Written on a Card That Her Majesty Tore at Ombre

Edmund Waller (1606–1687) · 1645–1668

iambic pentameter · heroic couplets · 4 lines · from Cooper's Hill, and Other Poems

The cards you tear in value rise;So do the wounded by your eyes.Who to celestial things aspire,Are by that passion raised the higher.

Words in this poem

aspire v. t.
To aspire to; to long for; to try to reach; to mount to.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Written on a Card That Her Majesty Tore at Ombre is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poetical Works of Edmund Waller and Sir John Denham, Project Gutenberg ebook #12322; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Written on a Card That Her Majesty Tore at Ombre is 4 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 50% of the lines: heroic couplets. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic pentameter. 90% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.5 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending.

See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AA-- riseA · eyesA · aspire · higher
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The cards you tear in value rise;8·····/˘·
So do the wounded by your eyes.8···/˘···
Who to celestial things aspire,8··˘/˘·˘/
Are by that passion raised the higher.10···/˘·˘·/˘

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