Carma

Jean Toomer (1894–1967) · 1923

rhyming couplets · 4 lines · from Cane

Wind is in the cane. Come along.Cane leaves swaying, rusty with talk,Scratching choruses above the guinea’s squawk,Wind is in the cane. Come along.

Words in this poem

squawk v. i.
To utter a shrill, abrupt scream; to squeak harshly. Squawking thrush (Zoöl.), the missel turush; -- so called from its note when alarmed. [See Squeak.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Carma is in the public domain. This text is taken from Cane, Project Gutenberg ebook #60093; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Jean Toomer, Carma, in Cane (1923), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #60093, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/toomer-cane/carma.html, id L01562.

Form and metre

Carma is 4 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 50% of the lines. The lines average 8.5 syllables.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBA alongA · talkB · squawkB · alongA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Wind is in the cane. Come along.8······˘/
Cane leaves swaying, rusty with talk,8··/˘/˘··
Scratching choruses above the guinea’s squawk,10/˘/˘···/˘·
Wind is in the cane. Come along.8······˘/

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