The Black Birds

Henry Van Dyke (1852–1933) · 1925

iambic pentameter · 71 lines · from The Poems of Henry Van Dyke

Once, only once, I saw it clear,--That Eden every human heart has dreamedA hundred times, but always far away!Ah, well do I remember how it seemed,Through the still atmosphereOf that enchanted day,To lie wide open to my weary feet:A little land of love and joy and rest,With meadows of soft green,Rosy with cyclamen, and sweetWith delicate breath of violets unseen,--And, tranquil 'mid the bloomAs if it waited for a coming guest,A little house of peace and joy and loveWas nested like a snow-white dove.

From the rough mountain where I stood,Homesick for happiness,Only a narrow valley and a darkling woodTo cross, and then the long distressOf solitude would be forever past,--I should be home at last.But not too soon! oh, let me linger hereAnd feed my eyes, hungry with sorrow,On all this loveliness, so near,And mine to-morrow!

Then, from the wood, across the silvery blue,A dark bird flew,Silent, with sable wings.Close in his wake another came,--Fragments of midnight floating throughThe sunset flame,--Another and another, weaving ringsOf blackness on the primrose sky,--Another, and another, look, a score,A hundred, yes, a thousand rising heavilyFrom that accursed, dumb, and ancient wood,They boiled into the lucid airLike smoke from some deep caldron of despair!And more, and more, and ever more,The numberless, ill-omened broodFlapping their ragged plumes,Possessed the landscape and the evening lightWith menaces and glooms.Oh, dark, dark, dark they hovered o'er the placeWhere once I saw the little house so whiteAmid the flowers, covering every traceOf beauty from my troubled sight,--And suddenly it was night!

At break of day I crossed the wooded vale;And while the morning madeA trembling light among the tree-tops pale,I saw the sable birds on every limb,Clinging together closely in the shade,And croaking placidly their surly hymn.But, oh, the little land of peace and loveThat those night-loving wings had poised above,--Where was it gone?Lost, lost, forevermore!Only a cottage, dull and gray,In the cold light of dawn,With iron bars across the door:Only a garden where the drooping headOf one sad rose, foreboding its decay,Hung o'er a barren bed:Only a desolate field that layUntilled beneath the desolate day,--Where Eden seemed to bloom I found but these!So, wondering, I passed along my way,With anger in my heart, too deep for words,Against that grove of evil-sheltering trees,And the black magic of the croaking birds.

Words in this poem

eden n.
The garden where Adam and Eve first dwelt; hence, a delightful region or residence. [Heb. eden delight, pleasure; also, a place of pleasure, Eden.]
enchanted a.
Under the power of enchantment; possessed or exercised by enchanters; as, an enchanted castle.
unseen a.
Not seen or discovered.
homesick a.
Pining for home; in a nostalgic condition.
darkling a.
Becoming dark or gloomy; frowing.
loveliness n.
The state or quality of being lovely. [From Lovely.]
sable n.
A carnivorous animal of the Weasel family (Mustela zibellina) native of the northern latitudes of Europe, Asia, and America, -- noted for its fine, soft, and valuable fur. [OF. sable, F. zibeline sable (in sense 4), LL. sabellum; cf. D. sabel, Dan. sabel, zobel, Sw. sabel, sobel, G. zobel; all fr. Russ. sóbole.]
caldron n.
A large kettle or boiler of copper, brass, or iron. [OE. caldron, caudron, caudroun, OF. caudron, chauderon, F. chaudron, an aug. of F. chaudière, LL. caldaria, fr. L. caldarius suitable for warming, fr. caldus, c]
numberless a.
Innumerable; countless.
amid prep.
In the midst or middle of; surrounded or encompassed by; among. [OE. amidde, amiddes, on midden, AS. on middan, in the middle, fr. midde the middle. The s is an adverbial ending, originally marking the genitive; the t is a la]
vale n.
A tract of low ground, or of land between hills; a valley. [OE. val, F. val, L. vallis; perhaps akin to Gr. Avalanche, Vail to lower, Valley.]
placidly adv.
In a placid manner.
surly a.
Arrogant; haughty. Cotgrave. [Probably from sir, and originally meaning, sirlike, i.e., proud. See Sir, and Like, a.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Black Birds is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poems of Henry Van Dyke, Project Gutenberg ebook #16229; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Henry Van Dyke, The Black Birds, in The Poems of Henry Van Dyke (1925), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #16229, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/van-dyke-poems/the-black-birds.html, id L22819.

