It Was upon

Edward Thomas (1878–1917) · 1917

iambic pentameter · 14 lines · from Poems

IT was upon a July evening.At a stile I stood, looking along a pathOver the country by a second SpringDrenched perfect green again. "The lattermathWill be a fine one." So the stranger said,A wandering man. Albeit I stood at rest,Flushed with desire I was. The earth outspread,Like meadows of the future, I possessed.

And as an unaccomplished prophecyThe stranger's words, after the intervalOf a score years, when those fields are by meNever to be recrossed, now I recall,This July eve, and question, wondering,What of the lattermath to this hoar Spring?

Words in this poem

stile n.
A pin set on the face of a dial, to cast a shadow; a style. See Style. Moxon. [See Style.]
lattermath n.
The latter, or second, mowing; the aftermath. [Cf. Aftermath.]
albeit conj.
Even though; although; notwithstanding. [OE. al be although it be, where al is our all. Cf. Although.]
outspread v. t.
To spread out; to expand; -- usually as a past part. or adj.
unaccomplished a.
Not accomplished or performed; unfinished; also, deficient in accomplishment; unrefined.
hoar v. t.
To become moldy or musty. [AS. harian to grow gray.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

It Was upon is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #22423; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Edward Thomas, It Was upon, in Poems (1917), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #22423, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/thomas-edward-poems/it-was-upon.html, id L08174.

Form and metre

It Was upon is 14 lines in 2 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 78%). 82% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.1 syllables. 5 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 43% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCDCD eveningA · pathB · springA · lattermathB · saidC · restD · outspreadC · possessedD
  2. 2 -A-ABB prophecy · intervalA · me · recallA · wonderingB · springB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
IT was upon a July evening.9······//˘
At a stile I stood, looking along a path11·····/˘˘/··
Over the country by a second Spring10···/˘··/˘·
Drenched perfect green again. "The lattermath10·/··˘/·/˘˘
Will be a fine one." So the stranger said,10·······/˘·
A wandering man. Albeit I stood at rest,11·/˘·˘/˘····
Flushed with desire I was. The earth outspread,10··˘/····˘/
Like meadows of the future, I possessed.10·/···/˘·˘/
And as an unaccomplished prophecy10·······/˘˘
The stranger's words, after the interval10·/˘····/˘˘
Of a score years, when those fields are by me10··········
Never to be recrossed, now I recall,10/˘··˘/··˘/
This July eve, and question, wondering,10··/··/˘/˘˘
What of the lattermath to this hoar Spring?10···/˘˘····

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