Hope Shines—As in a Stable a Wisp of Straw

Paul Verlaine (1844–1896), translated by Gertrude Hall · 1895

iambic pentameter · heroic couplets · 14 lines · from Poems

Hope shines--as in a stable a wisp of straw.Fear not the wasp drunk with his crazy flight!Through some chink always, see, the moted light!Propped on your hand, you dozed--But let me draw

Cool water from the well for you, at least,Poor soul! There, drink! Then sleep. See, I remain,And I will sing a slumberous refrain,And you shall murmur like a child appeased.

Noon strikes. Approach not, Madam, pray, or call....He sleeps. Strange how a woman's light footfallRe-echoes through the brains of grief-worn men!

Noon strikes. I bade them sprinkle in the room.Sleep on! Hope shines--a pebble in the gloom.--When shall the Autumn rose re-blossom,--when?

Words in this poem

wisp n.
A small bundle, as of straw or other like substance. [OE. wisp, wips; probably akin to D. & G. wisch, Icel. visk, and perhaps to L. virga a twig, rod. Cf. Verge a rod, Whisk, n.]
moted a.
Filled with motes, or fine floating dust; as, the air.
slumberous a.
Inviting slumber; soporiferous.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
footfall n.
A setting down of the foot; a footstep; the sound of a footstep.
bade
A form of the pat tense of Bid.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Hope Shines—As in a Stable a Wisp of Straw is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #8426, the Gertrude Hall translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Paul Verlaine, Hope Shines—As in a Stable a Wisp of Straw, in Poems (1895), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #8426, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/verlaine-poems/hope-shines-as-in-a-stable-a-wisp-of-straw.html, id L15508.

Form and metre

Hope Shines—As in a Stable a Wisp of Straw is 14 lines in 4 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 57% of the lines: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 85%). 96% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.1 syllables. 14% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBA strawA · flightB · lightB · drawA
  2. 2 -AA- least · remainA · refrainA · appeased
  3. 3 AA- callA · footfallA · men
  4. 4 AA- roomA · gloomA · when
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Hope shines--as in a stable a wisp of straw.11·····/˘····
Fear not the wasp drunk with his crazy flight!10·······/˘·
Through some chink always, see, the moted light!10···/···/˘·
Propped on your hand, you dozed--But let me draw10··········
Cool water from the well for you, at least,10·/˘·······
Poor soul! There, drink! Then sleep. See, I remain,10········˘/
And I will sing a slumberous refrain,10·····/˘˘˘/
And you shall murmur like a child appeased.10···/˘···˘/
Noon strikes. Approach not, Madam, pray, or call....10··˘/·/˘···
He sleeps. Strange how a woman's light footfall10·····/˘·/·
Re-echoes through the brains of grief-worn men!10·/˘·······
Noon strikes. I bade them sprinkle in the room.10·····/˘···
Sleep on! Hope shines--a pebble in the gloom.10·····/˘···
--When shall the Autumn rose re-blossom,--when?10···/˘··/˘·

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