The Lotos Eaters
First published in 1833, but when republished in 1842 the alterationsin the way of excision, alteration, and addition were very extensive.The text of 1842 is practically the final text.
“Courage!” he said, and pointed toward the land,“This mounting wave will roll us shoreward soon.”In the afternoon they came unto a land,In which it seemed always afternoon.All round the coast the languid air did swoon,Breathing like one that hath a weary dream.Full-faced above the valley stood the moon;And like a downward smoke, the slender streamAlong the cliff to fall and pause and fall did seem.
A land of streams! some, like a downward smoke,Slow-dropping veils of thinnest lawn, did go;And some thro’ wavering lights and shadows broke,Rolling a slumbrous sheet of foam below.They saw the gleaming river seaward flowFrom the inner land: far off, three mountain-tops,Three silent pinnacles of aged snow,Stood sunset-flush’d: and, dew’d with showery drops,Up-clomb the shadowy pine above the woven copse.
The charmed sunset linger’d low adownIn the red West: thro’ mountain clefts the daleWas seen far inland, and the yellow downBorder’d with palm, and many a winding valeAnd meadow, set with slender galingale;A land where all things always seem’d the same!And round about the keel with faces pale,Dark faces pale against that rosy flame,The mild-eyed melancholy Lotos-eaters came.
Branches they bore of that enchanted stem,Laden with flower and fruit, whereof they gaveTo each, but whoso did receive of them,And taste, to him the gushing of the waveFar far away did seem to mourn and raveOn alien shores; and if his fellow spake,His voice was thin, as voices from the grave;And deep-asleep he seem’d, yet all awake,And music in his ears his beating heart did make.
They sat them down upon the yellow sand,Between the sun and moon upon the shore;And sweet it was to dream of Father-land,Of child, and wife, and slave; but evermoreMost weary seem’d the sea, weary the oar,Weary the wandering fields of barren foam.Then some one said, “We will return no more”;And all at once they sang, “Our island homeIs far beyond the wave; we will no longer roam”.
Words in this poem
- shoreward adv.
- Toward the shore.
- afternoon n.
- The part of the day which follows noon, between noon and evening.
- broke v. i.
- To transact business for another. Brome. [See Broker, and cf. Brook.]
- slumbrous a.
- Slumberous. Keats.
- seaward a.
- Directed or situated toward the sea. Donne.
- showery a.
- Raining in showers; abounding with frequent showers of rain.
- copse n.
- A wood of small growth; a thicket of brushwood. See Coppice. [Contr. from coppice.]
- adown adv.
- From a higher to a lower situation; downward; down, to or on the ground. [OE. adun, adoun, adune. AS. of dune off the hill. See Down.]
- vale n.
- A tract of low ground, or of land between hills; a valley. [OE. val, F. val, L. vallis; perhaps akin to Gr. Avalanche, Vail to lower, Valley.]
- galingale n.
- A plant of the Sedge family (Cyperus longus) having aromatic roots; also, any plant of the same genus. [See Galangal.]
- enchanted a.
- Under the power of enchantment; possessed or exercised by enchanters; as, an enchanted castle.
- whereof adv.
- Of which; of whom; formerly, also, with which; -- used relatively.
- whoso pron.
- Whosoever. Piers Plowman.
- evermore adv.
- During eternity; always; forever; for an indefinite period; at all times; -- often used substantively with for.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
The Lotos Eaters is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Early Poems of Alfred Lord Tennyson, Project Gutenberg ebook #8601; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Alfred Tennyson, The Lotos Eaters, in The Early Poems (1830–1842), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #8601, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/tennyson-early-poems/the-lotos-eaters.html, id L16540.
