Book I: Elegy the Eleventh: War Is a Crime
Whoe'er first forged the terror-striking sword,His own fierce heart had tempered like its blade.What slaughter followed! Ah! what conflict wild!What swifter journeys unto darksome death!But blame not him! Ourselves have madly turnedOn one another's breasts that cunning edgeWherewith he meant mere blood of beast to spill.
Gold makes our crime. No need for plundering war,When bowls of beech-wood held the frugal feast.No citadel was seen nor moated wall;The shepherd chief led home his motley flock,And slumbered free from care. Would I had livedIn that good, golden time; nor e'er had knownA mob in arms arrayed; nor felt my heartThrob to the trumpet's call! Now to the warsI must away, where haply some chance foeBears now the blade my naked side shall feel.Save me, dear Lares of my hearth and home!Ye oft my childish steps did guard and bless,As timidly beneath your seat they strayed.
Deem it no shame that hewn of ancient oakYour simple emblems in my dwelling stand!For so the pious generations goneRevered your powers, and with offerings rudeTo rough-hewn gods in narrow-built abodes,Lived beautiful and honorable lives.Did they not bring to crown your hallowed browsGarlands of ripest corn, or pour new wineIn pure libation on the thirsty ground?Oft on some votive day the father broughtThe consecrated loaf, and close behindHis little daughter in her virgin palmBore honey bright as gold. O powers benign!To ye once more a faithful servant praysFor safety! Let the deadly brazen spearPass harmless o'er my head! and I will slayFor sacrifice, with many a thankful song,A swine and all her brood, while I, the priest,Bearing the votive basket myrtle-bound,Walk clothed in white, with myrtle in my hair.
Grant me but this! and he who can may proveMighty in arms and by the grace of MarsLay chieftains low; and let him tell the taleTo me who drink his health, while on the boardHis wine-dipped finger draws, line after line,Just how his trenches ranged! What madness direBids men go foraging for death in war?Our death is always near, and hour by hour,With soundless step a little nearer draws.
What harvest down below, or vineyard green?There Cerberus howls, and o'er the Stygian floodThe dark ship goes; while on the clouded shoreWith hollow cheek and tresses lustreless,Wanders the ghostly throng. O happier farSome white-haired sire, among his children dear,Beneath a lowly thatch! His sturdy sonShepherds the young rams; he, his gentle ewes;And oft at eve, his willing labor done,His careful wife his weary limbs will batheFrom a full, steaming bowl. Such lot be mine!So let this head grow gray, while I shall tell,Repeating oft, the deeds of long ago!Then may long Peace my country's harvests bless!Till then, let Peace on all our fields abide!Bright-vestured Peace, who first beneath their yokeLed oxen in the plough, who first the vineDid nourish tenderly, and chose good grapes,That rare old wine may pass from sire to son!Peace! who doth keep the plow and harrow bright,While rust on some forgotten shelf devoursThe cruel soldier's useless sword and shield.From peaceful holiday with mirth and wineThe rustic, not half sober, driveth homeWith wife and weans upon the lumbering wain.
But wars by Venus kindled ne'er have done;The vanquished lass, with tresses rudely torn,Of doors broke down, and smitten cheek complains;And he, her victor-lover, weeps to seeHow strong were his wild hands. But mocking LoveTeaches more angry words, and while they rave,Sits with a smile between! O heart of stone!O iron heart! that could thy sweetheart strike!Ye gods avenge her! Is it not enoughTo tear her soft robe from her limbs away,And loose her knotted hair?--Enough, indeed,To move her tears! Thrice happy is the wightWhose frown some lovely mistress weeps to see!But he who gives her blows!--Go, let him bearA sword and spear! In exile let him beFrom Venus' mild domain! Come blessed Peace!Come, holding forth thy blade of ripened corn!Fill thy large lap with mellow fruits and fair!
Words in this poem 27
- swifter v. t.
- To tighten, as slack standing rigging, by bringing the opposite shrouds nearer.
- darksome a.
- Dark; gloomy; obscure; shaded; cheerless.
- madly adv.
- In a mad manner; without reason or understanding; wildly. [From Mad, a.]
- wherewith adv.
- With which; -- used relatively.
- spill n.
- A bit of wood split off; a splinter. [sq. root170. Cf. Spell a splinter.]
- throb v. i.
- To beat, or pulsate, with more than usual force or rapidity; to beat in consequence of agitation; to palpitate; -- said of the heart, pulse, etc. [OE. ; of uncertain origin; cf. Russ. trepete a trembling, and E. trepidation.]
- haply adv.
- By hap, chance, luck, or accident; perhaps; it may be.
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- deem v. t.
- To decide; to judge; to sentence; to condemn. [OE. demen to judge, condemn, AS. d, fr. d doom; akin to OFries. d, OS. ad, D. doemen, OHG. tuommen, Icel. dæma, Sw. dömma, Dan. dömme, Goth. d. See Doom, n., an]
- libation n.
