To Mary

William Makepeace Thackeray (1811–1863) · 1849–1855

anapaestic trimeter · ABABCDCD · 16 lines · from Ballads

I seem, in the midst of the crowd,The lightest of all;My laughter rings cheery and loud,In banquet and ball.My lip hath its smiles and its sneers,For all men to see;But my soul, and my truth, and my tears,Are for thee, are for thee!

Around me they flatter and fawn--The young and the old.The fairest are ready to pawnTheir hearts for my gold.They sue me--I laugh as I spurnThe slaves at my knee;But in faith and in fondness I turnUnto thee, unto thee!

Words in this poem

spurn v. t.
To drive back or away, as with the foot; to kick. [OE. spurnen to kick against, to stumble over, AS. spurnan to kick, offend; akin to spura spur, OS. & OHG. spurnan to kick, Icel. spyrna, L. spernere to despise,]
fondness n.
The quality or state of being fond; foolishness.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

To Mary is in the public domain. This text is taken from Ballads, Project Gutenberg ebook #2732; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: William Makepeace Thackeray, To Mary, in Ballads (1849–1855), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #2732, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/thackeray-ballads/to-mary.html, id L10360.

Form and metre

To Mary is 16 lines in 2 stanzas of 8 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABABCDCD. The metre is anapaestic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 98%). 94% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 6.8 syllables. 19% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCDCD crowdA · allB · loudA · ballB · sneersC · seeD · tearsC · theeD
  2. 2 ABABCDCD fawnA · oldB · pawnA · goldB · spurnC · kneeD · turnC · theeD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
I seem, in the midst of the crowd,8········
The lightest of all;5·/˘··
My laughter rings cheery and loud,8·/˘·/˘··
In banquet and ball.5·/˘··
My lip hath its smiles and its sneers,8········
For all men to see;5·····
But my soul, and my truth, and my tears,9·········
Are for thee, are for thee!6······
Around me they flatter and fawn--8····/˘··
The young and the old.5·····
The fairest are ready to pawn8·/˘·/˘··
Their hearts for my gold.5·····
They sue me--I laugh as I spurn8········
The slaves at my knee;5·····
But in faith and in fondness I turn9·····/˘··
Unto thee, unto thee!6······

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