May 23

Edward Thomas (1878–1917) · 1917

iambic pentameter · heroic couplets · 46 lines · from Poems

THERE never was a finer day,And never will be while May is May,--The third, and not the last of its kind;But though fair and clear the two behindSeemed pursued by tempests overpast;And the morrow with fear that it could not lastWas spoiled. To-day ere the stones were warmFive minutes of thunderstormDashed it with rain, as if to secure,By one tear, its beauty the luck to endure.

At mid-day then along the laneOld Jack Noman appeared again,Jaunty and old, crooked and tall,And stopped and grinned at me over the wall,With a cowslip bunch in his button-holeAnd one in his cap. Who could say if his rollCame from flints in the road, the weather, or ale?He was welcome as the nightingale.Not an hour of the sun had been wasted on Jack"I've got my Indian complexion back"Said he. He was tanned like a harvester,Like his short clay pipe, like the leaf and burThat clung to his coat from last night's bed,Like the ploughland crumbling red.Fairer flowers were none on the earthThan his cowslips wet with the dew of their birth,Or fresher leaves than the cress in his basket."Where did they come from, Jack?" "Don't ask it,And you'll be told no lies." "Very well:Then I can't buy." "I don't want to sell.Take them and these flowers, too, free.Perhaps you have something to give me?Wait till next time. The better the day . . .The Lord couldn't make a better, I say;If he could, he never has done."So off went Jack with his roll-walk-run,Leaving his cresses from Oakshott rillAnd his cowslips from Wheatham hill.

'Twas the first day that the midges bit;But though they bit me, I was glad of it:Of the dust in my face, too, I was glad.Spring could do nothing to make me sad.Bluebells hid all the ruts in the copse.The elm seeds lay in the road like hops,That fine day, May the twenty-third,The day Jack Noman disappeared.

Words in this poem

thunderstorm n.
A storm accompanied with lightning and thunder.
cowslip n.
A common flower in England (Primula veris) having yellow blossoms and appearing in early spring. It is often cultivated in the United States. [AS. c, c, prob. orig., cow's droppings. Cf. Slop, n.]
complexion n.
The state of being complex; complexity. [F. complexion, fr. L. complexio. See Complex, a.]
harvester n.
One who harvests; a machine for cutting and gathering grain; a reaper.
clung a.
Wasted away; shrunken. [Prop. p. p. fr. OE. clingen to wither. See Cling, v. i.]
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
rill n.
A very small brook; a streamlet. [Cf. LG. rille a small channel or brook, a furrow, a chamfer, OE. rigol a small brook, F. rigole a trench or furrow for water, W. rhill a row, rhigol a little di]
copse n.
A wood of small growth; a thicket of brushwood. See Coppice. [Contr. from coppice.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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May 23 is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #22423; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

May 23 is 46 lines in 3 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 87% of the lines: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 76%). 91% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.4 syllables. 4 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 24% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEE dayA · mayA · kindB · behindB · overpastC · lastC · warmD · thunderstormD · secureE · endureE
  2. 2 AABBCC-BDD--EEFFGGHHIIJJKKLL laneA · againA · tallB · wallB · holeC · rollC · ale · nightingaleB · jackD · backD · harvester · bur · bedE · redE · earthF · birthF · basketG · itG · wellH · sellH · freeI · meI · dayJ · sayJ · doneK · runK · rillL · hillL
  3. 3 AABBCC-- bitA · itA · gladB · sadB · copseC · hopsC · third · disappeared
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
THERE never was a finer day,8·/˘··/˘·
And never will be while May is May,--9·/˘······
The third, and not the last of its kind;9·········
But though fair and clear the two behind9·········
Seemed pursued by tempests overpast;10·˘˘/·/˘···
And the morrow with fear that it could not last11··/˘·······
Was spoiled. To-day ere the stones were warm10··˘·······
Five minutes of thunderstorm7·/˘·/˘·
Dashed it with rain, as if to secure,10·˘······˘/
By one tear, its beauty the luck to endure.11····/˘···˘/
At mid-day then along the lane8····˘/··
Old Jack Noman appeared again,9····˘/˘˘/
Jaunty and old, crooked and tall,9/˘··/˘˘··
And stopped and grinned at me over the wall,10··········
With a cowslip bunch in his button-hole10··/˘···/˘·
And one in his cap. Who could say if his roll11···········
Came from flints in the road, the weather, or ale?11·······/˘··
He was welcome as the nightingale.9··/˘··/˘˘
Not an hour of the sun had been wasted on Jack12··/·····/˘··
"I've got my Indian complexion back"10···/˘˘˘/˘·
Said he. He was tanned like a harvester,10·······/˘˘
Like his short clay pipe, like the leaf and bur10··········
That clung to his coat from last night's bed,9·········
Like the ploughland crumbling red.8····/˘˘·
Fairer flowers were none on the earth9/˘/˘·····
Than his cowslips wet with the dew of their birth,11··/˘·······
Or fresher leaves than the cress in his basket.11·/˘······/˘
"Where did they come from, Jack?" "Don't ask it,9·········
And you'll be told no lies." "Very well:9······/˘·
Then I can't buy." "I don't want to sell.9·········
Take them and these flowers, too, free.8····/˘··
Perhaps you have something to give me?9˘/··/˘···
Wait till next time. The better the day . . .9·····/˘··
The Lord couldn't make a better, I say;10··/˘··/˘··
If he could, he never has done."8····/˘··
So off went Jack with his roll-walk-run,9·········
Leaving his cresses from Oakshott rill9/˘·/˘····
And his cowslips from Wheatham hill.8··/˘····
'Twas the first day that the midges bit;9······/˘·
But though they bit me, I was glad of it:10··········
Of the dust in my face, too, I was glad.10··········
Spring could do nothing to make me sad.9···/˘····
Bluebells hid all the ruts in the copse.9/········
The elm seeds lay in the road like hops,9·········
That fine day, May the twenty-third,8·····/˘·
The day Jack Noman disappeared.9······˘/˘

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