- The act of pouring a liquid or liquor, usually wine, either on the ground or on a victim in sacrifice, in honor of some deity; also, the wine or liquid thus poured out. [L. libatio, fr. libare to take a little from anything, to taste, to pour out as an offering: cf. F. libation.]
- votive a.
- Given by vow, or in fulfillment of a vow; consecrated by a vow; devoted; as, votive offerings; a votive tablet. [L. votivus, fr. votum a vow: cf. F. votif. See Vow.]
- thankful a.
- Obtaining or deserving thanks; thankworthy. [AS. Þancfull.]
- dire a.
- Ill-boding; portentous; as, dire omens. [L. dirus; of uncertain origin.]
- soundless a.
- Not capable of being sounded or fathomed; unfathomable.
- vineyard n.
- An inclosure or yard for grapevines; a plantation of vines producing grapes. [For OE. winyard, AS. wingeard; influenced by E. vine. See Wine, and Yard an inclosure.]
- cerberus n.
- A monster, in the shape, of a three-headed dog, guarding the entrance into the infernal regions, Hence: Any vigilant custodian or guardian, esp. if surly.
- stygian a.
- Of or pertaining to the river Styx; hence, hellish; infernal.
- lustreless a.
- Destitute of luster; dim; dull.
- ghostly a.
- Relating to the soul; not carnal or secular; spiritual; as, a ghostly confessor. [OE. gastlich, gostlich, AS. gastlic. See Ghost.]
- sire n.
- A lord, master, or other person in authority. See Sir. [F. sire, originally, an older person. See Sir.]
- tenderly adv.
- In a tender manner; with tenderness; mildly; gently; softly; in a manner not to injure or give pain; with pity or affection; kindly.
- lumbering n.
- The business of cutting or getting timber or logs from the forest for lumber. [U.S.]
- wain n.
- A four-wheeled vehicle for the transportation of goods, produce, etc.; a wagon. [OE. wain, AS. wægn; akin to D. & G. wagen, OHG. wagan, Icel. & Sw. vagn, Dan. vogn, and E. way. Way, Weigh, and cf. Wagon.]
- lass n.
- A youth woman; a girl; a sweetheart. [OE. lasse; prob. of Celtic origin; cf. W. llodes girl, fem. of llawd lad. (Lad a youth.]
- broke v. i.
- To transact business for another. Brome. [See Broker, and cf. Brook.]
- angry a.
- Troublesome; vexatious; rigorous. [See Anger.]
- wight n.
- A whit; a bit; a jot. [OE. wight, wiht, a wight, a whit, AS. wiht, wuht, a creature, a thing; skin to D. wicht a child, OS. & OHG. wiht a creature, thing, G. wicht a creature, Icel. v]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
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Form and metre
Book I: Elegy the Eleventh: War Is a Crime is 92 lines in 6 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%). 95% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables. 2 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 42% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 3 -------AB---A-----B- oak · stand · gone · rude · abodes · lives · brows · wineA · groundB · brought · behind · palm · benignA · prays · spear · slay · song · priest · boundB · hair
- 5 ------A-A-B-----B-A---B-- green · flood · shore · lustreless · far · dear · sonA · ewes · doneA · bathe · mineB · tell · ago · bless · abide · yoke · vineB · grapes · sonA · bright · devours · shield · wineB · home · wain
- 6 -A-B--------BCB-AC done · tornA · complains · seeB · love · rave · stone · strike · enough · away · indeed · wight · seeB · bearC · beB · peace · cornA · fairC
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Whoe'er first forged the terror-striking sword, | 10 | ···˘·/˘/˘· |
| His own fierce heart had tempered like its blade. | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| What slaughter followed! Ah! what conflict wild! | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘· |
| What swifter journeys unto darksome death! | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘· |
| But blame not him! Ourselves have madly turned | 10 | ····˘/·/˘· |
| On one another's breasts that cunning edge | 10 | ··˘/˘··/˘· |
| Wherewith he meant mere blood of beast to spill. | 10 | ˘/········ |
| Gold makes our crime. No need for plundering war, | 10 | ··/····/˘· |
| When bowls of beech-wood held the frugal feast. | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| No citadel was seen nor moated wall; | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| The shepherd chief led home his motley flock, | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| And slumbered free from care. Would I had lived | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| In that good, golden time; nor e'er had known | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| A mob in arms arrayed; nor felt my heart | 10 | ····˘/···· |
| Throb to the trumpet's call! Now to the wars | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| I must away, where haply some chance foe | 10 | ··˘/·/˘··· |
| Bears now the blade my naked side shall feel. | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Save me, dear Lares of my hearth and home! | 9 | ········· |
| Ye oft my childish steps did guard and bless, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| As timidly beneath your seat they strayed. | 10 | ·/˘˘······ |
| Deem it no shame that hewn of ancient oak | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Your simple emblems in my dwelling stand! | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘· |
| For so the pious generations gone | 10 | ···/˘·˘/˘· |
| Revered your powers, and with offerings rude | 10 | ˘/·/··/˘˘· |