Form and metre
The Lotos Eaters is 48 lines in 6 stanzas. The rhyme scheme is ABABBCBCC, complete in 5 of its 6 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%). 89% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.5 syllables. 3 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 25% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 2 ABABBCBCC landA · soonB · landA · afternoonB · swoonB · dreamC · moonB · streamC · seemC
- 3 ABABBCBCC smokeA · goB · brokeA · belowB · flowB · topsC · snowB · dropsC · copseC
- 4 ABABBCBCC adownA · daleB · downA · valeB · galingaleB · sameC · paleB · flameC · cameC
- 5 ABABBCBCC stemA · gaveB · themA · waveB · raveB · spakeC · graveB · awakeC · makeC
- 6 ABABBCBCC sandA · shoreB · landA · evermoreB · oarB · foamC · moreB · homeC · roamC
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| First published in 1833, but when republished in 1842 the alterations | 15 | ·/˘·········˘/˘ |
| in the way of excision, alteration, and addition were very extensive. | 21 | ····˘/˘·˘/˘·˘/˘·/˘˘/˘ |
| The text of 1842 is practically the final text. | 10 | ····/˘·/˘· |
| “Courage!” he said, and pointed toward the land, | 11 | /˘···/˘···· |
| “This mounting wave will roll us shoreward soon.” | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| In the afternoon they came unto a land, | 11 | ···˘/······ |
| In which it seemed always afternoon. | 9 | ····/··˘/ |
| All round the coast the languid air did swoon, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Breathing like one that hath a weary dream. | 10 | /˘·····/˘· |
| Full-faced above the valley stood the moon; | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| And like a downward smoke, the slender stream | 9 | ···/··/˘· |
| Along the cliff to fall and pause and fall did seem. | 12 | ˘/·········· |
| A land of streams! some, like a downward smoke, | 9 | ·······/· |
| Slow-dropping veils of thinnest lawn, did go; | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| And some thro’ wavering lights and shadows broke, | 10 | ···/˘··/·· |
| Rolling a slumbrous sheet of foam below. | 10 | /˘·/˘····· |
| They saw the gleaming river seaward flow | 10 | ···/˘/˘/˘· |
| From the inner land: far off, three mountain-tops, | 11 | ··/˘····/˘· |
| Three silent pinnacles of aged snow, | 8 | ·/˘/˘··· |
| Stood sunset-flush’d: and, dew’d with showery drops, | 11 | ·/·····/˘˘· |
| Up-clomb the shadowy pine above the woven copse. | 12 | ···/˘····/˘· |
| The charmed sunset linger’d low adown | 9 | ··/·/˘·˘/ |
| In the red West: thro’ mountain clefts the dale | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Was seen far inland, and the yellow down | 10 | ···/···/˘· |
| Border’d with palm, and many a winding vale | 10 | /˘···/·/˘· |
| And meadow, set with slender galingale; | 10 | ·/···/˘/˘˘ |
| A land where all things always seem’d the same! | 10 | ·····/···· |
| And round about the keel with faces pale, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Dark faces pale against that rosy flame, | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| The mild-eyed melancholy Lotos-eaters came. | 12 | ···/˘·˘/˘/˘· |
| Branches they bore of that enchanted stem, | 10 | /˘····˘/˘· |
| Laden with flower and fruit, whereof they gave | 10 | /˘·/······ |
| To each, but whoso did receive of them, | 10 | ···/˘·˘/·· |
| And taste, to him the gushing of the wave | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Far far away did seem to mourn and rave | 10 | ··˘/······ |
| On alien shores; and if his fellow spake, | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| His voice was thin, as voices from the grave; | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| And deep-asleep he seem’d, yet all awake, | 10 | ··˘/····˘/ |
| And music in his ears his beating heart did make. | 12 | ·/˘····/˘··· |
| They sat them down upon the yellow sand, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Between the sun and moon upon the shore; | 10 | ·········· |
| And sweet it was to dream of Father-land, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Of child, and wife, and slave; but evermore | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Most weary seem’d the sea, weary the oar, | 10 | ·/˘···/˘·· |
| Weary the wandering fields of barren foam. | 10 | /˘·/˘··/˘· |
| Then some one said, “We will return no more”; | 10 | ······˘/·· |
| And all at once they sang, “Our island home | 10 | ······//˘· |
| Is far beyond the wave; we will no longer roam”. | 12 | ·········/˘· |
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