To His Serving Boy

William Makepeace Thackeray (1811–1863) · 1849–1855

trochaic trimeter · unrhymed · 14 lines · from Ballads

Persicos odiPuer, apparatus;Displicent nexaePhilyrâ coronae:Mitte sectari,Rosa qua locorumSera moretur.

Simplici myrtoNihil allaboresSedulus, curo:Neque te ministrumDedecet myrtus,Neque me sub arctâVite bibentem.

Words in this poem

puer n.
The dung of dogs, used as an alkaline steep in tanning. [Etymol. uncertain.]
nihil n.
Nothing. Nihil album Etym: [L., white nothing] (Chem.), oxide of zinc. See under Zinc. [L.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

To His Serving Boy is in the public domain. This text is taken from Ballads, Project Gutenberg ebook #2732; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: William Makepeace Thackeray, To His Serving Boy, in Ballads (1849–1855), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #2732, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/thackeray-ballads/to-his-serving-boy.html, id L10375.

Form and metre

To His Serving Boy is 14 lines in 2 verse paragraphs. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. The metre is trochaic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 95%). 98% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 4.9 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 50% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 --AA--- odi · apparatus · nexaeA · coronaeA · sectari · locorum · moretur
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Persicos odi5˘/˘··
Puer, apparatus;6/˘·˘/˘
Displicent nexae4····
Philyrâ coronae:4····
Mitte sectari,6///···
Rosa qua locorum6/˘····
Sera moretur.5/˘···
Simplici myrto5·····
Nihil allabores5/˘···
Sedulus, curo:5·····
Neque te ministrum5·····
Dedecet myrtus,5·····
Neque me sub arctâ4····
Vite bibentem.4····

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