III. “Manus Animam Pinxit”

Francis Thompson (1859–1907) · 1893

iambic pentameter · 75 lines · from Poems (1893)

LADY who hold’st on me dominion!Within your spirit’s arms I stay me fastAgainst the fellImmitigate ravening of the gates of hell;And claim my right in you, most hardly won,Of chaste fidelity upon the chaste:Hold me and hold by me, lest both should fall(O in high escalade high companion!)Even in the breach of Heaven’s assaulted wall.Like to a wind-sown sapling grow I fromThe clift, Sweet, of your skyward-jetting soul,—Shook by all gusts that sweep it, overcomeBy all its clouds incumbent: O be trueTo your soul, dearest, as my life to you!For if that soil grow sterile, then the wholeOf me must shrivel, from the topmost shootOf climbing poesy, and my life, killed through,Dry down and perish to the foodless root.

Sweet Summer! unto you this swallow drew,By secret instincts inappeasable,That did direct him well,Lured from his gelid North which wrought him wrong,Wintered of sunning song;—By happy instincts inappeasable,Ah yes! that led him well,Lured to the untried regions and the newClimes of auspicious you;To twitter there, and in his singing dwell.But ah! if you, my Summer, should grow waste,With grieving skies o’ercast,For such migration my poor wing was strongBut once; it has no power to fare againForth o’er the heads of men,Nor other Summers for its Sanctuary:But from your mind’s chilled skyIt needs must drop, and lie with stiffened wingsAmong your soul’s forlornest things;A speck upon your memory, alack!A dead fly in a dusty window-crack.

O therefore you who areWhat words, being to such mysteriesAs raiment to the body is,Should rather hide than tell;Chaste and intelligential love:Whose form is as a groveHushed with the cooing of an unseen dove;Whose spirit to my touch thrills purer farThan is the tingling of a silver bell;Whose body other ladies well might bearAs soul,—yea, which it profanation wereFor all but you to take as fleshly woof,Being spirit truest proof;Whose spirit sure is lineal to thatWhich sang Magnificat:Chastest, since such you are,Take this curbed spirit of mine,Which your own eyes invest with light divine,For lofty love and high auxiliarIn daily exalt empriseWhich outsoars mortal eyes;This soul which on your soul is laid,As maid’s breast against breast of maid;Beholding how your own I have engravedOn it, and with what purging thoughts have lavedThis love of mine from all mortalityIndeed the copy is a painful one,And with long labour done!O if you doubt the thing you are, lady,Come then, and look in me;Your beauty, Dian, dress and contemplateWithin a pool to Dian consecrate!Unveil this spirit, lady, when you will,For unto all but you ’tis veilèd still:Unveil, and fearless gaze there, you alone,And if you love the image—’tis your own!

Words in this poem 21
ravening n.
Eagerness for plunder; rapacity; extortion. Luke xi. 39.
escalade n.
A furious attack made by troops on a fortified place, in which ladders are used to pass a ditch or mount a rampart. [F., Sp. escalada (cf. It. scalata), fr. Sp. escalar to scale, LL. scalare, fr. L. scala ladder. See Scale, v. t.]
clift n.
A cleft of crack; a narrow opening. [See Cleft, n.]
shook v. t.
To pack, as staves, in a shook.
poesy n.
The art of composing poems; poetical skill or faculty; as, the heavenly gift of poesy. [F. poésie (cf. It. poesia), L. poesis, from Gr. Posy.]
foodless a.
Without food; barren. Sandys.
inappeasable a.
Incapable of being appeased or satisfied; unappeasable.
gelid a.
Cold; very cold; frozen. [L. gelidus, fr. gelun frost, cold. See Cold, and cf. Congeal, Gelatin, Jelly.]
twitter n.
One who twits, or reproaches; an upbraider. [From Twit.]
dwell v. i.
To delay; to linger. [OE. dwellen, dwelien, to err, linger, AS. dwellan to deceive, hinder, delay, dwelian to err; akin to Icel. dvelja to delay, tarry, Sw. dväljas to dwell, Dan. dv]
chilled a.
Hardened on the surface or edge by chilling; as, chilled iron; a chilled wheel.
needs adv.
Of necessity; necessarily; indispensably; -- often with must, and equivalent to of need. [Orig. gen. of need, used as an adverb. Cf. - wards.]
alack interj.
An exclamation expressive of sorrow. [Prob. from ah! lack! OE. lak loss, failure, misfortune. See Lack.]
intelligential a.
Of or pertaining to the intelligence; exercising or implying understanding; intellectual. [Cf. F. intelligentiel.]
unseen a.
Not seen or discovered.
magnificat n.
The song of the Virgin Mary, Luke i. 46; -- so called because it commences with this word in the Vulgate. [L., it magnifies.]
emprise n.
An enterprise; endeavor; adventure. [OF. emprise, fr. emprendre to undertake; pref. em- (L. in) + F. prendre to take, L. prehendere, prendere; prae before + a verb akin to E. get. See Get, and cf. ]
beholding a.
Obliged; beholden.
mortality n.
The condition or quality of being mortal; subjection to death or to the necessity of dying. [L. mortalitas: cf. F. mortalité.]
contemplate v. t.
To look at on all sides or in all its bearings; to view or consider with continued attention; to regard with deliberate care; to meditate on; to study. [L. contemplatus, p.p. of contemplari to contemplate; con- + templum a space for observation marked out by the augur. See Temple.]
unveil v. t.
To remove a veil from; to divest of a veil; to uncover; to disclose to view; to reveal; as, she unveiled her face. [1st pref. un- + veil.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

