed:Till suddenly the bright spell brokeWith the sun sinking through some palace-floorAnd vanishing wholly. Then the city woke,Her mighty Fire-Dream o'er,As who from out a sleep is raisedOf terrible loveliness, lasting hardly moreThan one most monumental moment; dazedHe looketh, having comeForth of one world and witless gazedInto another: ev'n so looked, for someBrief while, the city--amazed, immobile, dumb.

Words in this poem 17
imminent a.
Threatening to occur immediately; near at hand; impending; -- said especially of misfortune or peril. [L. imminens, p. pr. of imminere to project; pref. im- in + minere (in comp.) to jut, project. See Eminent.]
umbrage n.
Shade; shadow; obscurity; hence, that which affords a shade, as a screen of trees or foliage. [F. ombrage shade, suspicion, umbrage, L. umbraticus belonging to shade, fr. umbra a shade. Cf. Umber, Umbratic.]
womb n.
The belly; the abdomen. [OE. wombe, wambe, AS. wamb, womb; akin to D. wam belly, OS. & OHG. wamba, G. wamme, wampe, Icel. vömb, Sw. v&mb, Dan. vom, Goth. wamba.]
vapour n.
Any substance in the gaseous, or aëriform, state, the condition of which is ordinarily that of a liquid or solid. [OE. vapour, OF. vapour, vapor, vapeur, F. vapeur, L. vapor; probably for cvapor, and akin to Gr. kvepti to breathe, smell, Russ. kopote fine soot. Cf. Vapid.]
ardour n.
Heat, in a literal sense; as, the ardor of the sun's rays. [L. ardor, fr. ardere to burn: cf. OF. ardor, ardur, F. ardeur.]
candescent a.
Glowing; luminous; incandescent.
minaret n.
A slender, lofty tower attached to a mosque and surrounded by one or more projecting balconies, from which the summon to prayer is cried by the muezzin. [Sp. minarete, Ar. manarat lamp, lantern, lighthouse, turret, fr. nar to shine.]
marmoreal a.
Pertaining to, or resembling, marble; made of marble. [L. marmoreus, fr. marmor marble: cf. F. marmoréen. See Marble.]
conflagration n.
A fire extending to many objects, or over a large space; a general burning.
fervency n.
The state of being fervent or warm; ardor; warmth of feeling or devotion; eagerness. [Cf. OF. fervence. See Fervent.]
goldenly adv.
In golden terms or a golden manner; splendidly; delightfully.
smouldering a.
Being in a state of suppressed activity; quiet but not dead.
broke v. i.
To transact business for another. Brome. [See Broker, and cf. Brook.]
loveliness n.
The state or quality of being lovely. [From Lovely.]
monumental a.
Of, pertaining to, or suitable for, a monument; as, a monumental inscription. [L. monumentalis: cf. F. monumental.]
witless a.
Destitute of wit or understanding; wanting thought; hence, indiscreet; not under the guidance of judgment.
immobile a.
Incapable of being moved; immovable; fixed; stable. Prof. [L. immobilis: cf. F. immobile. See Immobility.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

A Sunset is 26 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 84%). 88% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.1 syllables. 3 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 69% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCBCDCDE-EFEFGF-HGHIHII oneA · beholdB · sunA · rolledB · setC · goldB · minaretC · spireD · yetC · fireD · unconsumedE · higher · illumedE · smokeF · fumedE · brokeF · floorG · wokeF · o'er · raisedH · moreG · dazedH · comeI · gazedH · someI · dumbI
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Westward a league the city lay, with one10/˘···/˘···
Cloud's imminent umbrage o'er it: when behold,10·/˘/˘···˘/
The incendiary sun7·˘/˘˘˘·
Dropped from the womb o' the vapour, rolled10·˘·····/˘·
'Mongst huddled towers and temples, 'twixt them set10·/˘/·/˘···
Infinite ardour of candescent gold,10/˘˘/˘·˘/˘·
Encompassed minaret6˘/˘·˘/
And terrace and marmoreal spire8·/˘·····
With conflagration: roofs enfurnaced, yet10··˘/˘·····
Unmolten,--columns and cupolas flanked with fire,12···/˘·˘/˘··/
Yet standing unconsumed6·/˘···
Of the fierce fervency,--and higher9···/˘˘·/˘
Than all, their fringes goldenly illumed,10···/˘/˘˘··
Dishevelled clouds, like massed empurpled smoke10˘/˘˘······
From smouldering forges fumed:7····/˘·
Till suddenly the bright spell broke8·/˘˘····
With the sun sinking through some palace-floor10···/˘··/˘·
And vanishing wholly. Then the city woke,10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Her mighty Fire-Dream o'er,7·/˘/˘··
As who from out a sleep is raised9········˘
Of terrible loveliness, lasting hardly more11·/˘/˘˘/˘/˘·
Than one most monumental moment; dazed10····˘/˘/˘·
He looketh, having come6·/˘/˘·
Forth of one world and witless gazed9·····/˘·˘
Into another: ev'n so looked, for some10··˘/˘·····
Brief while, the city--amazed, immobile, dumb.11···/˘˘/˘/˘·

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