| To rough-hewn gods in narrow-built abodes, | 10 | ·····/˘·˘/ |
| Lived beautiful and honorable lives. | 10 | ·/˘˘·/˘˘˘· |
| Did they not bring to crown your hallowed brows | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Garlands of ripest corn, or pour new wine | 10 | /˘········ |
| In pure libation on the thirsty ground? | 10 | ··˘/˘··/˘· |
| Oft on some votive day the father brought | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| The consecrated loaf, and close behind | 10 | ·/˘·˘····· |
| His little daughter in her virgin palm | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘· |
| Bore honey bright as gold. O powers benign! | 10 | ·/˘····/˘/ |
| To ye once more a faithful servant prays | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| For safety! Let the deadly brazen spear | 10 | ·/˘··/˘/˘· |
| Pass harmless o'er my head! and I will slay | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| For sacrifice, with many a thankful song, | 10 | ·/˘··/·/˘· |
| A swine and all her brood, while I, the priest, | 10 | ·········· |
| Bearing the votive basket myrtle-bound, | 10 | /˘·/˘/˘/˘· |
| Walk clothed in white, with myrtle in my hair. | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Grant me but this! and he who can may prove | 10 | ·········· |
| Mighty in arms and by the grace of Mars | 10 | /˘········ |
| Lay chieftains low; and let him tell the tale | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| To me who drink his health, while on the board | 10 | ·········· |
| His wine-dipped finger draws, line after line, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Just how his trenches ranged! What madness dire | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Bids men go foraging for death in war? | 10 | ···/˘˘···· |
| Our death is always near, and hour by hour, | 11 | /··/˘··/·/˘ |
| With soundless step a little nearer draws. | 10 | ·/˘··/˘/˘· |
| What harvest down below, or vineyard green? | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| There Cerberus howls, and o'er the Stygian flood | 11 | ·/˘˘····/˘· |
| The dark ship goes; while on the clouded shore | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| With hollow cheek and tresses lustreless, | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| Wanders the ghostly throng. O happier far | 10 | /˘·/˘··/˘· |
| Some white-haired sire, among his children dear, | 10 | ···/···/˘· |
| Beneath a lowly thatch! His sturdy son | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Shepherds the young rams; he, his gentle ewes; | 10 | /˘·····/˘· |
| And oft at eve, his willing labor done, | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| His careful wife his weary limbs will bathe | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| From a full, steaming bowl. Such lot be mine! | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| So let this head grow gray, while I shall tell, | 10 | ·········· |
| Repeating oft, the deeds of long ago! | 10 | ˘/˘·····˘/ |
| Then may long Peace my country's harvests bless! | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| Till then, let Peace on all our fields abide! | 10 | ······/·˘/ |
| Bright-vestured Peace, who first beneath their yoke | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| Led oxen in the plough, who first the vine | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| Did nourish tenderly, and chose good grapes, | 10 | ·/˘/˘˘···· |
| That rare old wine may pass from sire to son! | 10 | ·······/·· |
| Peace! who doth keep the plow and harrow bright, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| While rust on some forgotten shelf devours | 11 | ····˘/˘·˘/˘ |
| The cruel soldier's useless sword and shield. | 10 | ·/˘/˘/˘··· |
| From peaceful holiday with mirth and wine | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| The rustic, not half sober, driveth home | 10 | ·/˘··/˘/˘· |
| With wife and weans upon the lumbering wain. | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| But wars by Venus kindled ne'er have done; | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| The vanquished lass, with tresses rudely torn, | 10 | ·/˘··/˘/˘· |
| Of doors broke down, and smitten cheek complains; | 10 | ·····/˘·˘/ |
| And he, her victor-lover, weeps to see | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| How strong were his wild hands. But mocking Love | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Teaches more angry words, and while they rave, | 10 | /˘·/˘····· |
| Sits with a smile between! O heart of stone! | 10 | ·········· |
| O iron heart! that could thy sweetheart strike! | 10 | ·/˘····/·· |
| Ye gods avenge her! Is it not enough | 10 | ··˘/····˘/ |
| To tear her soft robe from her limbs away, | 10 | ········˘/ |
| And loose her knotted hair?--Enough, indeed, | 10 | ···/˘·˘/˘/ |
| To move her tears! Thrice happy is the wight | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Whose frown some lovely mistress weeps to see! | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| But he who gives her blows!--Go, let him bear | 10 | ·········· |
| A sword and spear! In exile let him be | 10 | ·····/···· |
| From Venus' mild domain! Come blessed Peace! | 10 | ·/˘·˘/··˘· |
| Come, holding forth thy blade of ripened corn! | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| Fill thy large lap with mellow fruits and fair! | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
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