After Lunch

Various (about 800), translated by Arthur Waley · 1918

iambic tetrameter · unrhymed · 8 lines · from A Hundred and Seventy Chinese Poems

After lunch--one short nap:On waking up--two cups of tea.Raising my head, I see the sun’s lightOnce again slanting to the south-west.Those who are happy regret the shortness of the day;Those who are sad tire of the year’s sloth.But those whose hearts are devoid of joy or sadnessJust go on living, regardless of “short” or “long.”

Words in this poem

sadness n.
Heaviness; firmness.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

After Lunch is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Hundred and Seventy Chinese Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #42290, the Arthur Waley translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Various, After Lunch, in A Hundred and Seventy Chinese Poems (1918), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #42290, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/waley-chinese/after-lunch.html, id L18849.

Form and metre

After Lunch is 8 lines in a single verse paragraph. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. 85% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.9 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 25% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
After lunch--one short nap:6······
On waking up--two cups of tea.8·/˘·····
Raising my head, I see the sun’s light9/˘·······
Once again slanting to the south-west.9·˘//˘····
Those who are happy regret the shortness of the day;13···/˘˘/·/˘···
Those who are sad tire of the year’s sloth.10····/˘····
But those whose hearts are devoid of joy or sadness12·····˘/···/˘
Just go on living, regardless of “short” or “long.”12···/˘˘/˘····

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