Storm Ending

Jean Toomer (1894–1967) · 1923

9 lines · from Cane

Thunder blossoms gorgeously above our heads,Great, hollow, bell-like flowers,Rumbling in the wind,Stretching clappers to strike our ears ..Full-lipped flowersBitten by the sunBleeding rainDripping rain like golden honey—And the sweet earth flying from the thunder.

Words in this poem

rumbling
a. & n. from Rumble, v. i.
dripping n.
A falling in drops, or the sound so made.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Storm Ending is in the public domain. This text is taken from Cane, Project Gutenberg ebook #60093; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Jean Toomer, Storm Ending, in Cane (1923), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #60093, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/toomer-cane/storm-ending.html, id L01574.

Form and metre

Storm Ending is 9 lines in a single stanza. 94% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.0 syllables. 4 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 33% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A--A---- heads · flowersA · wind · ears · flowersA · sun · rain · honey · thunder
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Thunder blossoms gorgeously above our heads,11/˘/˘·····/·
Great, hollow, bell-like flowers,7·/˘··/˘
Rumbling in the wind,6/˘˘···
Stretching clappers to strike our ears ..9/˘/˘··/˘·
Full-lipped flowers4··/˘
Bitten by the sun5/˘···
Bleeding rain3/˘·
Dripping rain like golden honey—8/˘··/˘/˘
And the sweet earth flying from the thunder.10····/˘··/˘

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