Voice: Lewis

Jean Toomer (1894–1967) · 1923

trochaic octameter · unrhymed · 6 lines · from Cane

Lewis: I think I can give him that. That note was meant for me. SomeNegroes have grown uncomfortable at my being here—

Kabnis: You mean, Mr. Lewis, some colored folks threw it? ChristAmighty!

Lewis: I’m on a sort of contract with myself. (Is about to leave.)Well, glad its nothing serious—

Words in this poem

uncomfortable a.
Feeling discomfort; uneasy; as, to be uncomfortable on account of one's position.
folks n.
In Anglo-Saxon times, the people of a group of townships or villages; a community; a tribe. [AS. folc; akin to D. volk, OS. & OHG. folk, G. volk, Icel. f, Sw. & Dan. folk, Lith. pulkas crowd, and perh. to E. follow.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Voice: Lewis is in the public domain. This text is taken from Cane, Project Gutenberg ebook #60093; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Jean Toomer, Voice: Lewis, in Cane (1923), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #60093, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/toomer-cane/voice-lewis.html, id L01583.

Form and metre

Voice: Lewis is 6 lines in 3 verse paragraphs. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. The metre is trochaic octameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 71%). 82% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 11.7 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending.

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Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic octameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Lewis: I think I can give him that. That note was meant for me. Some16/˘··············
Negroes have grown uncomfortable at my being here—11/˘··˘/˘··/·
Kabnis: You mean, Mr. Lewis, some colored folks threw it? Christ15····/˘/˘·/˘····
Amighty!3···
Lewis: I’m on a sort of contract with myself. (Is about to leave.)17/˘·····˘/··/·····
Well, glad its nothing serious—8···/˘/˘˘

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