III. “Manus Animam Pinxit” is 75 lines in 3 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 94% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.8 syllables. 8 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 35% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 A-BBA-CACDEDFFEGFG dominionA · fast · fellB · hellB · wonA · chaste · fallC · companionA · wallC · fromD · soulE · overcomeD · trueF · youF · wholeE · shootG · throughF · rootG
  2. 2 ABCDDBCAACEEDFF--GGHH drewA · inappeasableB · wellC · wrongD · songD · inappeasableB · wellC · newA · youA · dwellC · wasteE · o'ercastE · strongD · againF · menF · sanctuary · sky · wingsG · thingsG · alackH · crackH
  3. 3 -AA-B-B----CC---DD-EEFFGG-HH--IIJJKK are · mysteriesA · isA · tell · loveB · grove · doveB · far · bell · bear · were · woofC · proofC · that · magnificat · are · mineD · divineD · auxiliar · empriseE · eyesE · laidF · maidF · engravedG · lavedG · mortality · oneH · doneH · lady · me · contemplateI · consecrateI · willJ · stillJ · aloneK · ownK
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
LADY who hold’st on me dominion!9/˘····˘/˘
Within your spirit’s arms I stay me fast10···/˘·····
Against the fell4····
Immitigate ravening of the gates of hell;11····/˘·····
And claim my right in you, most hardly won,10·······/˘·
Of chaste fidelity upon the chaste:10··˘/˘˘····
Hold me and hold by me, lest both should fall10··········
(O in high escalade high companion!)10·······˘/˘
Even in the breach of Heaven’s assaulted wall.11/····/˘˘/˘·
Like to a wind-sown sapling grow I from10·····/˘···
The clift, Sweet, of your skyward-jetting soul,—10·····/˘/˘·
Shook by all gusts that sweep it, overcome10·······/˘·
By all its clouds incumbent: O be true10····˘/˘···
To your soul, dearest, as my life to you!10···/˘·····
For if that soil grow sterile, then the whole10·····/˘···
Of me must shrivel, from the topmost shoot10···/˘··/˘·
Of climbing poesy, and my life, killed through,11·/˘/˘˘·····
Dry down and perish to the foodless root.10···/˘··/˘·
Sweet Summer! unto you this swallow drew,10·/˘····/˘·
By secret instincts inappeasable,10·/˘/˘·····
That did direct him well,6··˘/··
Lured from his gelid North which wrought him wrong,10···/˘·····
Wintered of sunning song;—6/˘·/˘·
By happy instincts inappeasable,10·/˘/˘·····
Ah yes! that led him well,6······
Lured to the untried regions and the new10···˘//˘···
Climes of auspicious you;6··˘/˘·
To twitter there, and in his singing dwell.10·/˘····/˘·
But ah! if you, my Summer, should grow waste,10·····/˘···
With grieving skies o’ercast,6·/˘···
For such migration my poor wing was strong10··˘/˘·····
But once; it has no power to fare again10·····/··˘/
Forth o’er the heads of men,6······
Nor other Summers for its Sanctuary:11·/˘/˘··/˘·˘
But from your mind’s chilled sky6······
It needs must drop, and lie with stiffened wings10·······/˘·
Among your soul’s forlornest things;8····˘/˘·
A speck upon your memory, alack!10·····/˘˘˘/
A dead fly in a dusty window-crack.10·····/˘/˘·
O therefore you who are6······
What words, being to such mysteries9··/˘··/˘˘
As raiment to the body is,8·/˘··/˘·
Should rather hide than tell;6·/˘···
Chaste and intelligential love:5·····
Whose form is as a grove6······
Hushed with the cooing of an unseen dove;10···/˘··˘/·
Whose spirit to my touch thrills purer far10·/˘····/˘·
Than is the tingling of a silver bell;10···/˘··/˘·
Whose body other ladies well might bear10·/˘/˘/˘···
As soul,—yea, which it profanation were10······˘/˘·
For all but you to take as fleshly woof,10·······/˘·
Being spirit truest proof;7/˘/˘/˘·
Whose spirit sure is lineal to that10·/˘··/˘˘··
Which sang Magnificat:6··˘/˘˘
Chastest, since such you are,6/˘····
Take this curbed spirit of mine,7···/˘··
Which your own eyes invest with light divine,10····˘/··˘/
For lofty love and high auxiliar9·/˘···˘/˘
In daily exalt emprise7·/˘˘/˘/
Which outsoars mortal eyes;6···/˘·
This soul which on your soul is laid,8········
As maid’s breast against breast of maid;8········
Beholding how your own I have engraved10˘/˘·····˘/
On it, and with what purging thoughts have laved10·····/˘···
This love of mine from all mortality10······˘/˘˘
Indeed the copy is a painful one,10˘/·/˘··/˘·
And with long labour done!6···/··
O if you doubt the thing you are, lady,10········/˘
Come then, and look in me;6······
Your beauty, Dian, dress and contemplate10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Within a pool to Dian consecrate!10·····/˘/˘·
Unveil this spirit, lady, when you will,10˘/·/˘/˘···
For unto all but you ’tis veilèd still:9·········
Unveil, and fearless gaze there, you alone,10˘/·/˘···˘/
And if you love the image—’tis your own!10·····/˘···

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