Form and metre

The Black Birds is 71 lines in 4 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABCBACDEFDF-EGG clearA · dreamedB · awayC · seemedB · atmosphereA · dayC · feetD · restE · greenF · sweetD · unseenF · bloom · guestE · loveG · doveG
  2. 2 ABABCCDEDE stoodA · happinessB · woodA · distressB · pastC · lastC · hereD · sorrowE · nearD · morrowE
  3. 3 AABCACB-D--EED-FGFHGHGG blueA · flewA · wingsB · cameC · throughA · flameC · ringsB · sky · scoreD · heavily · wood · airE · despairE · moreD · brood · plumesF · lightG · gloomsF · placeH · whiteG · traceH · sightG · nightG
  4. 4 ABACBCDDEFGEFHGHGGIGJIJ valeA · madeB · paleA · limbC · shadeB · hymnC · loveD · aboveD · goneE · forevermoreF · grayG · dawnE · doorF · headH · decayG · bedH · layG · dayG · theseI · wayG · wordsJ · treesI · birdsJ
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Once, only once, I saw it clear,--8·/˘·····
That Eden every human heart has dreamed10·/˘/˘/˘···
A hundred times, but always far away!10·/˘··/··˘/
Ah, well do I remember how it seemed,10····˘/˘···
Through the still atmosphere6···/˘·
Of that enchanted day,6··˘/˘·
To lie wide open to my weary feet:10···/˘··/˘·
A little land of love and joy and rest,10·/˘·······
With meadows of soft green,6·/····
Rosy with cyclamen, and sweet8/˘·/˘˘··
With delicate breath of violets unseen,--10·/˘··/˘˘˘/
And, tranquil 'mid the bloom6·/˘···
As if it waited for a coming guest,10···/˘··/˘·
A little house of peace and joy and love10·/˘·······
Was nested like a snow-white dove.8·/˘·····
From the rough mountain where I stood,8···/˘···
Homesick for happiness,6/··/˘˘
Only a narrow valley and a darkling wood12/˘·/˘/˘··/˘·
To cross, and then the long distress8······˘/
Of solitude would be forever past,--10·/˘···˘/˘·
I should be home at last.6······
But not too soon! oh, let me linger here10·······/˘·
And feed my eyes, hungry with sorrow,9····/˘·/˘
On all this loveliness, so near,8···/˘˘··
And mine to-morrow!5···/˘
Then, from the wood, across the silvery blue,10····˘/·/˘·
A dark bird flew,4····
Silent, with sable wings.6/˘·/˘·
Close in his wake another came,--8····˘/˘·
Fragments of midnight floating through8/˘·/·/˘·
The sunset flame,--4·/··
Another and another, weaving rings10˘/˘·˘/˘/˘·
Of blackness on the primrose sky,--8·/˘··/··
Another, and another, look, a score,10˘/˘·˘/˘···
A hundred, yes, a thousand rising heavily11·/˘··/˘/˘/˘
From that accursed, dumb, and ancient wood,10····˘··/˘·
They boiled into the lucid air9··˘···/˘·
Like smoke from some deep caldron of despair!10·····/˘·˘/
And more, and more, and ever more,8·····/˘·
The numberless, ill-omened brood9·/˘˘·/˘˘·
Flapping their ragged plumes,6/˘·/˘·
Possessed the landscape and the evening light10˘/·/···/˘·
With menaces and glooms.6·/˘˘··
Oh, dark, dark, dark they hovered o'er the place10·····/˘···
Where once I saw the little house so white10·····/˘···
Amid the flowers, covering every trace10˘/·//˘˘/˘·
Of beauty from my troubled sight,--9·/˘··/˘˘·
And suddenly it was night!7·/˘˘···
At break of day I crossed the wooded vale;10·······/˘·
And while the morning made6···/˘·
A trembling light among the tree-tops pale,10·/˘·······
I saw the sable birds on every limb,10···/˘··/˘·
Clinging together closely in the shade,10/˘˘/˘/˘···
And croaking placidly their surly hymn.10·/˘/˘˘·/˘·
But, oh, the little land of peace and love10···/˘·····
That those night-loving wings had poised above,--10···/˘·····
Where was it gone?4····
Lost, lost, forevermore!6······
Only a cottage, dull and gray,8/˘·/˘···
In the cold light of dawn,6······
With iron bars across the door:8·/˘·˘/··
Only a garden where the drooping head10/˘·/˘··/˘·
Of one sad rose, foreboding its decay,10····˘/˘·˘/
Hung o'er a barren bed:6···/˘·
Only a desolate field that lay9/˘·/˘˘···
Untilled beneath the desolate day,--10˘/˘···/˘˘·
Where Eden seemed to bloom I found but these!10·/˘·······
So, wondering, I passed along my way,10·/˘˘··˘/··
With anger in my heart, too deep for words,10·/˘·······
Against that grove of evil-sheltering trees,10·····//˘˘·
And the black magic of the croaking birds.10···/˘··/˘·

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